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Short poem I just wrote
    #19061377 - 10/31/13 01:10 AM (10 years, 3 months ago)

Maybe
by N.N

Maybe


I didn’t try my best,
But I tried the best I could.

I don’t expect you to understand,
Though I really wish you would.

I know I’ve been stupid and lazy,
And lonely and weird.
And it’s mighty hard not to give in
To all the worries and all the fears.

So maybe I’m an oddball.
A fuck up.
A goof.
Maybe I am.
But I don’t see any definitive proof.

So let me keep searching,
Even if it takes me farther from the truth.
I’ll find my way back by land or by sea,
And share with the world the beauty I’ve seen.

You can yell or berate me,
And dance on me with your disdain.
I don’t like it but I deserve it,
So I’ll take it all the same.

Now I must go,
I have work left to do.
But I’ll see you on the other side,
Of the ocean between I and you.


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Edited by 28064212 (10/31/13 01:15 AM)


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Re: Short poem I just wrote [Re: 28064212]
    #19061496 - 10/31/13 02:00 AM (10 years, 3 months ago)

Why don't you just do your homework instead of writing threads about how you tried to do your homework.

The poem isn't all that bad, actually.


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Re: Short poem I just wrote [Re: koods]
    #19061514 - 10/31/13 02:08 AM (10 years, 3 months ago)

:asianofapproval:

I really enjoyed this, Ive been hittin some writing road blocks lately.
Very nice, it meant something and I felt a message which is what I believe poetry is about.

DC


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The Real violence, the violence that I realized was unforgiveable
Is the violence that we do to ourselves
When we are too afraid to be, who we really are.


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Re: Short poem I just wrote [Re: Demonic_Chronic]
    #19061809 - 10/31/13 05:11 AM (10 years, 3 months ago)

Sounds like you're trying to write like Dr. Seuss.


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Re: Short poem I just wrote [Re: healing]
    #19062002 - 10/31/13 07:05 AM (10 years, 3 months ago)

I can dig it


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