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This small written story hits close to home
    #23568154 - 08/23/16 05:01 AM (7 years, 5 months ago)

I stood in front of myself. I, or he, seemed so wise, so enlightened.
Like I had always tried to be.
He saw my reaction, and smiled. "Who did you expect? For all the pain you've caused, you've made no one suffer more than yourself."
I shook my head. I had never been easy on myself, that was certain, but I had caused far more harm to anyone I'd ever loved. I didn't even belong in heaven in the first place.
"You always wanted to be the best. To be perfect. You created an unachievable goal, knowing you'd never reach it, so that you'd work harder and harder each day. You never allowed yourself to be content, because contentment gives room for mediocrity - and out of all the sins you've committed, that was that only one you felt unforgivable."
I tried to speak, but he interrupted me, his voice raising.
"You wanted to be everything you never could. You strove for perfection, and you let it eat away at you. You idealist. You masochist. You stupid, stupid man."
I'd had enough. "But it forced me to become better. It forced me to strive, to work harder and harder-"
"It forced you to hate yourself. To never be happy with any achievement, no matter how great. To toil, day in and day out, working for your flawed goals. You accomplished plenty, sure, - but it was a double-edged sword, with the sharper edge always pointing towards you."
He seemed to grow in stature, and he glared at me with a fiery fury.
"You broke yourself from the inside, and you never allowed yourself to be fixed, lest you lose that burning desire to become better. And look where it brought you. Look what it made you do. Look at how you ended it."
I tried to reply, but the realisation brought me to my knees. He walked towards me, and took my hand. He looked me in the eyes.
"Don't cry," he said, lifting me up, "this isn't the Old Testament. God will understand. Suicide is not unforgivable."

-croatianspy, reddit user


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Re: This small written story hits close to home [Re: duster]
    #23568156 - 08/23/16 05:04 AM (7 years, 5 months ago)

then my mom got scared she said ur movin with ur aunty and uncle in Bel Aire


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Re: This small written story hits close to home [Re: something super extreme]
    #23568159 - 08/23/16 05:08 AM (7 years, 5 months ago)

Quote:

something super extreme said:
then my mom got scared she said ur movin with ur aunty and uncle in Bel Aire




oh sorry I must be posting in off topic forum.


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Re: This small written story hits close to home [Re: duster]
    #23568161 - 08/23/16 05:10 AM (7 years, 5 months ago)

well the story sucks so I thought I'd be a bro and help you save face, but if you're gonna be that way then nope.

That story was some fresh USDA certified 100% dog shit tier GARBAGE


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Re: This small written story hits close to home [Re: duster]
    #23568165 - 08/23/16 05:13 AM (7 years, 5 months ago)

This story is worser:

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Framdar “The Slayer” Deathkiller swung — it was a mighty swing, though a might less mighty than it might have been for his mind was thinking thoughts of his father who he had never known but if he had he thought must have been a mighty warrior indeed, which unbeknownst to Framdar was actually far from the truth, for his father had been a humble farmer, which didn’t really matter anyway since Framdar’s magical birth meant that he had no real father, as the prophecy had prophesized, making him the only man who could defeat this beast — his vorpal sword at the beast.

The beast moved with unthinkable speed, Framdar thought, and looked like a dalek crossed with a mind flayer.

“WHAT DOEST THOU!!!” the beast exploded infuriously as he cackled and pointed at Framdar, spitting on the ground and jumping out of the way as he raised his own sword.

Framdar remembered when he was five and raised his first sword. (Insert flashback here, perhaps having to do with how his brother took him to a whorehouse and the whore made him the best potato stew ever?! Return to present.)

Framdar circled the beast back and forth. He could see his reflection in his opponent’s sword blade — his flowing blonde hair, eyes as blue as the sky, square strong jaw, a face that women found irresistible and men wanted to be — as his heart beat in his chest and his lungs heaved, also in his chest. He placed his left foot and then his right. And then his left again. And then his right. Followed by his left. And continued to step as he moved. Framdar admired the way the beast stepped. The beast impregnated with pride at Framdar’s admiration.

“You know that even,” the beast sneered mockingly, “if you kill me now you are still doomed,” the beast gloated gleefully. “For my people have burned the great black ooze that comes up from the ground where the binoshaurs died many moons ago and can be used to power our great machines, causing your world’s temperatures to rise and the great icelands to melt, but we paid the Predublican wizards’ council to deny the truth until now it is too late, and there is nothing you can do!! … !”

Framdar cursed. “If only we had been proactive and stood up to the wizards’ council sooner we might have stopped our doom. But I shall see that you join our fate!”

Framdar hit the button on the wall, and the beast was shot out of the airlock, its scream fading into the dark black night of space as Framdar held his breath and laughed.




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Let it be seen that you are nothing. And in knowing that you are nothing... there is nothing to lose, there is nothing to gain. What can happen to you? Something can happen to the body, but it will either heal or it won't. What's the big deal? Let life knock you to bits. Let life take you apart. Let life destroy you. It will only destroy what you are not.
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Re: This small written story hits close to home [Re: Jokeshopbeard]
    #23568166 - 08/23/16 05:15 AM (7 years, 5 months ago)

I saw Framdar at the dave matthews show in '97


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Re: This small written story hits close to home [Re: something super extreme]
    #23568171 - 08/23/16 05:19 AM (7 years, 5 months ago)

he was pretty cool with that mouth guitar thing but i didnt know peter framdar was into vorping


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Re: This small written story hits close to home [Re: something super extreme]
    #23568173 - 08/23/16 05:21 AM (7 years, 5 months ago)

WTF, that shit's real? I just quickly googled for 'worst short story ever'.

pwnd.


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