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Anonymous #1

A poem * 6
    #23594571 - 08/30/16 05:56 PM (7 years, 5 months ago)

(redacted)
my love
I miss
you
I wish
I could
help you
but
I can't
You
don't
deserve
to
be
trapped
in
loneliness
but
I can't
be there
for you
in the
isolation
of your
heart
but
I feel
your
wounds
as
my
own.

When I
wake up
in the
morning
you are
on my
mind
and
you are
in my
heart.
Your
wounds
are
my wounds
My attentions
smother
as my
love
smothers
my heart
When
will you
see
these
words
bled
from
my heart?
How long
must I
wait?

(redacted)
Where
are
you?
What
are you
doing?
How
are
you
feeling?
When
your
haunted
slumber
ends
what
or
who
is
in
your
heart?
I want
to join
you
in your
night
mares
to
protect
you
from your
demons
as you
sleep
in peace
and
contentment
(redacted)
Please
Let me
ease
your
burden
Let me
feel your
pain for you
so you
can
sleep
blissfully
and dream
of green
pastures
and
perfect
happiness
and
awaken
smiling
kissed
by a
gentle sun
safe
safe
safe
in your
lover's
arms
I
love
you
my
beautiful
warrior
(redacted)
Every
minute
that
arrives
fills me
with
hope
that
it will
be
your
minute
for me
for us
the
first
of
many
I
pray And as
my thoughts Of you
erupt From the margins
of my Thoughts
onto The vast empty slate of the
future I pray we fill
together
                And they turn
with Dread to the
terrible Reckoning
fear That you will never hear
the song Of my heart
that My love
is like A monster
praying To prey
upon Your love's
wounded And vulnerable
tears
          But my yearnings cannot be contained by the margins
          They gnaw upon my heart
I pray The future upon which
I write Large, the declarations
of my Deferred longing for the
present
stay
forever,
in An earthly
Paradise In your clasped hands
                In your gentle embrace
                In the warmth of your breath
upon The sweetness of your lips
my neck And
the strength Of your love, as certain
as
your Beauty.

--8/30/16

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OfflineCrumist
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Re: A poem [Re: Anonymous #1] * 1
    #23599348 - 08/31/16 10:19 PM (7 years, 5 months ago)

I like it *snaps*


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Re: A poem [Re: Crumist] * 1
    #23599747 - 09/01/16 01:56 AM (7 years, 5 months ago)

that is a pretty fantastic poem.

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Anonymous #1

Re: A poem [Re: akira_akuma]
    #23599785 - 09/01/16 02:22 AM (7 years, 5 months ago)

Tanks guise :nyan:

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Re: A poem [Re: Anonymous #1] * 1
    #23599794 - 09/01/16 02:28 AM (7 years, 5 months ago)

i like the yearnings cannot be contained by the margins part, very fitting that those particular lines are not contained within the margins, and by the by, you have a great flow too, i like the enjambment. it's very melodious.

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Re: A poem [Re: akira_akuma] * 1
    #23599800 - 09/01/16 02:32 AM (7 years, 5 months ago)

Wonderful. I also enjoyed how you played with the structure.:thumbup:


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Re: A poem [Re: Anonymous #1] * 1
    #23602639 - 09/01/16 08:32 PM (7 years, 5 months ago)

That almost made me cry, anon#1.

I'm going through something impeccably similar... I don't know whether or not you wrote this about your present circumstances, something you imagined or the past,
but lord have mercy I know that feel.

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Anonymous #1

Re: A poem [Re: Chakra Shock]
    #23606615 - 09/02/16 11:14 PM (7 years, 5 months ago)

Present circumstances :frown:

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Anonymous #1

Re: A poem [Re: Anonymous #1]
    #23618147 - 09/06/16 12:58 PM (7 years, 5 months ago)

my beautiful one is safe, and my mania is over... I don't know what the future holds for us but I can finally sleep peacefully again knowing she's safe.

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Re: A poem [Re: Anonymous #1] * 1
    #23618153 - 09/06/16 01:01 PM (7 years, 5 months ago)

I'm still hanging onto the edge of the cliff, arm outstretched. I hope to hear of her return to balance soon, but your poem is still relevant to me, man :sun:

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Anonymous #1

Re: A poem [Re: Chakra Shock]
    #23622825 - 09/07/16 05:27 PM (7 years, 5 months ago)

.

Edited by Anonymous (09/07/16 07:47 PM)

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Anonymous #2

Re: A poem [Re: Chakra Shock]
    #23624590 - 09/08/16 02:57 AM (7 years, 5 months ago)

Kinda in that position too only I know she won't be coming back.

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Anonymous #1

Re: A poem [Re: Anonymous #2] * 1
    #23628286 - 09/09/16 07:49 AM (7 years, 5 months ago)

Wellp, I'm in hell and my therapist is on vacation.

All I can think about is her... All I care about is her... There's nothing left but her, my days are spent uselessly tagging along with her company or deep in pining. I don't know how to carry on. I don't know how to take care of myself. I don't know how to stay focused on my responsibilities. I don't know what the future holds for us. I don't know how to ask. I don't even know how to talk to my friends anymore. I don't know how to talk to my fucking PARENTS anymore. I can't even shitpost anymore. There is nothing left. I might as well be dead. My friends tried to warn me, but they were too late.

I hate love. This is a terrible disease. I wonder if I will ever recover.

Edited by Anonymous (09/09/16 09:45 AM)

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Re: A poem [Re: Anonymous #1]
    #23630662 - 09/09/16 09:10 PM (7 years, 5 months ago)

You will recover, good sir, simply gather your will, every last ounce of it, and spend two hours doing something specifically for yourself without any interruption of thought or action.

The next time you do something like that, it will only be easier!

Go get some groceries, take a deep breath, exercise and maybe let her know that you need to take some time for yourself for a few days, to reconvene with your heart, friends and family. Love is important, relationships are important, but you can't effectively engage in any of that if you are not taking care of yourself.

I know what it's like to be fully devoted to someone, but if it is having a negative effect on your life then you need to ask yourself about the nature of your devotion: is it an addiction, or true compassion and love? Only you can answer that, but it seems like you would do yourself a favor by taking some time to yourself.

Best of luck! :peace: :heart:

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Anonymous #1

Re: A poem [Re: Chakra Shock]
    #23642432 - 09/13/16 06:01 PM (7 years, 5 months ago)

"So you're obviously highly intelligent," she said. "What do you do with that? What's your outlet?"

I hesitated before admitting: "Mostly, I shitpost."

She took a moment to regain her composure. "Armchair general, huh?"

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Anonymous #1

Re: A poem [Re: Anonymous #1] * 2
    #23665345 - 09/21/16 03:08 PM (7 years, 5 months ago)

She just said that she loves me...

I'm almost in shock... I'm so happy that I've been able not only to tend to her wounds but to have my love returned... It feels like a miracle...

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Re: A poem [Re: Anonymous #1] * 1
    #23666205 - 09/21/16 08:04 PM (7 years, 5 months ago)

I love you dude! :P  Still lingering in the dense clouds of silence and possibility. My love goes to her on the winds of fate.

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