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junkyardgod
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Metal-Head Attempts Underground Rap? 1
#19053089 - 10/29/13 05:28 PM (10 years, 3 months ago) |
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The verse at 2:04 is my favorite <3
if you listen closely you can hear my veins bleeding passion streams like the sound of rain they drip from the cross that brings you pain my song of violence - violent, soulful rage on the warpath, what will you gain? your heart gets heavy but your death remains the same it's deranged, this game we're meant to play drop dead my dreams of critical change but fuck that, i can't stop until i end this reign my heart gets heavy but my mission stays the same
you're wrong to believe rage and rhetoric a bullet or bloodstain can really settle it always besieged by make believe misery a thousand years of bloodbath histories and it hurts to think that we're on the brink of imminent destruction but i won't give in to the pressure, the obsession to win and do you really think this rhyme means anything when four thousand hungry children leave us per hour and the gunpowder leaves a sour taste in my mouth the smouldering skies part and i can't even shout and you're wrong to believe without any doubt but the rain still cuts and the dirt is washed out this is what revolution is all about
sick of savagery, wrath shed without a reason, so quietly quell these maelstroms in my head - swirling, stumbling, snagging on jagged corners of thought, cold, illogical, dispassionate - how did this happen? fought these embers blazing in my eyes, capillary mass suicide, bloodshot blue, gritted teeth pried from fingers clenched too soon. quiet and quell these iron phantoms, time for piety and this language to be dropped, forgotten, lost, I'm past my hatred, loathing, stop your belligerent lies, negativity, filtered love, no sensibilities, no nobility in this wrath shed from above. I'm sick of savagery, still the earth fills up with blood burning inspiration feeds the numbness inside of me.
Fuck this clutter, jumble, fucking jungle of thoughts and doubts, I've heard enough from myself, from the world at large, touting death and trouble at every intermission, but the crowds can't listen when in chemical bliss. Well, fuck this, there's too much to miss if I worry, don't cast out, don't write down all my intuitions, poetry blossoming in fruition, divine intervention is murdered apprehension. Fuck all the zealots, bigots, pigs running prisons, holding AK's in threatening positions when the whole world could be holding hands - fuck how they say it ends, I've still got my mission to look oblivion in the eye and not cry, embrace a brave disposition. Fuck what the pessimists tell you, try to sell you, misery is not free and will probably kill you. Or if not at least fuck with your head, crush it into the ground, everyone looking on so proud. But not me... This anger boils so passionately, disastrously overflowing into the streets, pushing and shoving, stepping on feet, glaring down passerby so murderously. I can't sleep and the days are getting shorter or maybe my eyes are getting blinder, wider, pupils dilated like quarters - makes sense with the dimes in my bloodstream, cloudy eyes reflecting nothing, nothing, nothing at all. Well nothing is something it just takes some creativity, dreamy reality, obliterated formality. It just takes some love and a semblance of unity, something to hold onto while ignoring the drudgery. Just believe, believe wholeheartedly, and maybe someday I'll see you in eternity.
© - JAM
Edited by junkyardgod (10/30/13 06:40 AM)
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Synthe
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Re: Metal-Head Attempts Underground Rap? [Re: junkyardgod]
#19053143 - 10/29/13 05:35 PM (10 years, 3 months ago) |
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Eh okay but it drags on and the lyrics are unclear
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Re: Metal-Head Attempts Underground Rap? [Re: Synthe] 1
#19053155 - 10/29/13 05:38 PM (10 years, 3 months ago) |
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I liked it, I like the message, we need more people with the knowledge he has
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Tmethyl
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Re: Metal-Head Attempts Underground Rap? [Re: junkyardgod]
#19053162 - 10/29/13 05:38 PM (10 years, 3 months ago) |
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He was very sincere and kicked ass I think. I am proud to see people saying things of this nature, it implies doubt in our culture, which is a good, very good thing. I am going to use this video in a writing I've been working on for months, and for that, thank you.
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Re: Metal-Head Attempts Underground Rap? [Re: Tmethyl]
#19053174 - 10/29/13 05:41 PM (10 years, 3 months ago) |
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Tmethyl said: He was very sincere and kicked ass I think. I am proud to see people saying things of this nature, it implies doubt in our culture, which is a good, very good thing. I am going to use this video in a writing I've been working on for months, and for that, thank you.
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junkyardgod
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Confession: that's actually me haha. Thank you guys for the support/feedback, it's all appreciated and taken to heart. Professionally recorded and edited versions coming soon!
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Re: Metal-Head Attempts Underground Rap? [Re: junkyardgod]
#19053456 - 10/29/13 06:36 PM (10 years, 3 months ago) |
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Haha nice 1
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Tmethyl
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I knew it was you  Just in the way you brought it across, it smelled funny. Nevertheless, well fucking done.
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volcomstoner
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Re: Metal-Head Attempts Underground Rap? [Re: junkyardgod]
#19053837 - 10/29/13 07:34 PM (10 years, 3 months ago) |
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junkyardgod said: Confession: that's actually me haha. Thank you guys for the support/feedback, it's all appreciated and taken to heart. Professionally recorded and edited versions coming soon!
Not bad could use some work on your flow IMO, just keep at it and I think you could have some potential.
My favortite for underground rap Palmer Squares
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koinkedink
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Re: Metal-Head Attempts Underground Rap? [Re: volcomstoner]
#19054064 - 10/29/13 08:17 PM (10 years, 3 months ago) |
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Palmer squares for the win!!!
I'm starting to lose it again Been eating hallucinogens Diamonds in the sky with Lucy again
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Re: Metal-Head Attempts Underground Rap? [Re: junkyardgod]
#19054233 - 10/29/13 08:55 PM (10 years, 3 months ago) |
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Beautiful words and great delivery, man. Never quit doing what you do.
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junkyardgod
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Re: Metal-Head Attempts Underground Rap? [Re: volcomstoner]
#19056379 - 10/30/13 06:26 AM (10 years, 3 months ago) |
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Tmethyl said: I knew it was you  Just in the way you brought it across, it smelled funny. Nevertheless, well fucking done.
Haha it's kind of flattering to be "recognized"...until I remember that I'm a Shroomery Post Whore for things like this ...but honestly, I'm immensely grateful for your words. I'm intrigued by this writing project that you speak of! If my words managed to inspire you in even the merest sense, I am truly humbled. Thank you!
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volcomstoner said: Not bad could use some work on your flow IMO, just keep at it and I think you could have some potential. My favortite for underground rap Palmer Squares
Fawk. That guy is talented at his craft...and just so...entertaining. I can only dream...but alas, I'm so new to performance arts that I can't even fathom the time and mastery involved in his lyrical work. Every piece I've ever written originated as a poem penned on paper, an outpouring of feeling arising from a circumstantial time in my life. Quite randomly I decided to attempt performing some for the first time - and this is what came out. I see so much room for improvement in myself that it frustrates me. I can hear how it /needs/ to sound, but achieving that level of rhythmic resonance is going to take a lot of practice...
I sincerely appreciate your encouragement and feedback man! Cheers!
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Re: Metal-Head Attempts Underground Rap? [Re: junkyardgod]
#19056397 - 10/30/13 06:37 AM (10 years, 3 months ago) |
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Now he should attempt mainstream rap.
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junkyardgod
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Re: Metal-Head Attempts Underground Rap? [Re: Learyfan]
#19056411 - 10/30/13 06:45 AM (10 years, 3 months ago) |
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Everyone should just post their own personal video-attempts at rap too, make this the official VIDEO rap battle thread...BAM...
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volcomstoner
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Re: Metal-Head Attempts Underground Rap? [Re: junkyardgod]
#19056479 - 10/30/13 07:39 AM (10 years, 3 months ago) |
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junkyardgod said: Everyone should just post their own personal video-attempts at rap too, make this the official VIDEO rap battle thread...BAM...
I'll do that one of these days, Imma need some acid for inspiration, and then amphetamines for revisions
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volcomstoner
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Re: Metal-Head Attempts Underground Rap? [Re: volcomstoner]
#19056490 - 10/30/13 07:42 AM (10 years, 3 months ago) |
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Actually elementnature did a freestyle for me and it was pretty goddamn impressive
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