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Offlinejunkyardgod
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My first attempt at a freestyle rap video...go easy on me fellas...
    #18861030 - 09/18/13 11:40 PM (10 years, 5 months ago)



sick of savagery, wrath shed
without a reason, so quietly
quell these maelstroms in my head,
swirling, stumbling, snagging
on jagged corners of thought,
cold, illogical, dispassionate -
how did this happen?
fought these embers blazing in my eyes,
capillary mass suicide, bloodshot blue,
gritted teeth pried from
fingers clenched too soon.
quiet and quell these iron phantoms,
time for piety and this language
to be dropped, forgotten, lost,
I’m past my hatred, loathing,
stop your belligerent lies,
negativity, filtered love,
no sensibilities, no nobility
in this wrath shed from above.
I’m sick of savagery,
still the earth fills up with blood,
burning inspiration feeds
the numbness inside of me.


Edited by junkyardgod (01/26/14 04:21 PM)


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OfflineMush4Brains
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Re: My first attempt at a freestyle rap video...go easy on me fellas... [Re: junkyardgod]
    #18861039 - 09/18/13 11:43 PM (10 years, 5 months ago)



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Re: My first attempt at a freestyle rap video...go easy on me fellas... [Re: junkyardgod]
    #18861063 - 09/18/13 11:49 PM (10 years, 5 months ago)

Turn the bass down/ get a better mic I couldn't hear you...


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Re: My first attempt at a freestyle rap video...go easy on me fellas... [Re: TrentBoyett]
    #18861065 - 09/18/13 11:49 PM (10 years, 5 months ago)

Not pressing play.


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Re: My first attempt at a freestyle rap video...go easy on me fellas... [Re: TrentBoyett]
    #18861098 - 09/18/13 11:59 PM (10 years, 5 months ago)

Quote:

mjmihalov said:
Turn the bass down/ get a better mic I couldn't hear you...



well this

but your room looks like really cool and cozy for some reason to me, it's like everything in your room I've only ever had positive associations with or something


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OfflineLSDreams
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Re: My first attempt at a freestyle rap video...go easy on me fellas... [Re: Mush4Brains]
    #18861109 - 09/19/13 12:05 AM (10 years, 5 months ago)

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Mush4Brains said:




:loldongs: ...after the video, I scroll down and I immediately see 50 cent at the start of the gif.

But yeah.. the lyrics were barely distinguishable from the beat. Record with fruity loops or a program similar.


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Re: My first attempt at a freestyle rap video...go easy on me fellas... [Re: Sheekle]
    #18861112 - 09/19/13 12:06 AM (10 years, 5 months ago)

Quote:

Sheekle said:
but your room looks like really cool and cozy for some reason to me, it's like everything in your room I've only ever had positive associations with or something




Was thinking this as well...


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Re: My first attempt at a freestyle rap video...go easy on me fellas... [Re: TrentBoyett]
    #18861158 - 09/19/13 12:22 AM (10 years, 5 months ago)

lyrics 7/10

voice 6/10

beat 8/10

video quality 2/10

room 10/10


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OfflineShiVersblood
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Re: My first attempt at a freestyle rap video...go easy on me fellas... [Re: NWlight]
    #18861168 - 09/19/13 12:27 AM (10 years, 5 months ago)

Video not working in my phone


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