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Re: New hip hop artist deserves recognition *DELETED* [Re: Dilsnique]
#21753120 - 06/02/15 02:41 PM (8 years, 7 months ago) |
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Re: New hip hop artist deserves recognition [Re: Adolin]
#21753147 - 06/02/15 02:47 PM (8 years, 7 months ago) |
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im not trying to be anybody im not. i move the way i do because i would get jumped living where i live if i did not walk and talk with such a stride. i have a lot of anger built up as you can see
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You don't have to explain why you are the way you are, if people don't like it, fuckem. There will be plenty of people who don't like you, and plenty who do, regardless of how you come off.
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Re: New hip hop artist deserves recognition [Re: Malcolm_Xtasy] 1
#21753157 - 06/02/15 02:49 PM (8 years, 7 months ago) |
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psi said: Didn't catch that thread, but IMO there definitely is worse amateur rapping out there.
http://www.shroomery.org/forums/showflat.php/Number/21725865/page/2
Yeah that is a lot more polished for sure. I don't think OP's lyrics or delivery are really too bad though personally. None of that "please stop now, you're just embarrassing yourself" feel of truly awful amateur rap.
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Where do you live?
This is actually a very important thing to know in the rap biz
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Re: New hip hop artist deserves recognition [Re: psi]
#21753163 - 06/02/15 02:51 PM (8 years, 7 months ago) |
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Eh.. I think it was of the worst things i've ever heard the lyrics are okay but his delivery made it look like he was mentally handicapped. Plus his voice sounds like his balls haven't dropped yet
-------------------- I'm stupid, Enlil is smart. I'm ugly, Enlil is beautiful. I'm a loser, Enlil is a winner. Someday, I hope to be like Enlil but secretly know I never will.
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I think that it's great that you are passionate about this. I think that you are having difficulty expressing what you are trying to say, whether it be trying to sound too hard or having today's generic MCs influencing you.

You're receiving negative vibes here because you are cocky and lacking anything unique or with any real substance.
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Re: New hip hop artist deserves recognition [Re: Dilsnique]
#21753194 - 06/02/15 02:59 PM (8 years, 7 months ago) |
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He's clearly young, he raps about what he knows, which atm isn't a lot (not saying you don't know anything OP, but since you're young you probably don't have much life experience yet, just my opinion since I don't know you though or what you've been through)
He'll touch up his sound at some point, he's probably still in the process of finding "his style" of music, rap clearly being the winner, but I mean how he goes about it. As long as he keeps at it and doesn't give up he could probably make something of himself and he'll undoubtedly get better the more he does it.
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Re: New hip hop artist deserves recognition [Re: Dilsnique]
#21753201 - 06/02/15 03:01 PM (8 years, 7 months ago) |
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well i appreciate your honesty.. thats the type of critisism i enjoy, rather than the "YOU SUCK". because i totally feel you. it is hard to express such complexities for me, probably the drugs.. im young as you can see but ive already lived a whole life time worth of crazy, its taken its toll
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its funny you say that cause im better at guitar and singing haha i do both!
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i think you'dbe suprised how much experience i actually do have. that home in that video,, yea thats mine. i pay the bills. i bought the plates silverware. i dont have a family
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Whatever you do, don't admit you're underage because that will get you banned, and I'd like to see you stick around.
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A grain of sand
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idk how you think im not rapping about much tho honestly,, its a lot more than most rappers. i could rap about the shit they do if i wanted, could they rap about what i do?? read those lyrics closely cause your taking them for granted
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Re: New hip hop artist deserves recognition [Re: D.M.T]
#21753222 - 06/02/15 03:06 PM (8 years, 7 months ago) |
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man im 20 years old, been on my own for 3 years
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Re: New hip hop artist deserves recognition [Re: A grain of sand] 1
#21753237 - 06/02/15 03:11 PM (8 years, 7 months ago) |
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I promise I didn't mean it like that, I didn't even see the lyrics or the second song when I responded with that, the fact you're even thinking about the problems of the world is a huge step up from most of todays youth in my opinion, and the fact you're able to use an art form to convey your message. You also seem to have a good head on your shoulders, and like to use it, which is awesome IMO. You definitely got talent, you'll figure it all out as you go, you seem to already be off to a good start.
Truly wish you the best of luck OP and hope you stick around.
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Re: New hip hop artist deserves recognition [Re: Dilsnique]
#21753243 - 06/02/15 03:14 PM (8 years, 7 months ago) |
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Dilsnique said: I think that it's great that you are passionate about this. I think that you are having difficulty expressing what you are trying to say, whether it be trying to sound too hard or having today's generic MCs influencing you.

You're receiving negative vibes here because you are cocky and lacking anything unique or with any real substance.
Yeah the content of the lyrics does seem kinda generic but I think the writing is promising. I'd say keep at it for sure OP.
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ayyye thats what i like to hear.. preciate the support guys glad you took the time to see my vision through
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Re: New hip hop artist deserves recognition [Re: psi]
#21753259 - 06/02/15 03:17 PM (8 years, 7 months ago) |
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psi said: I'd say keep at it for sure OP.
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Re: New hip hop artist deserves recognition [Re: Malcolm_Xtasy]
#21753383 - 06/02/15 03:50 PM (8 years, 7 months ago) |
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Bet id give you them hands boy... ppl like you are my favorite
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From what Ive seen from your video.. no the fuck you wouldn't
-------------------- I'm stupid, Enlil is smart. I'm ugly, Enlil is beautiful. I'm a loser, Enlil is a winner. Someday, I hope to be like Enlil but secretly know I never will.
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