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Offlinejunkyardgod
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Metal-Head Attempts Underground Rap? * 1
    #19053089 - 10/29/13 05:28 PM (10 years, 3 months ago)

The verse at 2:04 is my favorite <3



if you listen closely you can hear my veins
bleeding passion streams like the sound of rain
they drip from the cross that brings you pain
my song of violence - violent, soulful rage
on the warpath, what will you gain?
your heart gets heavy but your death remains the same
it's deranged, this game we're meant to play
drop dead my dreams of critical change
but fuck that, i can't stop until i end this reign
my heart gets heavy but my mission stays the same

you're wrong to believe rage and rhetoric
a bullet or bloodstain can really settle it
always besieged by make believe misery
a thousand years of bloodbath histories
and it hurts to think that we're on the brink
of imminent destruction but i won't give in
to the pressure, the obsession to win
and do you really think this rhyme means anything
when four thousand hungry children leave us per hour
and the gunpowder leaves a sour taste in my mouth
the smouldering skies part and i can't even shout
and you're wrong to believe without any doubt
but the rain still cuts and the dirt is washed out
this is what revolution is all about

sick of savagery, wrath shed
without a reason, so quietly
quell these maelstroms in my head -
swirling, stumbling, snagging
on jagged corners of thought,
cold, illogical, dispassionate -
how did this happen?
fought these embers blazing in my eyes,
capillary mass suicide, bloodshot blue,
gritted teeth pried
from fingers clenched too soon.
quiet and quell these iron phantoms,
time for piety and this language
to be dropped, forgotten, lost,
I'm past my hatred, loathing,
stop your belligerent lies,
negativity, filtered love,
no sensibilities, no nobility
in this wrath shed from above.
I'm sick of savagery,
still the earth fills up with blood
burning inspiration feeds
the numbness inside of me.



Fuck this clutter, jumble, fucking jungle of thoughts and doubts,
I've heard enough from myself, from the world at large,
touting death and trouble at every intermission,
but the crowds can't listen when in chemical bliss.
Well, fuck this, there's too much to miss if I worry,
don't cast out, don't write down all my intuitions,
poetry blossoming in fruition, divine intervention
is murdered apprehension. Fuck all the zealots, bigots,
pigs running prisons, holding AK's in threatening positions
when the whole world could be holding hands -
fuck how they say it ends, I've still got my mission
to look oblivion in the eye and not cry, embrace a brave disposition.
Fuck what the pessimists tell you, try to sell you,
misery is not free and will probably kill you.
Or if not at least fuck with your head,
crush it into the ground, everyone looking on so proud.
But not me...
This anger boils so passionately, disastrously
overflowing into the streets, pushing and shoving,
stepping on feet, glaring down passerby so murderously.
I can't sleep and the days are getting shorter
or maybe my eyes are getting blinder, wider,
pupils dilated like quarters - makes sense with the dimes
in my bloodstream, cloudy eyes reflecting nothing,
nothing, nothing at all. Well nothing is something
it just takes some creativity, dreamy reality, obliterated formality.
It just takes some love and a semblance of unity,
something to hold onto while ignoring the drudgery.
Just believe, believe wholeheartedly,
and maybe someday I'll see you in eternity.

© - JAM


Edited by junkyardgod (10/30/13 06:40 AM)


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Re: Metal-Head Attempts Underground Rap? [Re: junkyardgod]
    #19053143 - 10/29/13 05:35 PM (10 years, 3 months ago)

Eh okay but it drags on and the lyrics are unclear


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Re: Metal-Head Attempts Underground Rap? [Re: Synthe] * 1
    #19053155 - 10/29/13 05:38 PM (10 years, 3 months ago)

I liked it, I like the message, we need more people with the knowledge he has :thumbup: :heart:


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Re: Metal-Head Attempts Underground Rap? [Re: junkyardgod]
    #19053162 - 10/29/13 05:38 PM (10 years, 3 months ago)

He was very sincere and kicked ass I think. I am proud to see people saying things of this nature, it implies doubt in our culture, which is a good, very good thing.
I am going to use this video in a writing I've been working on for months, and for that, thank you.


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Re: Metal-Head Attempts Underground Rap? [Re: Tmethyl]
    #19053174 - 10/29/13 05:41 PM (10 years, 3 months ago)

Quote:

Tmethyl said:
He was very sincere and kicked ass I think. I am proud to see people saying things of this nature, it implies doubt in our culture, which is a good, very good thing.
I am going to use this video in a writing I've been working on for months, and for that, thank you.




:thumbup:


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Re: Metal-Head Attempts Underground Rap? [Re: MystiqueMushroom]
    #19053441 - 10/29/13 06:34 PM (10 years, 3 months ago)

Confession: that's actually me haha. Thank you guys for the support/feedback, it's all appreciated and taken to heart. Professionally recorded and edited versions coming soon!


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Re: Metal-Head Attempts Underground Rap? [Re: junkyardgod]
    #19053456 - 10/29/13 06:36 PM (10 years, 3 months ago)

Haha :highfive1: nice 1


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Re: Metal-Head Attempts Underground Rap? [Re: MystiqueMushroom]
    #19053627 - 10/29/13 07:03 PM (10 years, 3 months ago)

I knew it was you :lol:
Just in the way you brought it across, it smelled funny.
Nevertheless, well fucking done.


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Re: Metal-Head Attempts Underground Rap? [Re: junkyardgod]
    #19053837 - 10/29/13 07:34 PM (10 years, 3 months ago)

Quote:

junkyardgod said:
Confession: that's actually me haha. Thank you guys for the support/feedback, it's all appreciated and taken to heart. Professionally recorded and edited versions coming soon!



Not bad could use some work on your flow IMO, just keep at it and I think you could have some potential.

My favortite for underground rap Palmer Squares


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Re: Metal-Head Attempts Underground Rap? [Re: volcomstoner]
    #19054064 - 10/29/13 08:17 PM (10 years, 3 months ago)

Palmer squares for the win!!!

I'm starting to lose it again
Been eating hallucinogens
Diamonds in the sky with Lucy again


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Re: Metal-Head Attempts Underground Rap? [Re: junkyardgod]
    #19054233 - 10/29/13 08:55 PM (10 years, 3 months ago)

Beautiful words and great delivery, man. Never quit doing what you do. :smile:


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Re: Metal-Head Attempts Underground Rap? [Re: volcomstoner]
    #19056379 - 10/30/13 06:26 AM (10 years, 3 months ago)

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Tmethyl said:
I knew it was you :lol:
Just in the way you brought it across, it smelled funny.
Nevertheless, well fucking done.




Haha it's kind of flattering to be "recognized"...until I remember that I'm a Shroomery Post Whore for things like this :aweohyou: ...but honestly, I'm immensely grateful for your words. I'm intrigued by this writing project that you speak of! If my words managed to inspire you in even the merest sense, I am truly humbled. Thank you!

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Not bad could use some work on your flow IMO, just keep at it and I think you could have some potential.
My favortite for underground rap Palmer Squares




Fawk. That guy is talented at his craft...and just so...entertaining. I can only dream...but alas, I'm so new to performance arts that I can't even fathom the time and mastery involved in his lyrical work. Every piece I've ever written originated as a poem penned on paper, an outpouring of feeling arising from a circumstantial time in my life. Quite randomly I decided to attempt performing some for the first time - and this is what came out. I see so much room for improvement in myself that it frustrates me. I can hear how it /needs/ to sound, but achieving that level of rhythmic resonance is going to take a lot of practice...

I sincerely appreciate your encouragement and feedback man! Cheers!


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Re: Metal-Head Attempts Underground Rap? [Re: junkyardgod]
    #19056397 - 10/30/13 06:37 AM (10 years, 3 months ago)

Now he should attempt mainstream rap. 
















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Re: Metal-Head Attempts Underground Rap? [Re: Learyfan]
    #19056411 - 10/30/13 06:45 AM (10 years, 3 months ago)

Everyone should just post their own personal video-attempts at rap too, make this the official VIDEO rap battle thread...BAM...:onfire:


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Re: Metal-Head Attempts Underground Rap? [Re: junkyardgod]
    #19056479 - 10/30/13 07:39 AM (10 years, 3 months ago)

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junkyardgod said:
Everyone should just post their own personal video-attempts at rap too, make this the official VIDEO rap battle thread...BAM...:onfire:



I'll do that one of these days, Imma need some acid for inspiration, and then amphetamines for revisions :lol:


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Re: Metal-Head Attempts Underground Rap? [Re: volcomstoner]
    #19056490 - 10/30/13 07:42 AM (10 years, 3 months ago)

Actually elementnature did a freestyle for me and it was pretty goddamn impressive


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