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Critique My Song!
    #21254272 - 02/10/15 05:08 PM (9 years, 3 months ago)

I uploaded one of my tracks to youtube. I'd love to get constructive criticism and feedback. If you like this one I will post more.


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Re: Critique My Song! [Re: tsv] * 1
    #21254327 - 02/10/15 05:18 PM (9 years, 3 months ago)

It makes my head vibrate. Then I turned the music off and there's still a vibration. It won't go away.

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Re: Critique My Song! [Re: TheScientificMethod]
    #21254345 - 02/10/15 05:20 PM (9 years, 3 months ago)

lol I still have to polish it. I'm finding it hard to polish my finished songs. Also I always go back and change little parts. But I will have an entire album by the end of this year.

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Re: Critique My Song! [Re: tsv]
    #21254432 - 02/10/15 05:33 PM (9 years, 3 months ago)

I'm hoping saratonin will see this post because she likes hard trance.

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Re: Critique My Song! [Re: tsv]
    #21254779 - 02/10/15 06:32 PM (9 years, 3 months ago)

very very busy, way too much clapping sample, and it sounds like it should be a track on DDR.  :shrug:


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Re: Critique My Song! [Re: All We Perceive]
    #21254794 - 02/10/15 06:34 PM (9 years, 3 months ago)

I'm pretty sure that's a bassnectar song.

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Re: Critique My Song! [Re: larry.fisherman]
    #21254872 - 02/10/15 06:47 PM (9 years, 3 months ago)

I dig where you were going with it, but I'd slow it down or make it a little less busy.


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Re: Critique My Song! [Re: ThatKidWithTheFace]
    #21255168 - 02/10/15 07:33 PM (9 years, 3 months ago)

I'll do my best to make it less busy. Ya, usually I only use the standard two claps. I will revert back to my standard.

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Re: Critique My Song! [Re: tsv]
    #21255187 - 02/10/15 07:37 PM (9 years, 3 months ago)

Try this one on for size. It's my first attempt at a hard house track ---


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