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help me rewrite this....
    #21987179 - 07/23/15 08:32 PM (8 years, 6 months ago)

ill be working on my resume later, but for now i am only phishing for smaller interested companies.



    I am currently going to school for HVAC and am looking for a company that would allow me to learn and grow with them. At this time I have my universal EPA cert, Preventative Maintenance cert, and my R410a cert. In the next month I will also have my IAQ and Green cert. I am located in XXXXXXXX, but i do not mind traveling. Honestly, I just want to get my foot in the door with a company that understands I am still learning.

Please contact me if you think this might work.

Thank You.

:shrug:


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Re: help me rewrite this.... [Re: Not Responding]
    #21987196 - 07/23/15 08:37 PM (8 years, 6 months ago)

I am a current  HVAC student searching for employment with a global organization that will allow me to learn and grow in the industry. My most recent certifications include XXXXX....

Certifications in progress include.. XXXX...

I willing to travel

References available on request


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Re: help me rewrite this.... [Re: Not Responding]
    #21987200 - 07/23/15 08:38 PM (8 years, 6 months ago)

I would switch up the "honestly, I just" into a more forward way of saying it.. instead of it sounding like "willing to settle for" into a "currently actively persuing this"... know what I'm saying?

Other than that it looks good to me.


Yeah, what Malcolm said..:thumbup:


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Edited by Amanita86 (07/23/15 08:40 PM)


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Re: help me rewrite this.... [Re: Amanita86]
    #21987223 - 07/23/15 08:44 PM (8 years, 6 months ago)

thats the thing though. i want to make it clear that im still a student and still learning. i have 0 exp outside of school...


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I've been numb for so long that I forgot how to feel
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Just fuck me till I disappear





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Re: help me rewrite this.... [Re: Not Responding]
    #21987234 - 07/23/15 08:47 PM (8 years, 6 months ago)

I think they'll get the message when they look at your job history :lol:


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Re: help me rewrite this.... [Re: Malcolm_Xtasy]
    #21987242 - 07/23/15 08:49 PM (8 years, 6 months ago)

my job history is fine...

i graduate in a few months, but i would like to find a smaller company that is willing to take me under their wing. even if its only on the weekends... i still have a few months before i graduate.


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I've been numb for so long that I forgot how to feel
So I don't care if it will break my heart,
Just fuck me till I disappear





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Re: help me rewrite this.... [Re: Not Responding]
    #21987420 - 07/23/15 09:33 PM (8 years, 6 months ago)

Quote:

Not Responding said:
    I am currently going to school for HVAC and am looking for a company that would allow me to learn and grow with them. At this time I have my universal EPA cert, Preventative Maintenance cert, and my R410a cert. In the next month I will also have my IAQ and Green cert. I am located in XXXXXXXX, but i do not mind traveling. Honestly, I just want to get my foot in the door with a company that understands I am still learning.

Please contact me if you think this might work.

Thank You.

:shrug:




To whom it may concern:

I am currently enrolled in an HVAC certification program with an estimated completion date of December 2015. In order to enhance my knowledge of the industry I am also seeking an HVAC apprenticeship. I have several certifications (universal EPA, preventative maintenance, R1410a) and by next month I'll also have my IAQ and green certification.

I would greatly appreciate an opportunity to train with your company. I reside in XXXXXX, but I am willing to travel. If there is an opening, please do not hesitate to call me at XXX XXX XXXX.

Thank you for your consideration.

John ¨HVAC¨ Doe


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