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Re: The Official Post Your Own Poetry Thread. [Re: akira_akuma] 2
#23919647 - 12/12/16 01:37 PM (7 years, 1 month ago) |
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akira_akuma said: there once was a tiny mouse who thought the cheeseblock on my head was a house so i laid out some Brandy chocolates and he became drunk and a louse he shot some smack smattered, more dazed then a spouse
who's blouse is as loose as a mouse
go fuck yourself
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Re: The Official Post Your Own Poetry Thread. [Re: pineninja] 3
#23919784 - 12/12/16 02:18 PM (7 years, 1 month ago) |
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I'm on the vibe with complexities for simplicities sake... And the strangeness; which hopefully does not toil too much? Strange in common lands 'abustle.
(Wayfarer)
We are often a-thought, to pass too far, To bridge a stranger's stay, But in ourselves to live a day on nods, We'll know our farer's way....
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Re: The Official Post Your Own Poetry Thread. [Re: ModestMouse] 1
#23919848 - 12/12/16 02:35 PM (7 years, 1 month ago) |
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Gotta admit akira's got a knack for those
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Re: The Official Post Your Own Poetry Thread. [Re: Reprobate420] 2
#23924166 - 12/13/16 08:26 PM (7 years, 1 month ago) |
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Reprobate420 said: The dichotomy of nature The duality of time We are frozen in the present Unperturbed by paradigms We are the nexus of disorder With complex, dynamic minds Opposite, attractive forces We are the neutrons in nuclei We are the equinox, the solstice We are everything in between We are all the colors in the spectrum We are the shadows that go unseen We are an infinite regression We are as finite as a dream We are a million shades of gray We are the singularity

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Re: The Official Post Your Own Poetry Thread. [Re: DividedQuantum] 2
#23924394 - 12/13/16 09:45 PM (7 years, 1 month ago) |
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If you think you have the answer it's just that you haven't been asked the right question. We file away these mistaken absolutes as if we're moving foward without exception. We persuade ourselves with the necessity of senses. The loss of reason because we cannot take chances.
Forget what you think you know because I am wrong. Detach yourself from yourself life's not long. The start is so far away and getting further and further. Though you can finish it, self murder.
Question everything that feels right. Don't ever settle, always fight. Comfort is a main driving force and the cloud. Peace and quite this side of the intellectual shroud.
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Re: The Official Post Your Own Poetry Thread. [Re: pineninja] 3
#23924516 - 12/13/16 10:23 PM (7 years, 1 month ago) |
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Broke-jaw Jones
Met a man named Broke-jaw Jones In a tired winter moor
His skin was sour, and eyes sunk back With mannerisms poor
Jones stared me up and sized me down Let out a wheezing hiss
Jaw gave way, few words fell out Picked em up as this:
"Take these talcum treasures kid Then go and use them well No "if you dont"'s Or "no i wont"'s The boss will give me hell"
I looked up and shook my head, took his powdered plea Though jones flew south n robbed me blind Tomorow, I will see.
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pineninja
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Re: The Official Post Your Own Poetry Thread. [Re: ModestMouse] 2
#23924562 - 12/13/16 10:40 PM (7 years, 1 month ago) |
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Powdered truths. Momentary sleuths. Twisted sales. Broken tales.
Weakened fibers. Structured liars. Passing desperation. Longterm depravation.
Tightening snare. Lessening care. Broken thoughts. Sleepless haunts.
Evil beiged. Promises caged. Slippery slope. Dissappearing hope.
Say no. Don't go. Life's powder. Live prouder.
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Re: The Official Post Your Own Poetry Thread. [Re: pineninja]
#23924592 - 12/13/16 10:56 PM (7 years, 1 month ago) |
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'Jones is from last december but never typed it up just scratched on paper and forgot about
Held up well in my eyes when I saw it heres to hoping for a less eerie year
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Re: The Official Post Your Own Poetry Thread. [Re: ModestMouse] 2
#23924607 - 12/13/16 11:06 PM (7 years, 1 month ago) |
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I liked it, very evocative. "Jaw gave way, few words fell out Picked em up as this:" clever.
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Re: The Official Post Your Own Poetry Thread. [Re: pineninja] 1
#23924789 - 12/14/16 12:54 AM (7 years, 1 month ago) |
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Come, brother Give me another one of your legendary wedgies
I'll slip right out Turn it into a dance.
I'll stand here naked Be someone for you to laugh at
Ice cold shame, Man's greatest fear Used with honour, By all these proud boys
I've come to learn How to disappear
Under spotlights And through sights.
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Re: The Official Post Your Own Poetry Thread. [Re: remake] 2
#23925518 - 12/14/16 10:44 AM (7 years, 1 month ago) |
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Scrapping the 2000 Ford Taurus
You brought me to Buffalo You brought me to Erie You brought me to heroin Go fuck yourself
You brought me to beggers You brought me to saints You brought me to gamestop Go fuck yourself
You brought me to Rochester Pawn stores and Wallgreens You brought me to therapy Go fuck yourself
You rusty son of a bitch I will miss you and that hair-pin gas pedal Or the hiding spot under the dash Go fuck yourself
Turn your body to bones And bones into cash You stole so much from me Go fuck yourself
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Re: The Official Post Your Own Poetry Thread. [Re: ModestMouse]
#23925741 - 12/14/16 11:58 AM (7 years, 1 month ago) |
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I am really loving reading everyone's poetry. Cheers!!
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#23925743 - 12/14/16 11:58 AM (7 years, 1 month ago) |
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As the breeze blows through the trees Mother Gaia, unleashed her sneeze And as it crosses the sea With such ease It finds its way towards me... I cling to the aroma Of summer, of autumn, of spring Like awakening from a coma As the songbirds poetically sing... I embrace the scents Of the moss... Of the flowers... Of everything... My senses, oh so acute I feel I'm in a dream In this awe-inspiring view This landscape, of the serene... But then the modern age appears I can hear it in the distance A cacophony fired upon my ears It makes me cringe... It makes me wince... It's the epitome of all my fears... The loggers and miners are coming Gaia's nemesis, has been summoned And there is no point of running Soon, this forest... Will be reduced... Into nothing... Forgive me, Mother For my species' greed Before we depart... I'll fill my pockets with seed... Know that I will hold you In my heart... And I will honour you... With my humble art
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#23927938 - 12/14/16 10:41 PM (7 years, 1 month ago) |
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You said you'd never leave. Of that I could be sure. Pillar of everything. I watched walk out my childhood door.
The house tumbled The family broke. You're self importance lacking. But of this you never spoke.
I cried for days alone. They went without time. Sitting in that house. Just moments before a home.
It was rougher on the rest. But you don't care. Its all about you. Finally of my chest.
Looking back now as a man. What you did to him was wrong. Hurting as much as possible. Almost like it was too plan.
The girls have never gotten over it. You should be ashamed. You told them first. Then gave their rock the blame.
I can see now through all your lies. It was always about you. Your altruistic veneer. Hiding selfish eye's.
You were in control insidiously. Threatening in private. Loving when not. Yet to meet another live so capriciously.
That was the hardest part. You trapped me and knew it. Threats psycological. Daggers in the heart.
Then you ran away. As if an actor in your favorite play. The drama unfolded with them pleading. Just like in the shitty mags you kept reading.
I was happier after you left. It happened rather suddenly. You probably wanted us to be bereft. The freedom from you the best give anyone ever gave me.
You made my life hell. And you know it. Taking out your hate. On the one thing you couldn't sell.
I hope you're not happy. And I hate that. I'm still not completely past it. A bit of me stuck fast, were I cried and sat.
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Re: The Official Post Your Own Poetry Thread. [Re: pineninja] 2
#23932877 - 12/16/16 04:08 PM (7 years, 1 month ago) |
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Anti-Prolix
Do not be excessive Resort to prolixity Set your restraints A warm, couth fixity
Do not be heavy If that's your propensity Amalgamate pith A medium density
Do not be stubborn A shade of obdurate Permit an instruction Friendly and moderate
Do not be a snob Absurdly pedantic It's almost as bad As a hopeless romantic
Do not be vulgar In other words rude Not a one cares to Suffer such a mood
Do not pay attention To the admonishments here Think for yourself And don't reason austere
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Re: The Official Post Your Own Poetry Thread. [Re: pineninja] 1
#23932971 - 12/16/16 04:40 PM (7 years, 1 month ago) |
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wow, ninja.
turns out mom's can be floozies. mine is the same way. veneer of altruism but she's really not altruistic. she's still a kind soul but...only with age. i'm sure she's changed- but not really.
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Re: The Official Post Your Own Poetry Thread. [Re: akira_akuma] 2
#23939409 - 12/18/16 10:49 PM (7 years, 1 month ago) |
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Suspension of rationale
I spoke with someone yesterday Whos fortnight had just passed We talked about his favorite way To make the future last
Precious snow on pine trees weep No emotions too evoke Did I mention that to you just now Or the last time that we spoke?
The voices in my head are gone Tomorow they'll be back They'll start as whispers, moans than groans Roar loud like whips that crack
Youre the master im the slave And Time's a fickle fool But I was promised all the keys You said youd let me rule
Sure kingdoms made of klonopin Are soon to cave their way Yet this beats dope, so fuck the pope Our castle is where ill stay
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Re: The Official Post Your Own Poetry Thread. [Re: ModestMouse] 2
#23941903 - 12/19/16 10:27 PM (7 years, 1 month ago) |
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excess is abscess eruption is conduction entropy it's a beautiful thing keepgoing dontletgo, youwalkwithdeath andnowyouknow ifbeliefisntsomethingconsciouslychosentheniguessyoudontbelieve
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#23941979 - 12/19/16 11:06 PM (7 years, 1 month ago) |
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Pain and deceptions mingle like old friends. Chatting to anybody with a foolish ears to lend. Come with us they say and get some relief. Leave your struggles behind it just takes belief.
Salvation from the mundane, an ever brighter day. But be careful. One hand giveth the other taketh away.
At some point, maybe, real questions may need to be scrutinized. Its at this point they'll ask you to avert your eyes. Its just a puppet show and seeing behind the screen. Will only leave you wishing to give your ears a good clean.
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Re: The Official Post Your Own Poetry Thread. [Re: pineninja] 1
#23942077 - 12/19/16 11:55 PM (7 years, 1 month ago) |
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Walking pictures Of memories From yesterday Slide accross this plane Grasping for fact Ripped from fiction
Wearing The marauder's hat
"This guy's a sly cat" "Yeah, yeah, nasty scummy, man"
Lay it down, and lay it on
I'm set for death I'm set for broke Yes, I'm fucked, oh brother
I'd just like to be away From all the choke And shit Chat
I'm happy with a bed and some space I'm happy with some air I'll be happy When I'm ripped apart
I Just Won't Care
Raped Laughing Monkeys Fucking Your Innocence
Knowing Your Mind Reading Your Thoughts Determining Your Ways
Silly fucking game
You don't give, no, You're mind's fucked to such an extent You only figure, like a player in a selfish dream, separating, delegating. Look real close, rose lilly lipstick silly dilly dick lips,
I'm you And we are all nothing. You better fucking take care of me.
But come, Inviting you to do it again, Read my head And read these words Read my mind Come and find
All the shit you see in me Is all covered around those Puckered lips Attached to you.
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