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Offlineeltonjohn
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What do you feel about my new music
    #19017396 - 10/23/13 01:59 AM (10 years, 3 months ago)

Im 20, play piano, and (try to) sing, trying to make a something out of music.

What do you think of these sounds/songs i have made.





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OfflineSeriously_trippin
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Re: What do you feel about my new music [Re: eltonjohn]
    #19017501 - 10/23/13 03:10 AM (10 years, 3 months ago)

I listened to about a minute of the first one, I'm short on time but
here is some constructive criticism

1.Some lyrics were inaudible and a tad whiny

2.Very inconsistent pitch

3.You don't have one or two styles it seems your tryig to make it funk , rock, electro and all this other good stuff,stick to a few genres if you can

Keep working on it though, I didn't think it was horrible


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Re: What do you feel about my new music [Re: eltonjohn]
    #19017528 - 10/23/13 03:29 AM (10 years, 3 months ago)

I see what you mean with
Quote:

(try to) sing


:lol:

Also, sounds like you've cut everything below 300hz or so..
Need moar bass right meow :crankey:

Other than that, keep working :thumbup:


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Offlineeltonjohn
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Re: What do you feel about my new music [Re: rulesq]
    #19025762 - 10/24/13 01:37 PM (10 years, 3 months ago)

Appreciate the feedback.
More bass is a must
Yeah sometimes i sound or feel whiny when i sing, dunno, its just how it comes out naturally.
And yes im trying to find my sound, so i end up going around and hitting a lot of different genres, not necessarily on purpose.


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Re: What do you feel about my new music [Re: eltonjohn]
    #19025938 - 10/24/13 02:10 PM (10 years, 3 months ago)

im into it so far mayne...waiting for a bea to drop...is it gonnaaaaa


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Re: What do you feel about my new music [Re: berdinwall]
    #19025944 - 10/24/13 02:11 PM (10 years, 3 months ago)

on the first song I say use tthat as your intro then drop into a deep bass with a hard kick....clean sounding


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Re: What do you feel about my new music [Re: eltonjohn]
    #19026019 - 10/24/13 02:23 PM (10 years, 3 months ago)

ur name is elton john lol i really like honky cat


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