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a poem for OC
    #22116377 - 08/20/15 11:54 AM (8 years, 5 months ago)

I wrote this a while back, and decided I would like to post it, and dedicate it to OrgoneConclusion to help ease his troubles in some small way.  I hope you enjoy it.


Robotic Love


Who loves not love?
The poet inquires
It goes to the loftiest heights!
What bad ever comes
A full life requires
Someone having it there in their sights!

Though others are not
So rosy about it
I've heard it called 'romantic fog'
Or else just at best
Temporary, so quit
All this chatter 'bout kissing a frog

And then it goes farther
Harsh, blunt, is it truth?
An amalgam of sex and sentimentality
I'm not so sure
It isn't forsooth
But I've never been one for banality

When one has seen love
Go as haywire as I
Have seen it go far in the past
One wonders a bit
And then thinks by an by
It's just a mechanism, but vast

But I have to suppose
That in my good conscience
I couldn't dismiss such sublime
Thoughts and emotions
There isn't a science
Of love, as there isn't of rime


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Re: a poem for OC [Re: DividedQuantum]
    #22121369 - 08/21/15 09:07 AM (8 years, 5 months ago)

cool poem..

are you sure you meant 'rime'?

From the Dictionary:

Rime
1. A white incrustation of ice formed when supercooled water droplets freeze almost instantly on contact with a solid surface.
2. A coating, as of mud or slime, likened to a frosty


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Re: a poem for OC [Re: quinn]
    #22121569 - 08/21/15 09:53 AM (8 years, 5 months ago)

Yes, if you look closely at merriam-webster.com, you will see that 'rime' is a variant of 'rhyme':

Quote:

3 rime, rimester
Definition of RIME
variant of rhyme, rhymester





Actually, the word used to be spelled that way, and I prefer that spelling.  Rhyme is a bastardization of rime + rhythm, and is much newer etymologically.  You can see the word spelled that way in Coleridge's The Rime of the Ancient Mariner, for example.

And thank you for the compliment.


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Re: a poem for OC [Re: DividedQuantum]
    #22121627 - 08/21/15 10:09 AM (8 years, 5 months ago)

A stream, not unfound in time...


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Re: a poem for OC [Re: DividedQuantum]
    #22121658 - 08/21/15 10:18 AM (8 years, 5 months ago)

The first ever poem dedicated to my internal struggles.

:emotionalmoment:


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Re: a poem for OC [Re: DividedQuantum]
    #22122044 - 08/21/15 11:35 AM (8 years, 5 months ago)

Oh, so long ago
I met a fine young girl
Gave to her my world

She never really cared
Never really dared

To let her love flow.

I loved her then
I lover her still

I know that I never will
Fly again.


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Re: a poem for OC [Re: OrgoneConclusion]
    #22122106 - 08/21/15 11:52 AM (8 years, 5 months ago)

:sad:


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Re: a poem for OC [Re: DividedQuantum] * 1
    #22122114 - 08/21/15 11:55 AM (8 years, 5 months ago)

OC/Swami: Bringing sunshine and rainbows to PSP since 1998! :cookiemonster:



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