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InvisibleCherryBomM
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The Inner Struggle
    #2069926 - 11/04/03 11:42 AM (13 years, 1 month ago)

No expectations,
Only realizations....
After a week of anticipation,
Friday night.


Maia stepped into the club. October 31-- Halloween.
Wings and horns, fake blood and twisted dreams.

Somewhere on the dance floor (right about now, it's time time time time....) amidst the glitter, the strobe lights, Adam watched her work her way to the front. It had been weeks....months?...since thier first meeting and tonite was different. Tonite his body tingled, pupils wide, jaw clenched....White Dolphin.

At the bar, Maia ordered a shot of spiced rum with a strawberry daquari chaser. She wasted no time, beeline to the dance floor daquari in hand. (creole lady marmalade....)

Adam found her and spun her around. She was caught completely off gaurd. His eyes held hers for a split second that seemed like hours. His eyes....almost blue, almost green, almost something in between, bursting electricity.

He pulled her close to him. She didn't miss a beat. She came tonite to dance and that is exactly what she intended to do. She felt her pulse speed up, breath quickened, she pushed him away refusing to admit to herself that he had this effect on her.

Weaving through the crowd, bouncing from partner to partner, she found herself on the stage. (deep inside.....) From this view, she could see everything that was happening but her only awareness was a pair of eyes from the back of the room. Almost blue, almost green, bursting electricty...burning through her.

She stumbled, caught herself. Pushing though the crowd...the masked, painted, unfamilliar crowd she found the ladies room. Bracing herself against the sink, she looked in the mirror and caught her breath. Her cheeks were flushed, her hair was hot on her neck. She splashed some cold water on her burning cheeks and closed her eyes. (mmm...mmmm...mmm...mmmmm) An image flashed behind her eyelids not letting her escape. Almost blue, almost green, almost something in between.

He consumed her and the more she resisted, the more the struggled, she couldn't fight him. His static surrounded her, she was rendered defenseless. He gave her goosebumps despite the heat, despite the beads of sweat on her face.

Composed and filled with resolve, she pushed the door open, grabbed her coat and walked into the night. She walked slow... taking her eyes off the stars hanging in the sky only long enough to cross the street.

The memory of his body pressed up against hers made her feel....out of control. She wanted him, she longed for him. He made her body tingle, pupils dialate, jaw clench. Those eyes, almost blue, almost green almost something in between; they made her pulse pound. It was so hard, so hard, so hard not to submit, not to lose control, not to lose herself in his eyes. In his unrelenting electricity. It took everything that she had to walk away...but she did it.

Only there was a suprise for her on the doorstep when she got home. Body tingles, pupils dialated, jaw clenched, Adam had seen her leave the club and beat her home. He had taken a short cut through the woods and had been awaiting her arrival. He couldn't let her get away from him. He refused to let her walk away so easily. He needed her, he wanted her. He couldn't get her out of his head. Thier first meeting, thier last meeting, she touched his heart, his soul so deep. He felt like they had come from the same place so many eons ago.

Maia turned the corner saw him-- sitting, waiting. Her heart skipped a beat. She was aprehensive...yet releived. She didn't even say a word. She already knew that he was waiting for her before she saw him.

She sat down beside him and handed him a bottle of water.

He gratefully accepted....

She closed her eyes.

Write her off,
Call her naive
Just like her mom
Full of deciet

Wave of crimson
Hide my secrets in
Words and boxes
Metaphorical locks
Tickling curiosity
Growing inside of me
Fighting for truth
In an altered reality

Rock me, shock me
Thrill me, fill me
With your undefined electicity...


She opened her eyes and he was gone. Just gone. There was nothing left, but a note.

She picked it up and went inside. It said:

M,

I wanted to love you like I did so long ago.

A.

She wanted to cry but she couldn't. She felt weak. Alone. One tear, just one...rolled down her face and fell on the note.

She went to bed, but not before she wrote an entry in her journal. Before she closed her eyes, she turned off the light and looked at the picture she kept on her nightstand. A picture of the one she she shared her bed with, her life with. He wasn't coming home for a long, long time.


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InvisibleShroomismM
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Re: The Inner Struggle [Re: CherryBom]
    #2070054 - 11/04/03 01:32 PM (13 years, 1 month ago)

Awwwww


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Re: The Inner Struggle [Re: CherryBom]
    #2070560 - 11/04/03 07:58 PM (13 years, 1 month ago)

huh?


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InvisibleLetto
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Re: The Inner Struggle [Re: CherryBom]
    #2070815 - 11/04/03 09:03 PM (13 years, 1 month ago)

Did you write that? I love the style.  :thumbup: :thumbup:


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OfflinePedM
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Re: The Inner Struggle [Re: Letto]
    #2072848 - 11/05/03 12:29 PM (13 years, 1 month ago)

You've put your passionate edge on a familiar lamentation to which many of us can relate.  Nice dualism.  Nice work! :smile:
 


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Re: The Inner Struggle [Re: CherryBom]
    #2072894 - 11/05/03 12:49 PM (13 years, 1 month ago)

Wow...excellent read. :thumbup: :smile:


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OfflineEntelle
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Re: The Inner Struggle [Re: adrug]
    #2073970 - 11/05/03 06:37 PM (13 years, 1 month ago)

Reminds me of seeing that special ex again. You want to have a bit of what you used to have, just for a while. But it doesn't make it easier. Ahhh, young love! (insert bitter irony)


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InvisibleCherryBomM
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Re: The Inner Struggle [Re: Letto]
    #2074360 - 11/05/03 08:30 PM (13 years, 1 month ago)

I wrote it.

Here's the first one ---> Clicky


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InvisiblePsiloKitten
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Re: The Inner Struggle [Re: CherryBom]
    #2075181 - 11/05/03 11:47 PM (13 years, 1 month ago)

It's good. I miss posts like this.

In the last thread you asked, do you tell? is that selfish? etc.

I think that it depends on the decision you ultimately make. To leave a mistake behind or to make a mistake by leaving something behind, unfinished.

I guess we will just have to see how the story pans out.

/me waves back at you, from abysmally far away.


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Re: The Inner Struggle [Re: PsiloKitten]
    #2075392 - 11/06/03 12:45 AM (13 years, 1 month ago)

maybe the CIA couldn't arrest Derrick because of the lack of evidence. In my opinion they should've taken a closer look inside the sock drawer...no telling what they could've found in there.



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And then at night I would wonder:
Had I been wasting all my time enjoying the sweet taste of Tennasse bourbon, brownest of the brown liquors? Where was my girlfriend? Where was my car? Who's bed was I lying on? Which state was I in? And I got that sad feeling to make me cry...


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Re: The Inner Struggle [Re: Fritzs_caindealer]
    #2077042 - 11/06/03 02:50 PM (13 years, 1 month ago)

:smile: :heart:


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InvisibleJonnyOnTheSpot
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Re: The Inner Struggle [Re: CherryBom]
    #2081223 - 11/07/03 04:04 PM (13 years, 1 month ago)

that was good. very descriptive...it's sort of like a screen play or something in the way that you can picture each "scene" very well. nice job  :thumbup:

ps. ecstacy right?


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Re: The Inner Struggle [Re: CherryBom]
    #2081256 - 11/07/03 04:14 PM (13 years, 1 month ago)

:sun:


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Re: The Inner Struggle [Re: CherryBom]
    #2081424 - 11/07/03 05:18 PM (13 years, 1 month ago)

:thumbup:


Good stuff.
You should write more things, Bom.


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Re: The Inner Struggle [Re: Phluck]
    #2081957 - 11/07/03 08:36 PM (13 years, 1 month ago)

i like this little writing of yours. i could picture it in my head as i was reading it.


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Re: The Inner Struggle [Re: ninetynine]
    #2082678 - 11/08/03 01:11 AM (13 years, 1 month ago)

sweet read female explosive device :wink:


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Re: The Inner Struggle [Re: CherryBom]
    #2082831 - 11/08/03 02:03 AM (13 years, 1 month ago)

:spliff: for a very nice read.  Thanks


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Re: The Inner Struggle [Re: annielicious]
    #2083363 - 11/08/03 09:17 AM (13 years, 1 month ago)

Hello Daddy, Hello Mom....


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Re: The Inner Struggle [Re: eve69]
    #2084906 - 11/08/03 09:03 PM (13 years, 1 month ago)

HI! That was damn fuckin good. I'm writing this story in emails to this girl I know... I think I'll post it here.

Oh and...

/me waves at pk and bom from uncomfortably close

~Kriz


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Re: The Inner Struggle [Re: MaskedMulatto]
    #2104621 - 11/14/03 03:34 AM (13 years, 26 days ago)

As mnetioned above,

Outstanding, you're an excellent writer Bom, you should share with us much more often.


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