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plektheplek



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Rate This Song 1
#19363553 - 01/03/14 01:54 PM (10 years, 27 days ago) |
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The audio could use a little work but I could only work with so much on a budget. I think the song goes hard, what do you think?
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andrewmurray86
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Is it your work?
The intro seems very mechanical, is it a guitar sample that has been tweaked?
To be honest it's not really my style but the lyrics seem like they are struggling for flow and content. There are pauses that seem like the guy ran out of breath or forget the line. There are references to other rappers like Tupac and Cypress Hill but they don't make sense? The lyrics jump back and forth in regards to content, talking bout his son, the cypress hill then weed then his son then a woman then his son again.
There is potential here but it needs major work. I know it's hard composing beats and harder to write good lyrics. Perhaps the artist should focus on perfecting one of the 2 and working with someone else to do the other unless that is the case already.
I know this is harsh, its just my honest feedback, not meant to hurt. I'm sorry if it does.
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plektheplek



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Hey, at least it's feedback. It's not my best work it's just a freestyle but I think the vocals go hard. I've got a bunch of songs out there but this is in my top 5 or 10 favorites. I see where your coming from it's far from perfect and almost seems incomplete but it was a one-take kind of a thing
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andrewmurray86
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Here is some white boy hip-hop or skip-hop 
I really like this for its lyrical content and production.
same artist but this one might be more your style?? I won't make too much assumption
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andrewmurray86
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Quote:
plektheplek said: Hey, at least it's feedback. It's not my best work it's just a freestyle but I think the vocals go hard. I've got a bunch of songs out there but this is in my top 5 or 10 favorites. I see where your coming from it's far from perfect and almost seems incomplete but it was a one-take kind of a thing
yeah being a free-style makes me look at this in a better light man!
why didn't you say so?
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plektheplek



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Sorry, my entire album "Dragonflies In The City" was freestyle I guess that little piece of info should have been thrown into the mix. Anyways, if you want to hear more of my material just search Youtube for Infinite Prose
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plektheplek



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Yo andrewmurray86 check these out
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andrewmurray86
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Oh snap man, that first one Sasha Grey Whispering was off the chain. Loved that one. That line about the bubble - blow me was gold.
Second one, the beat was better than the lyrics for me. It didn't seem to have the flow and bounce that the first one did. Still good though!
Third one was good with the flow and intertwining artists coming in on vocal. The beat was a bit empty though. I reckon it could have had more in there to beef it up and fill it out.
That's good man. Cheers for posting these 
Here is a track called Knee Length Socks by the same artist as the other videos, I don't want to paint a picture that this is the only hip-hop artist in Aus but I couldn't ignore the title :P
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plektheplek



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Hahaha oh shit Knee Socks Up meets Knee Length Socks
I'm lovin it
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Synthe
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I couldn't really judge the quality of the song in your OP since your voice was fuzzy... I couldn't tell if I liked it or hated it.
The other three you posted though, I liked them all...
on the kmk reference, I was going to post a such thread but I forgot
But yeah I thought the beats on the other 3 you posted were great.
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plektheplek



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Re: Rate This Song [Re: Synthe]
#19396169 - 01/09/14 10:03 PM (10 years, 21 days ago) |
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Right on. Sorry for not stating that this song was a freestyle from the start, i guess that comes into play when you rate the song
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plektheplek



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Here's a clean, kid-friendly track I did a couple of years back
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