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Writing a song HELP !
    #21299056 - 02/19/15 01:38 PM (9 years, 2 months ago)

Hi I composed a song and its hard to create the lyrics.... !!!!  help

      I look around
      See the lonely faces
      The eyes just facing the ground

      I wish I could
      Make them play like a child
      Instead of  - - - -

  What 4 syllables would you put there ?

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Re: Writing a song HELP ! [Re: flipus]
    #21312678 - 02/22/15 11:54 AM (9 years, 2 months ago)

These sad creatures that inhabit the world


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Life begins on the other side of despair...

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Re: Writing a song HELP ! [Re: flipus] * 1
    #21314530 - 02/22/15 07:11 PM (9 years, 2 months ago)

kicking babies with a frown.

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Re: Writing a song HELP ! [Re: Jufin]
    #21347419 - 03/01/15 09:45 AM (9 years, 2 months ago)

I would suggest starting fresh with not this mopey, sad, 'why can't things go my way?' feel to it.

Music is supposed to be enjoyable, not like reading a frustrated kid's diary. I've been writing songs for five years and the first two of them were spent writing these kinds of songs because I thought they were powerful and deep. I soon learned that they're just annoying lyric-wise to listeners. People want to hear interesting things and just fun things, not depressed emotions that everyone goes through.

Also, songwriting and poetry are some of the most individual forms of art. If people are taking lyrics from someone else at a message board, what the flip is the point?


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