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Dim ethyl
As below so above



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feedback and opinions on my music
#23603750 - 09/02/16 05:40 AM (7 years, 4 months ago) |
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Hey howz it gohan shroomery? I was wondering if I could get some honest feedback on this song I wrote? I find it hard to play infront of people I get so nervous and it gets difficult to lose myself in the music. Hoping to get some positive feed back and a new found confidence so I'm able to start busking and maybe one day play gigs maybe even making a living doing what I love because that's the dream right?
Please tell me if I suck and should find a new hobby haha
Peace & Love
-------------------- “Today a young man on acid realized that all matter is merely energy condensed to a slow vibration, that we are all one consciousness experiencing itself subjectively, there is no such thing as death, life is only a dream, and we are the imagination of ourselves. Heres Tom with the Weather.” -Bill Hicks
 
Edited by Dim ethyl (09/02/16 06:21 AM)
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Masked
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Re: feedback and opinions on my music [Re: Dim ethyl]
#23603820 - 09/02/16 06:34 AM (7 years, 4 months ago) |
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Welcome! Nice to have another fellow musician kicking around. 
Now feedback...
The good
- i think you are a solid guitar player. You have been playing awhile it would seem. How long may I ask? You have a good sense of rhythm and I like the arrangement.
- I think the lyrics are good
- I think the melody/vocal track you have needs work/polishing but I really dig it
The negative
- you seem like me. A guitarist first, singer second. Your singing needs some work. You don't project and don't sing from the diaphragm. You have to learn to belt it out there while staying in key. You whisper sing in many parts. It's just a confidence thing mainly
- the production. I understand you just record yourself quickly to share, but it doesn't do you justice. Invest in a proper USB microphone and take advantage of one of the many free recording programs. I found it difficult to distinguish your vocals and guitar at many points. If you are going to get into sharing your music, learn how to make it sound the way you intended people to hear it 
I dig your song man and if busking is your thing, that sort of playing will get people's positive attention.
Keep practicing and good work
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Dim ethyl
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Re: feedback and opinions on my music [Re: Masked]
#23603864 - 09/02/16 07:06 AM (7 years, 4 months ago) |
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Thanks heaps for the feed back dude really appreciate you taking the time to have a listen and leave a comment 
I've been playing about 8 years now but only recently started writing songs and singing (singing definitely not my strongest point)
Confidence Is definitely my biggest barrier. It really is a confidence boost to get a compliment from a stranger I've played to my girl friend before, but I worry she is bias and can't be honest with me so thanks again dude I'm going to look into buying some recording equipment I'd really like to start taking this all really seriously and chase my dreams like we all should but few do
Peace & love brother
-------------------- “Today a young man on acid realized that all matter is merely energy condensed to a slow vibration, that we are all one consciousness experiencing itself subjectively, there is no such thing as death, life is only a dream, and we are the imagination of ourselves. Heres Tom with the Weather.” -Bill Hicks
 
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something super extreme
NIGGA YOU A FUCK NIGGA!


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Re: feedback and opinions on my music [Re: Dim ethyl]
#23603908 - 09/02/16 07:34 AM (7 years, 4 months ago) |
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sounded like a bucketful of nuns farting in a helicopter
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Dim ethyl
As below so above



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Awesome! That's the sound I was going for
-------------------- “Today a young man on acid realized that all matter is merely energy condensed to a slow vibration, that we are all one consciousness experiencing itself subjectively, there is no such thing as death, life is only a dream, and we are the imagination of ourselves. Heres Tom with the Weather.” -Bill Hicks
 
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