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it's very hard to write decent poetry when you can't guage other's real opinions about it.. I don't write poetry for myself- I have everything in my mind that I want to know about my feelings. If you think the poem I'm about to post is incredibly lame, could you please tell me why you think so? If you like a part of it, please tell me you do. ok.. that said
i recently wrote this poem, so i havent been able to objectively ( feeling-wise ) review it.. it's kind of short tho, so it shouldn't be too hard to read through :
Silent sitter So warm.. so cold
hopes and dreams joys and comforts extravagant wastes
survival and love passion and work silent escapes
life is bold, shadows dark action the flashlight, we feel aware
reality is lonely light unnverves us we run to hide but find life instead
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