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Offlineplektheplek
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New poem * 2
    #23697382 - 10/01/16 02:29 PM (7 years, 3 months ago)

I killed myself
To watch the angels' reaction
I've known pain
I've known satisfaction
I've held her close
And I've pushed her away
Sometimes it's blue
Today the sky is oh so grey
Repair my mind
For years it's been on the fritz
I invested all I had
But they couldn't give two shits
Maybe tomorrow it won't hurt so bad
I was the best she ever had

Scream louder
God must be mowing the lawn
He's always oblivious
To what's goin on
She cuts herself
In the bowling alley bathroom
She cuts herself
To escape her mind

One more toke
One more lie
One more hymn
One more high
One more beast
One more leash
One more death
One more feast


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Invisiblemoonrockmushy
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Re: New poem [Re: plektheplek] * 2
    #23697387 - 10/01/16 02:31 PM (7 years, 3 months ago)

I think the last line should read, "One more feast nigga".  Consider it :sadyes: otherwise good


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InvisibleModestMouse
IM WALKIN ON SUNSHINE
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Loc: Upstate
Re: New poem [Re: moonrockmushy] * 1
    #23697405 - 10/01/16 02:40 PM (7 years, 3 months ago)

It reads like a song
Watch your syllable count if you're not consciously deciding to make it funky you're gonna want to keep a pattern. Im glad you shared cause not enough people do


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