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Caman Writings/Poetry Thread
#21783468 - 06/09/15 02:19 PM (8 years, 7 months ago) |
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Hey if you guys don't mind I was wondering if you would read some of the stuff I have been writing & let me know what you think? if its good then great ! if it stinks well oh well ! haha.
an uncherished soul, practically perished into a black hole, rules are the reverberation of a ridiculous rigmarole, the emergence of undesirable thoughts cause us to be moody & mad, humanity finds flaw in the state of being sad, but whats more human then raw emotion & feeling? I look up at night & wish to see a paisley painted ceiling, the thorough interpretation of dreams is immensely revealing, where you fall you will find meaning, there is a wall with a silver screening, in deep waters is where its best to begin the reeling, if the line is empty, just try again & you may find plenty, accept yourself & embrace euphoria & empathy
the world is a panopticon, and the night is darkest before the dawn which is why we must unite together and act strong , with a little love we can all get along, some will claim our mind has gone, but its only gone free of its shackle, so say fuck the forbidden fruit and eat the apple, the glass isn't half empty its half full, living life should be the opposite of a hassle , achieve your dream and be the king of your own damn castle!!
perpetually perplexed, to learn that love & hope are the best, fuck the system Ill break it down like food when i digest , I never let my eyes rest, because "how could your eyes not be open at this point ?"
I am a fun guy , when I ingest the fungi, a mushroom kingdom alumni , my trip will be done by, lets say the time the sun dry, the soaked leaves, I eloped with the breeze, with hopes of hugging as many trees as I please, the powers that be, plan to put this to cease, but I wont give up my freedom with ease, I CHOOSE TO BE FREE, THERE IS NO OTHER OPTION BUT TO BE ME !
not one to seek attention, but I want her's , I would love to frolic through the flowers, & pick her only the finest, we would form the perfect alliance, the opposite of being mindless , is to sit & observe in total silence, which is what I do when her lips move, when her body groove, to lovely tunes, not in it to just get laid, just want to take her hand & hold it but im too damn afraid, I want to write her poetry & perform a serenade , if looks could kill, her face would be a katana blade, we are a perfect match it seems, well.. atleast in my dreams.
my efforts just cant seem to cut the mustard, being around her for the first time caused me to be frantic & flustered, didn't even have the courage to just say "hey" ,as she left , in my mind I was yelling please do stay !! , last step off the premises, my anxiety is my number one nemesis, I severely fear there will never be an end to this, should I tap into my former genesis? nah to my past that would be a betrayal, impale , my skin on every single rusty nail, I was born to fail, gouge out my eyes & learn to read braille
Edited by caman (06/15/15 09:25 PM)
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Re: Check out some of the writing's I have done [Re: caman]
#21784394 - 06/09/15 05:51 PM (8 years, 7 months ago) |
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Any verdict?
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Re: Check out some of the writing's I have done [Re: caman]
#21784412 - 06/09/15 05:55 PM (8 years, 7 months ago) |
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if looks could kill, her face would be a katana blade
This is pretty bad.
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Re: Check out some of the writing's I have done [Re: caman] 1
#21784431 - 06/09/15 05:58 PM (8 years, 7 months ago) |
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caman said: Hey if you guys don't mind I was wondering if you would read some of the stuff I have been writing & let me know what you think? if its good then great ! if it stinks well oh well ! haha.
an uncherished soul, practically perished into a black hole, rules are the reverberation of a ridiculous rigmarole, the emergence of undesirable thoughts cause us to be moody & mad, humanity finds flaw in the state of being sad, but whats more human then raw emotion & feeling? I look up at night & wish to see a paisley painted ceiling, the thorough interpretation of dreams is immensely revealing, where you fall you will find meaning, there is a wall with a silver screening, in deep waters is where its best to begin the reeling, if the line is empty, just try again & you may find plenty, accept yourself & embrace euphoria & empathy
the world is a panopticon, and the night is darkest before the dawn which is why we must unite together and act strong , with a little love we can all get along, some will claim our mind has gone, but its only gone free of its shackle, so say fuck the forbidden fruit and eat the apple, the glass isn't half empty its half full, living life should be the opposite of a hassle , achieve your dream and be the king of your own damn castle!!
perpetually perplexed, to learn that love & hope are the best, fuck the system Ill break it down like food when i digest , I never let my eyes rest, because "how could your eyes not be open at this point ?"
I am a fun guy , when I ingest the fungi, a mushroom kingdom alumni , my trip will be done by, lets say the time the sun dry, the soaked leaves, I eloped with the breeze, with hopes of hugging as many trees as I please, the powers that be, plan to put this to cease, but I wont give up my freedom with ease, I CHOOSE TO BE FREE, THERE IS NO OTHER OPTION BUT TO BE ME !
not one to seek attention, but I want her's , I would love to frolic through the flowers, & pick her only the finest, we would form the perfect alliance, the opposite of being mindless , is to sit & observe in total silence, which is what I do when her lips move, when her body groove, to lovely tunes, not in it to just get laid, just want to take her hand & hold it but im too damn afraid, I want to write her poetry & perform a serenade , if looks could kill, her face would be a katana blade, we are a perfect match it seems, well.. atleast in my dreams.
my efforts just cant seem to cut the mustard, being around her for the first time caused me to be frantic & flustered, didn't even have the courage to just say "hey" ,as she left , in my mind I was yelling please do stay !! , last step off the premises, my anxiety is my number one nemesis, I severely fear there will never be an end to this, should I tap into my former genesis? nah to my past that would be a betrayal, impale , my skin on every single rusty nail, I was born to fail, gouge out my eyes & learn to read braille
Mod Edit- No flaming in the Pub.
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Re: Check out some of the writing's I have done [Re: Cj-B] 2
#21784467 - 06/09/15 06:06 PM (8 years, 7 months ago) |
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if looks could kill, her face would be a katana blade
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Re: Check out some of the writing's I have done [Re: Mad_Larkin]
#21784498 - 06/09/15 06:12 PM (8 years, 7 months ago) |
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Haha shit I just got wrecked ! defiantly agree with the katana line.. probably the most cringe worthy line out of everything in there. I do appreciate the honesty though, I will probably keep my writings to myself from now on
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Re: Check out some of the writing's I have done [Re: caman] 1
#21784514 - 06/09/15 06:14 PM (8 years, 7 months ago) |
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ur stuff is decent
all of the people who posted in this thread are a part of this awful shroomery gang of cyber-bullies that call themselves the "chilluminati", it's best to disregard what they say
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Re: Check out some of the writing's I have done [Re: Sheekle] 1
#21784541 - 06/09/15 06:20 PM (8 years, 7 months ago) |
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Sheek didn't you start the Chilluminati?
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Re: Check out some of the writing's I have done [Re: caman]
#21784553 - 06/09/15 06:22 PM (8 years, 7 months ago) |
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Eh, it kinda sucks. But its really not my type of writing. Just sounds like a bunch of hippie diarrhea
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Re: Check out some of the writing's I have done [Re: Malcolm_Xtasy] 1
#21784567 - 06/09/15 06:25 PM (8 years, 7 months ago) |
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I thought it was middle school level rap music at first..
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Re: Check out some of the writing's I have done [Re: Psychonautica]
#21784577 - 06/09/15 06:27 PM (8 years, 7 months ago) |
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Psychonautica said: Sheek didn't you start the Chilluminati?
No, I started the Warminati Pretty much arch enemies of the Chilluminati
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Re: Check out some of the writing's I have done [Re: Sheekle] 2
#21784585 - 06/09/15 06:28 PM (8 years, 7 months ago) |
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Sheekle said: ur stuff is decent
all of the people who posted in this thread are a part of this awful shroomery gang of cyber-bullies that call themselves the "chilluminati", it's best to disregard what they say
chllhrt
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Re: Check out some of the writing's I have done [Re: propensity] 1
#21784598 - 06/09/15 06:30 PM (8 years, 7 months ago) |
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caman said: Hey if you guys don't mind I was wondering if you would read some of the stuff I have been writing & let me know what you think? if its good then great ! if it stinks well oh well ! haha.
an uncherished soul, practically perished into a black hole, rules are the reverberation of a ridiculous rigmarole, the emergence of undesirable thoughts cause us to be moody & mad, humanity finds flaw in the state of being sad, but whats more human then raw emotion & feeling? I look up at night & wish to see a paisley painted ceiling, the thorough interpretation of dreams is immensely revealing, where you fall you will find meaning, there is a wall with a silver screening, in deep waters is where its best to begin the reeling, if the line is empty, just try again & you may find plenty, accept yourself & embrace euphoria & empathy
the world is a panopticon, and the night is darkest before the dawn which is why we must unite together and act strong , with a little love we can all get along, some will claim our mind has gone, but its only gone free of its shackle, so say fuck the forbidden fruit and eat the apple, the glass isn't half empty its half full, living life should be the opposite of a hassle , achieve your dream and be the king of your own damn castle!!
perpetually perplexed, to learn that love & hope are the best, fuck the system Ill break it down like food when i digest , I never let my eyes rest, because "how could your eyes not be open at this point ?"
I am a fun guy , when I ingest the fungi, a mushroom kingdom alumni , my trip will be done by, lets say the time the sun dry, the soaked leaves, I eloped with the breeze, with hopes of hugging as many trees as I please, the powers that be, plan to put this to cease, but I wont give up my freedom with ease, I CHOOSE TO BE FREE, THERE IS NO OTHER OPTION BUT TO BE ME !
not one to seek attention, but I want her's , I would love to frolic through the flowers, & pick her only the finest, we would form the perfect alliance, the opposite of being mindless , is to sit & observe in total silence, which is what I do when her lips move, when her body groove, to lovely tunes, not in it to just get laid, just want to take her hand & hold it but im too damn afraid, I want to write her poetry & perform a serenade , if looks could kill, her face would be a katana blade, we are a perfect match it seems, well.. atleast in my dreams.
my efforts just cant seem to cut the mustard, being around her for the first time caused me to be frantic & flustered, didn't even have the courage to just say "hey" ,as she left , in my mind I was yelling please do stay !! , last step off the premises, my anxiety is my number one nemesis, I severely fear there will never be an end to this, should I tap into my former genesis? nah to my past that would be a betrayal, impale , my skin on every single rusty nail, I was born to fail, gouge out my eyes & learn to read braille
Mod Edit- No flaming in the Pub.
Also I really fail to see how posting a letter from HST is flaming.
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Re: Check out some of the writing's I have done [Re: Psychonautica]
#21784602 - 06/09/15 06:31 PM (8 years, 7 months ago) |
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Psychonautica said: I thought it was middle school level rap music at first..
Yeah now that I read through it again I realized it rhymes
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Re: Check out some of the writing's I have done [Re: propensity]
#21784620 - 06/09/15 06:33 PM (8 years, 7 months ago) |
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Did op ask you for an opinion and then report you for flaming?
The butthurt is strong in this one.
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Re: Check out some of the writing's I have done [Re: Psychonautica] 1
#21784633 - 06/09/15 06:35 PM (8 years, 7 months ago) |
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I reported Prop, he didn't give an opinion. He was just being mean
-------------------- "Ur cat died because he hated u" - Koods "I hope JSB kicks your ass one day." - Vandago "you are the biggest 'internet guy' I have ever come across"- Jokeshopbeard "The more I see you post the more I realize you're just this fuckin tie dye loser who trolls the Shroomery 24/7." - Herbologist "Sheekle you cannot vile the dice of bullshit you have posted on this forum over the years, I like databases" - thelastoneleft "or maybe i just come from a blood line of superior intelligence" - trees R.I.P Kelsy, ?/?/?? - 6/11/16
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Re: Check out some of the writing's I have done [Re: Sheekle] 5
#21784643 - 06/09/15 06:37 PM (8 years, 7 months ago) |
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Snitch
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Re: Check out some of the writing's I have done [Re: Sheekle]
#21784649 - 06/09/15 06:37 PM (8 years, 7 months ago) |
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Of course you did, ultimate trshhrt.
That was a letter from HST to this guy who sent in one of the most masturbatory drug addled pieces of writing ever.
It was the only thing anyone should have posted.
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Re: Check out some of the writing's I have done [Re: Sheekle] 2
#21784654 - 06/09/15 06:38 PM (8 years, 7 months ago) |
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Re: Check out some of the writing's I have done [Re: Mad_Larkin]
#21784705 - 06/09/15 06:45 PM (8 years, 7 months ago) |
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Keep writing tho OP. Doesn't matter if we like it.
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Re: Check out some of the writing's I have done [Re: Sheekle]
#21784759 - 06/09/15 06:54 PM (8 years, 7 months ago) |
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Sheekle said: ur stuff is decent
all of the people who posted in this thread are a part of this awful shroomery gang of cyber-bullies that call themselves the "chilluminati", it's best to disregard what they say
Thanks man, nice to get one kind response & I apologize to all the rest that found it to be total balderdash, like I said I will continue to write because I enjoy them but I will keep them to myself Oh & just saw that comment propensity thanks I will keep at it dude.
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Re: Check out some of the writing's I have done [Re: caman] 1
#21784816 - 06/09/15 07:00 PM (8 years, 7 months ago) |
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You don't have to keep them to yourself, or stop doing them.
Just because we don't appreciate them doesn't mean someone else won't absolutly fall in love with them.
You keep doing you and don't let any hater fuck that up.

If you want to post them here, don't make multiple threads though, make a
"Caman Writings/Poetry Thread!"
and bump it everytime with a new story, no one's going to want to see a new topic for every poem though, but for real keep that shit up. Even though I didn't enjoy them personally, if you practice maybe one day I will enjoy your future work.
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Re: Check out some of the writing's I have done [Re: Psychonautica]
#21785047 - 06/09/15 07:34 PM (8 years, 7 months ago) |
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Thanks dude, If you guys don't mind I would be down to post my own writing's/poetry thread. Should I start by re-posting the stuff that I posted here? or nah? lol. Hopefully sometime in the future you will enjoy something I write . Thanks for sending the positivity though man I appreciate it.
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Re: Check out some of the writing's I have done [Re: caman]
#21785922 - 06/09/15 10:27 PM (8 years, 7 months ago) |
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That was suuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuper cheesy. Like Nickelback level.
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Re: Check out some of the writing's I have done [Re: caman] 1
#21786951 - 06/10/15 05:15 AM (8 years, 7 months ago) |
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I wouldn't mind but I don't speak for the community but you shouldn't give a fuck.
If you want to clarify it's your general writing thread you can edit your first post and change the title I belive.
No problem about the positive vibes! I hate to see the Internet assholes stifle creativity of any kind.
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Re: Check out some of the writing's I have done [Re: Psychonautica]
#21786990 - 06/10/15 05:50 AM (8 years, 7 months ago) |
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Take the red pill to keep this memory or blue pill to forget this boosheet 
BLUE PLS
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caman
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Re: Check out some of the writing's I have done [Re: Hayoxp]
#21787987 - 06/10/15 11:49 AM (8 years, 7 months ago) |
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im feeling fantastic, as I begin peeling off my skin like plastic, im so far out that its drastic , my life is a basket, case, loosen my mind like a shoe lace, I was born when I chose to be , fuck due dates, "cold in july", glistening blue lakes, keep moving forward, because I blew the brakes, I never finish any desired goals, low on faith it must be too late, as a matter of fact I have no pulse rate
I constantly spend time with mother nature/ write my rhymes on my mind not the paper/ the plants I got are solidified liquid from a crater/ exist a former space invader/ now known as a landscape crusader/ buck 50 your face with a just out of the case razor/ peck the nutrients of life for flavor/ I met the omen and made the mistake to date her/ I broke it off and went through a metamorphosis/ lucid dream cruising crossed paths with Morpheus/ an outer body experience to the point where my incorporeal corpse began to lift/ my brainwaves send and receive signals like an antenna/ I go on psychedelic journeys like Terrence McKenna/ ideas pop like an umbrella / then spread accordingly like nutella/ living in the mouth of madness yet im humane/ lyrically ive got more lines then a membrane/ caman is the name and im illegally insane
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Re: Check out some of the writing's I have done [Re: caman]
#21792404 - 06/11/15 10:07 AM (8 years, 7 months ago) |
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caught in a web of despair utterly alone without a care longing for that lost innocence fully immersed within my limerence it isn't my choice its in my mind shes in my voice!
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In the province of the mind, what one believes to be true is true or becomes true, within certain limits to be found experientially and experimentally. These limits are further beliefs to be transcended. In the mind, there are no limits.- John C. Lilly
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Re: Check out some of the writing's I have done [Re: caman]
#21793038 - 06/11/15 01:30 PM (8 years, 7 months ago) |
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Mad_Larkin

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Re: Check out some of the writing's I have done [Re: caman]
#21796065 - 06/12/15 04:59 AM (8 years, 7 months ago) |
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10 green bottles hanging on the wall, 10 green bottles hanging on the wall, And if 1 green bottle should accidentally fall, There'll be 9 green bottles hanging on the wall.
9 green bottles hanging on the wall, 9 green bottles hanging on the wall, And if 1 green bottle should accidentally fall, There'll be 8 green bottles hanging on the wall.
8 green bottles hanging on the wall, 8 green bottles hanging on the wall, And if 1 green bottle should accidentally fall, There'll be 7 green bottles hanging on the wall.
7 green bottles hanging on the wall, 7 green bottles hanging on the wall, And if 1 green bottle should accidentally fall, There'll be 6 green bottles hanging on the wall.
6 green bottles hanging on the wall, 6 green bottles hanging on the wall, And if 1 green bottle should accidentally fall, There'll be 5 green bottles hanging on the wall.
5 green bottles hanging on the wall, 5 green bottles hanging on the wall, And if 1 green bottle should accidentally fall There'll be 4 green bottles hanging on the wall.
4 green bottles hanging on the wall, 4 green bottles hanging on the wall, And if 1 green bottle should accidentally fall, There'll be 3 green bottles hanging on the wall.
3 green bottles hanging on the wall, 3 green bottles hanging on the wall, And if 1 green bottle should accidentally fall, There'll be 2 green bottles hanging on the wall.
2 green bottles hanging on the wall, 2 green bottles hanging on the wall, And if 1 green bottle should accidentally fall, There'll be 1 green bottle hanging on the wall.
1 green bottle hanging on the wall, 1 green bottle hanging on the wall, And it that green bottle should accidentally fall There'll be no more bottles hanging on the wall.
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Psychonautica
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Re: Check out some of the writing's I have done [Re: Mad_Larkin] 1
#21796096 - 06/12/15 05:24 AM (8 years, 7 months ago) |
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Ayee caman took my advicce thats whatsup
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Re: Check out some of the writing's I have done [Re: Psychonautica]
#21811908 - 06/15/15 06:30 PM (8 years, 7 months ago) |
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Manipulate this! Feelings I refuse to suppress, I will do what I want because I know what's best , you lived a life that was unfulfilling & hollow, listen here as this may be difficult for you to swallow, but for the longest time you walked straight because all you do is follow , for once try to think for your self , instead of looking for the perfect girl & large wealth, look inside , that's where the answers reside, forget the man in the sky, you want to manipulate me ? Go ahead & try! Talk me into , attending jobs & schools, talk me into , a wife & kids, short hair cuts , talk me into , whatever you choose because I don't argue with no fools, notice my shit eating grin, we call all change, it's a remarkable gift of being human , change for good , change for better ,right now is superior to never , this is an open letter, to all sick of the bullshit , sick of , being told no, sick of the powers that be, disgusted with the mere mention of economy , let's change the world, I challenge whoever, to manipulate this ! It's time too get pissed , stand up & stop kissing the fist! , you can't, you can never, Manipulate this !!
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In the province of the mind, what one believes to be true is true or becomes true, within certain limits to be found experientially and experimentally. These limits are further beliefs to be transcended. In the mind, there are no limits.- John C. Lilly
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Re: Check out some of the writing's I have done [Re: caman]
#21812037 - 06/15/15 07:25 PM (8 years, 7 months ago) |
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All shall fall before the whore For she always has you on the floor And when she slaps that jelly ass She'll turn and say, "No thanks I'll pass"
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Diminish the sub-principle and leave its toxic trace.. Once and for all!
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Re: Check out some of the writing's I have done [Re: OhMrJohnson]
#21877289 - 06/30/15 09:54 AM (8 years, 6 months ago) |
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open your minds and heal the society's state of its everlasting ache . The way it is only empowers my escape! I will beat on my chest till it begins to break, I will yell at the top of my lungs till they tear, I wont wave guns in the air, I will push & push for love over despair, I will refute the acts of violence, with solemn & silence, no longer wish to be a fool , I will be a man of defiance!
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In the province of the mind, what one believes to be true is true or becomes true, within certain limits to be found experientially and experimentally. These limits are further beliefs to be transcended. In the mind, there are no limits.- John C. Lilly
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caman
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Re: Check out some of the writing's I have done [Re: caman]
#21889026 - 07/02/15 04:50 PM (8 years, 6 months ago) |
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What I lack in intelligence I make up for in benevolence in what my thoughts lack in elegance they make it up in relevance in the living room there are elephants some more important then others like how often what the media covers is a disguised distraction whatever happened to ebola? your still afraid flight 370? your still swayed fighting over a flag? while deals are done in the shade what the hell is the tpp? nobody really knows not you nor me what we share in ignorance we over turn with our deliverance the powers that be shall forever be in a state of insignificance we take the power and make a difference!
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In the province of the mind, what one believes to be true is true or becomes true, within certain limits to be found experientially and experimentally. These limits are further beliefs to be transcended. In the mind, there are no limits.- John C. Lilly
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Re: Check out some of the writing's I have done [Re: caman]
#21931723 - 07/12/15 12:55 AM (8 years, 6 months ago) |
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If you break through be sure to take something back with you the seeds were planted and the thoughts flew kick over the mountain dew & show off mushrooms I grew before I give freedom to the animals in the zoo pass botanical's for scooby doo so that he can pursue to roll doobie number two I fell into a slumber that was askew from my ordinary height of state where I seemingly make all rules suddenly break my mind manifested itself to the point where it was mine too take mentally design the dedicated frame rate while I over-think a strange fate in which I awake distract the notion when I hit the break split into diametrically opposed dimensions one when I was wide"awake" plentiful unanswered questions the other I Encounter interplanetary entitles who assist with further ascension kicked the rhymes RAW like Robert Anton Wilson packed pockets full of food for thought but I spilt some.
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In the province of the mind, what one believes to be true is true or becomes true, within certain limits to be found experientially and experimentally. These limits are further beliefs to be transcended. In the mind, there are no limits.- John C. Lilly
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caman
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Re: Check out some of the writing's I have done [Re: caman]
#21953615 - 07/16/15 08:19 PM (8 years, 6 months ago) |
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You need to sleep to live, you need too dream otherwise you will eventually die. You literally must enter another state of consciousness different from the one we mainly operate within to live. The dream state is incredibly similar to what we refer to as reality, the dream state is just as real (or even more so) then what we refer to as reality. Psychedelic substances such as psilocybin, dimethyltryptamine and lysergic acid diethylamide's chemical structures are remarkably similar to the neurotransmitter serotonin. These substances allow us too alter our brain chemistry which brings us into lower or higher states of consciousness. Our brains are advanced enough to partake in the usage of these psychoactive's bringing way to these other states of consciousness.
No matter what state we are in, we always psychically remain in "reality" . Perhaps we are active always just the same in all inner realities but we have just chosen this reality as our main stay. It seems to be the most important one to operate within anyhow, but none should ever have the power too belittle the importance of the other inner realities which are just as fundamentally important to our being. Perhaps after death we are plunged or projected into one of these other states? who knows? but I truly have realized in order to live, you must dream. Literally & metaphorically !
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In the province of the mind, what one believes to be true is true or becomes true, within certain limits to be found experientially and experimentally. These limits are further beliefs to be transcended. In the mind, there are no limits.- John C. Lilly
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Re: Check out some of the writing's I have done [Re: caman]
#21953619 - 07/16/15 08:20 PM (8 years, 6 months ago) |
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Sanity seems to be apparently contained within an imaginary box. To think outside of that box is considered insanity. To vocalize or bring out this insanity is outsanity.
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In the province of the mind, what one believes to be true is true or becomes true, within certain limits to be found experientially and experimentally. These limits are further beliefs to be transcended. In the mind, there are no limits.- John C. Lilly
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Re: Check out some of the writing's I have done [Re: caman]
#21974876 - 07/21/15 09:33 AM (8 years, 6 months ago) |
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I don't think that dreams themselves are tools, but rather that they are built-in keys to access information or "tools". Psychedelic substances are also keys to unlock doors , once these doors are opened they may be sealed but the information obtained is forever. Whether this information which is received , are used properly or applied at all to the internal & external reality is entirely up to the human subject. Dreams, just the same as psychedelic experience's are not sought after by most. They can similarly be blissful, bizarre, enlightening, absolutely terrifying , downright hogwash & many other variations. The point i'm trying to make is that dreams can be difficult lessons to learn, when they awake they will instantaneously brush it off as merely a dream, an experience of insignificant value. The same could be said about the psychedelic experience, one who is not fully aware of what they are getting themselves into will have a "trip" reflecting that. In returning to the mainstay they will proclaim it was awful ! & further in a self induced blind hindsight they say it was all a bad hallucinatory event. Sigmund Freud argues that all variations of dreams can always (through thorough interpretation) be revealed as a form of wish fulfillment. What if all states of consciousness are wish fulfillment's? Certainly in dreams they seem to be accomplished & as well in the mainstay reality they can be accomplished of course. As a child I recall being in touch with more then just the mainstay & dream realities, I use to walk around for hours on end in my backyard while being submerged in any reality it seemed I could wish to be in. I used to believe I was having conversations with god as I laid in bed before entering the dream state. Asking him various questions to which he would always give an answer. As I grew older through the programming of external forces such as parents, teachers, rules, television, the law, & proper etiquette I was swayed away from these states. Perhaps it was all a by-product of my overly active imagination, like anxiety. That being said, imagination seems to be in a close association with dreams.
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In the province of the mind, what one believes to be true is true or becomes true, within certain limits to be found experientially and experimentally. These limits are further beliefs to be transcended. In the mind, there are no limits.- John C. Lilly
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Re: Check out some of the writing's I have done [Re: caman]
#22005046 - 07/27/15 03:07 PM (8 years, 6 months ago) |
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I believe that when you experience deja vu in the mainstay reality , it is in fact brought to your attention that you have been here before you have done this before, you have seen this before where it was that you first made the encounter was your in your dream reality. one of the many functions of information to be taken from the dream state. what if time will not be traveled through the creation of a machine ? but from within the mind, the soul , our consciousness what if its already possible perhaps in certain higher states you can travel through time. a likely candidate is the dream reality. you travel in time to an event & how far out this event takes place can greatly vary. you access these future events so that when in it takes place in the mainstay reality you can act accordingly or take a different route. also a friendly reminder that there is more to life then it seems?
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In the province of the mind, what one believes to be true is true or becomes true, within certain limits to be found experientially and experimentally. These limits are further beliefs to be transcended. In the mind, there are no limits.- John C. Lilly
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Re: Check out some of the writing's I have done [Re: caman]
#22022489 - 07/30/15 10:48 PM (8 years, 5 months ago) |
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paralyzed with hair in my eyes I cant see dance upon the sea shatter the windows into the soul I'm able to be whole I'm free to live life the way I fancy be open to the outset abandon the feeling to pout & get upset be aware of your highest priority stare into the skies paralyzed
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In the province of the mind, what one believes to be true is true or becomes true, within certain limits to be found experientially and experimentally. These limits are further beliefs to be transcended. In the mind, there are no limits.- John C. Lilly
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Re: Check out some of the writing's I have done [Re: caman]
#22022838 - 07/31/15 01:24 AM (8 years, 5 months ago) |
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u shuld b sorry
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Re: Check out some of the writing's I have done [Re: Perusha_Kyuden]
#22026393 - 07/31/15 10:17 PM (8 years, 5 months ago) |
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higher cortical thinking I plan to expand from the the pineal gland my words get released like dimethyltryptamine proceeding mad deep like a submarine walk up to dimensional doorsteps the feeling was mostly sensual from my cerebral cortex tap into dream states as keys I self meta-program clean slates with ease be all you want, be all you can, give it your best their is no time for rest! give it flavor while your ripe like a lime that's fresh i'm vulnerable to climate change like bangladesh stare into the skies in disillusionment we as a human race are really losing it lets improve our highest priorities raise awareness of minorities our words form the major consensus remove all barriers & fraudulent fences put our peeps on the path reconnect them with mother nature & have the last laugh laying in lush grass spot a bandicoot before I crash full throttle flows like tall winds & swim in the sea with bottle nose dolphins
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In the province of the mind, what one believes to be true is true or becomes true, within certain limits to be found experientially and experimentally. These limits are further beliefs to be transcended. In the mind, there are no limits.- John C. Lilly
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Re: Check out some of the writing's I have done [Re: caman]
#22040232 - 08/03/15 11:29 PM (8 years, 5 months ago) |
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Feelings of dark repent as a result of trying to be a human being like Clark Kent I embark on a scent like sharks I have an Ampullae of Lorenzini pour the lessons on like Mr. Feeney I"ll fight for what I believe & that's too be free! trade in the shade for the allure of a mermaid of what I say i'm not afraid nor ashamed most of it probably won't make sense don't need the approval or the acceptance zombies exist as people on antidepressants I like to think i'm a man with a mission I do what I want & I stand by my decision dream a dream, envision a vision I use to be the cream of the crop at being distraught seeing things as they're not too shattered to live now I realize its a matter of perspective I'm enamored with what life has to give.
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In the province of the mind, what one believes to be true is true or becomes true, within certain limits to be found experientially and experimentally. These limits are further beliefs to be transcended. In the mind, there are no limits.- John C. Lilly
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Re: Check out some of the writing's I have done [Re: caman]
#22077516 - 08/11/15 05:41 PM (8 years, 5 months ago) |
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my writings indeed display my insanity there is not even a single inch of man in me yet i'm a member of humanity the mundane is filled with vanity I use the trees of nature as a canopy pouring thoughts rain down my brain is influenced by sound especially when white noise is in-bound pulsating peculiarities pound through what is normally found to be incorporeal fall into the position of an oracle I was told "living free is affordable" as well as "improve upon everything to do with the cortical" spoke to my soul in the innermost region of the skull
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In the province of the mind, what one believes to be true is true or becomes true, within certain limits to be found experientially and experimentally. These limits are further beliefs to be transcended. In the mind, there are no limits.- John C. Lilly
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