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help me rewrite this....
#21987179 - 07/23/15 08:32 PM (8 years, 6 months ago) |
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ill be working on my resume later, but for now i am only phishing for smaller interested companies.
I am currently going to school for HVAC and am looking for a company that would allow me to learn and grow with them. At this time I have my universal EPA cert, Preventative Maintenance cert, and my R410a cert. In the next month I will also have my IAQ and Green cert. I am located in XXXXXXXX, but i do not mind traveling. Honestly, I just want to get my foot in the door with a company that understands I am still learning.
Please contact me if you think this might work.
Thank You.
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I am a current HVAC student searching for employment with a global organization that will allow me to learn and grow in the industry. My most recent certifications include XXXXX....
Certifications in progress include.. XXXX...
I willing to travel
References available on request
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I would switch up the "honestly, I just" into a more forward way of saying it.. instead of it sounding like "willing to settle for" into a "currently actively persuing this"... know what I'm saying?
Other than that it looks good to me.
Yeah, what Malcolm said..
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Edited by Amanita86 (07/23/15 08:40 PM)
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Re: help me rewrite this.... [Re: Amanita86]
#21987223 - 07/23/15 08:44 PM (8 years, 6 months ago) |
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thats the thing though. i want to make it clear that im still a student and still learning. i have 0 exp outside of school...
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I think they'll get the message when they look at your job history
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my job history is fine...
i graduate in a few months, but i would like to find a smaller company that is willing to take me under their wing. even if its only on the weekends... i still have a few months before i graduate.
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Quote:
Not Responding said: I am currently going to school for HVAC and am looking for a company that would allow me to learn and grow with them. At this time I have my universal EPA cert, Preventative Maintenance cert, and my R410a cert. In the next month I will also have my IAQ and Green cert. I am located in XXXXXXXX, but i do not mind traveling. Honestly, I just want to get my foot in the door with a company that understands I am still learning.
Please contact me if you think this might work.
Thank You.

To whom it may concern:
I am currently enrolled in an HVAC certification program with an estimated completion date of December 2015. In order to enhance my knowledge of the industry I am also seeking an HVAC apprenticeship. I have several certifications (universal EPA, preventative maintenance, R1410a) and by next month I'll also have my IAQ and green certification.
I would greatly appreciate an opportunity to train with your company. I reside in XXXXXX, but I am willing to travel. If there is an opening, please do not hesitate to call me at XXX XXX XXXX.
Thank you for your consideration.
John ¨HVAC¨ Doe
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