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OfflineJacquesCousteau
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About my father... [poetry or something similar]
    #2241121 - 01/14/04 10:46 AM (13 years, 8 months ago)

This is a poem I wrote about my father a while ago while we were both going through hard times seperately, and I felt that I could not be his shoulder to cry on because I could barely handle the events in my own life.. feel free to comment.

Father
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I'm turning into my father
and pushing him farther away
Though I'd like to help
I am useless and broken
I'm barely alive and awake

He was so kind as to leave me
a gift, though I know he meant well
it left me deserted
in ways I can't tell you
in ways that I know he has felt

But thanks is still due to my father
without this, I'm an empty shell
the dried up remains of a
salesman who's selling
what no one else wanted to sell

The good and the bad from my father
it brings me to bring you a taste
of that which was passed down
both smile and frown
from a man that I could not disgrace.


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Re: About my father... [poetry or something similar] [Re: JacquesCousteau]
    #2241434 - 01/14/04 01:24 PM (13 years, 8 months ago)

I'm not much into poetry but this is nice :smile:

Thanks for sharing


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Re: About my father... [poetry or something similar] [Re: Strumpling]
    #2241505 - 01/14/04 02:10 PM (13 years, 8 months ago)

Well atleast I got a response, even if I had to ask for it in another thread.. :P

Thanks.. :wink:


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Re: About my father... [poetry or something similar] [Re: JacquesCousteau]
    #2241514 - 01/14/04 02:14 PM (13 years, 8 months ago)

its hard for me to reply to poetry because I'm not very familiar with it.... Also, I need to be in a certain mood to really enjoy poetics


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Re: About my father... [poetry or something similar] [Re: Strumpling]
    #2241532 - 01/14/04 02:19 PM (13 years, 8 months ago)

I wasn't bashing your reply or anything, I was just glad I got one.. I can understand that not everyone's down with poetry. :wink:

Edit: this also has a lot to do with kind of specific settings that only certain people could relate to.. it has a lot to do with genetically passed down depression.


Edited by JacquesCousteau (01/14/04 02:26 PM)


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