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InvisibleBest In The World
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My newest song
    #18917810 - 10/01/13 07:06 PM (10 years, 4 months ago)

I hope you guys enjoy. I've spent an entire 2 months working on this and finally it's finished! Give it a listen and hope it doesn't disappoint. Any advice/constructive criticism is allowed :thumbup:



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Re: My newest song [Re: Best In The World]
    #18917868 - 10/01/13 07:18 PM (10 years, 4 months ago)

i like it, but if i had to say anything...

when you rap, it seems forced instead of just flowin. nah mean?


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Re: My newest song [Re: Not Responding]
    #18917873 - 10/01/13 07:20 PM (10 years, 4 months ago)

Yeah my producer always tells me to sound aggressive, so I try to force more anger in the song. I'll definitely get that flow to sound natural soon


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Re: My newest song [Re: Best In The World]
    #18917890 - 10/01/13 07:24 PM (10 years, 4 months ago)

other than that, it sounds good.

natural was the word i was looking for...


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So I don't care if it will break my heart,
Just fuck me till I disappear





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Re: My newest song [Re: Not Responding]
    #18917895 - 10/01/13 07:25 PM (10 years, 4 months ago)

oh, i wasnt talking about emotions...

i was talking more about word flow.


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So I don't care if it will break my heart,
Just fuck me till I disappear





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Re: My newest song [Re: Best In The World] * 2
    #18917989 - 10/01/13 07:44 PM (10 years, 4 months ago)

FUCKIN CHANGSTA SON

COMIN IN HARD SPITTIN FIRE

Damn OP I didn't know you were Changsta. Why don't you rep the name man?


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Re: My newest song [Re: propensity]
    #18918028 - 10/01/13 07:53 PM (10 years, 4 months ago)

I should've just kept my name that way but I wanted a name change. Oh well :frown: I should've just kept it the way it was. Glad you like the song though! I'll keep making more in the near future :smile::thumbup:


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Re: My newest song [Re: Best In The World]
    #18919860 - 10/02/13 07:38 AM (10 years, 4 months ago)

oh! youre that asian kid that works for your dad at that Los Pollos Hermanos spot, right?


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So I don't care if it will break my heart,
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Re: My newest song [Re: Not Responding]
    #18919871 - 10/02/13 07:42 AM (10 years, 4 months ago)

As long as you're clear Im not clear unless I'm singing or drunk. I just mumble and speak low:lol:


Edited by Konyap (10/02/13 07:43 AM)


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Re: My newest song [Re: Konyap]
    #18922766 - 10/02/13 06:20 PM (10 years, 4 months ago)

Quote:

Not Responding said:
oh! youre that asian kid that works for your dad at that Los Pollos Hermanos spot, right?




:lol: You got me.

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Illyabo said:
As long as you're clear Im not clear unless I'm singing or drunk. I just mumble and speak low:lol:




It takes practice and patience haha if you listen to my first rap I ever made, I am not clear at all. It got me this far to get to where I'm at now, but definitely nowhere near perfect.


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Re: My newest song [Re: Best In The World]
    #18922775 - 10/02/13 06:22 PM (10 years, 4 months ago)

CM Punk is such a qt


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Re: My newest song [Re: Best In The World]
    #18924522 - 10/03/13 05:11 AM (10 years, 4 months ago)

:sunspots:


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Dear Kratom,

I've been numb for so long that I forgot how to feel
So I don't care if it will break my heart,
Just fuck me till I disappear





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Re: My newest song [Re: Best In The World]
    #18925198 - 10/03/13 10:04 AM (10 years, 4 months ago)

Thanks my brother recently sent me a trakc he made in Ohio. His wife was the firstr one that suggested that he send me it, but I found out earlier that he sent me a track from a different rap artist, it wasn't him that was singing it was this other person. Later on I discovered that he was planning on moving his studio to France and recording new songs there, and he was also trying to find someone that could register the music essentials into a medium which would transcend the barrier of sound. Anyway he recently told me his wife had sent a producer a telegram stating that she thought his music should reach a fanbase larger than original, and so she is waiting for them to send her a response, though they said it may take up to 8 weeks for them to get back to her.


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Re: My newest song [Re: drkkenny]
    #18925432 - 10/03/13 11:32 AM (10 years, 4 months ago)

Changsta's back?
Awwwwww shiiiiitttttttt.
Shroomery just got real as fuck.


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Re: My newest song [Re: shLong]
    #18925438 - 10/03/13 11:36 AM (10 years, 4 months ago)

:kenthumbup:  :celery:  :fireworship:  :dj:  :reachforthelasers:  :dj:  :dj:  :dj:  :dj:


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Re: My newest song [Re: shLong]
    #18927676 - 10/03/13 07:46 PM (10 years, 4 months ago)

:thumbup: Glad you like it! :lol: Long time no see shLong :chinaman:


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Re: My newest song [Re: Best In The World]
    #18927711 - 10/03/13 07:52 PM (10 years, 4 months ago)

lol Changsta


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Re: My newest song [Re: Best In The World]
    #18927735 - 10/03/13 07:56 PM (10 years, 4 months ago)

im gonna go ahead and let my chick suck your dick, but im gonna want some money once you make it and a lifetime membership to your chicken spot.


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So I don't care if it will break my heart,
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Re: My newest song [Re: Not Responding]
    #18933142 - 10/04/13 08:51 PM (10 years, 4 months ago)

:highfive1: Sounds like a plan.


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Re: My newest song [Re: Best In The World]
    #18933470 - 10/04/13 10:05 PM (10 years, 4 months ago)

nice man!


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