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eltonjohn
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What do you feel about my new music
#19017396 - 10/23/13 01:59 AM (10 years, 3 months ago) |
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Im 20, play piano, and (try to) sing, trying to make a something out of music.
What do you think of these sounds/songs i have made.
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Re: What do you feel about my new music [Re: eltonjohn]
#19017501 - 10/23/13 03:10 AM (10 years, 3 months ago) |
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I listened to about a minute of the first one, I'm short on time but here is some constructive criticism
1.Some lyrics were inaudible and a tad whiny
2.Very inconsistent pitch
3.You don't have one or two styles it seems your tryig to make it funk , rock, electro and all this other good stuff,stick to a few genres if you can
Keep working on it though, I didn't think it was horrible
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Re: What do you feel about my new music [Re: eltonjohn]
#19017528 - 10/23/13 03:29 AM (10 years, 3 months ago) |
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I see what you mean with Quote:
(try to) sing

Also, sounds like you've cut everything below 300hz or so.. Need moar bass right meow 
Other than that, keep working
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eltonjohn
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Re: What do you feel about my new music [Re: rulesq]
#19025762 - 10/24/13 01:37 PM (10 years, 3 months ago) |
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Appreciate the feedback. More bass is a must Yeah sometimes i sound or feel whiny when i sing, dunno, its just how it comes out naturally. And yes im trying to find my sound, so i end up going around and hitting a lot of different genres, not necessarily on purpose.
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Re: What do you feel about my new music [Re: eltonjohn]
#19025938 - 10/24/13 02:10 PM (10 years, 3 months ago) |
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im into it so far mayne...waiting for a bea to drop...is it gonnaaaaa
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Re: What do you feel about my new music [Re: berdinwall]
#19025944 - 10/24/13 02:11 PM (10 years, 3 months ago) |
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on the first song I say use tthat as your intro then drop into a deep bass with a hard kick....clean sounding
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Re: What do you feel about my new music [Re: eltonjohn]
#19026019 - 10/24/13 02:23 PM (10 years, 3 months ago) |
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ur name is elton john lol i really like honky cat
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