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OfflineHappyHooligan
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My sexual poem.
    #19257366 - 12/10/13 07:58 PM (10 years, 2 months ago)

The feeling that you give me when you press against me real tight,
Has my body yearning for your loving when I'm in bed alone at night.

& if fucking you is wrong, baby I'd hate to be right,
Because I'm addicted to your warm touch, slow licks & sweet bites


It gets me so hot, thinking of things we could do right now,
Kiss me on my forehead, & then make your way down.

Eat me a little harder, listen to my moans & sounds.
Move your hands across my whole body, grab me all around.


Pull on my hair, because we both like to be tough,
Don't be gently with me, my pussy is soft, but it likes it really rough.

It feels too good, like I never had enough.
I'm begging you to stop, baby please call my bluff.

Never did finish this poem...Literally wrote this about a year ago from today. What do y'all think? :shrug: :heart:  :missionary:


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Re: My sexual poem. [Re: HappyHooligan]
    #19257417 - 12/10/13 08:09 PM (10 years, 2 months ago)

Balls holes alcohol lick my ass and suck my straw


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OfflineHappyHooligan
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Re: My sexual poem. [Re: niteman]
    #19257423 - 12/10/13 08:10 PM (10 years, 2 months ago)

:utterconfusion: lol whaaaat


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Re: My sexual poem. [Re: HappyHooligan]
    #19260250 - 12/11/13 01:45 PM (10 years, 2 months ago)

this sounds like a nursery song.

Poetry does not have to rhyme or be stanza'd the same throughout the entire thing. Doing this simply makes it painfully amateurish.

edit: sorry for being an asshole, poetry's just one of the few things I take seriously.


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Re: My sexual poem. [Re: Snotfish]
    #19260310 - 12/11/13 01:56 PM (10 years, 2 months ago)

I like my poems to rhyme.


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Re: My sexual poem. [Re: Snotfish]
    #19260342 - 12/11/13 02:02 PM (10 years, 2 months ago)

Quote:

Dankfish said:
Poetry does not have to rhyme or be stanza'd the same throughout the entire thing. Doing this simply makes it painfully amateurish.





I wrote this in the notes app on my phone, & on my phone its just one large paragraph, but I actually prefer stanzas. And  I don't always do AA AA BB BB etc rhyme, that's just how this one ended up.

This was just a cute sexy thing I sent to my boyfriend last year. It is suppose to be "amateurish"


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Re: My sexual poem. [Re: HappyHooligan]
    #19262540 - 12/11/13 08:22 PM (10 years, 2 months ago)

Don't listen to him. Some of the greatest poets of of all time have written simple, ryhming poems just like yours. It is more important that you write what you truly believe or feel and that it is sincere and personal to you. Anyone who calls that "amateurish", obviously doesn't take poetry as seriouslh as they think. Dont let anyone ever tell you otherwise. You could be the next Robert Frost or Ralph Waldo Emerson for all you know.


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Re: My sexual poem. [Re: niteman]
    #19262755 - 12/11/13 09:01 PM (10 years, 2 months ago)

:happyclaps:  Awwww thanks!!


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Re: My sexual poem. [Re: niteman]
    #19263476 - 12/11/13 11:13 PM (10 years, 2 months ago)

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niteman said:
Don't listen to him. Some of the greatest poets of of all time have written simple, ryhming poems just like yours. It is more important that you write what you truly believe or feel and that it is sincere and personal to you. Anyone who calls that "amateurish", obviously doesn't take poetry as seriouslh as they think. Dont let anyone ever tell you otherwise. You could be the next Robert Frost or Ralph Waldo Emerson for all you know.




You realize that attempting to rhyme every line takes away a huge portion of words that you really want to use?... just so you can rhyme. Even if it's subconscious, your looking for a word that will rhyme, not one that would best describe what you are trying to convey.


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Re: My sexual poem. [Re: Snotfish]
    #19263992 - 12/12/13 01:32 AM (10 years, 2 months ago)

I just like my poems to rhyme. That's me. Everyone has their own styles, and hey, not all of my poems rhyme, but the ones that do just sound better to me. I don't just write poems either, I love writing stories, hell I even like writing academic essays for school, and I'm currently working on a book. I am open to any kind of feedback, so I appreciate you commenting, even if its not very positive. :laugh:


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