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junkyardgod
A psychedelic mess.


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My first attempt at a freestyle rap video...go easy on me fellas...
#18861030 - 09/18/13 11:40 PM (10 years, 5 months ago) |
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sick of savagery, wrath shed without a reason, so quietly quell these maelstroms in my head, swirling, stumbling, snagging on jagged corners of thought, cold, illogical, dispassionate - how did this happen? fought these embers blazing in my eyes, capillary mass suicide, bloodshot blue, gritted teeth pried from fingers clenched too soon. quiet and quell these iron phantoms, time for piety and this language to be dropped, forgotten, lost, I’m past my hatred, loathing, stop your belligerent lies, negativity, filtered love, no sensibilities, no nobility in this wrath shed from above. I’m sick of savagery, still the earth fills up with blood, burning inspiration feeds the numbness inside of me.
Edited by junkyardgod (01/26/14 04:21 PM)
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Mush4Brains
LOOL HACKED!!!

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Re: My first attempt at a freestyle rap video...go easy on me fellas... [Re: junkyardgod]
#18861039 - 09/18/13 11:43 PM (10 years, 5 months ago) |
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TrentBoyett
Aspiring Mycologist



Registered: 11/29/12
Posts: 16,000
Loc: Kazakhstan
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Re: My first attempt at a freestyle rap video...go easy on me fellas... [Re: junkyardgod]
#18861063 - 09/18/13 11:49 PM (10 years, 5 months ago) |
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Turn the bass down/ get a better mic I couldn't hear you...
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Shroomopotamus
Happy Mushrooming




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Re: My first attempt at a freestyle rap video...go easy on me fellas... [Re: TrentBoyett]
#18861065 - 09/18/13 11:49 PM (10 years, 5 months ago) |
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Not pressing play.
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Sheekle
FREE BURKE



Registered: 01/11/10
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Re: My first attempt at a freestyle rap video...go easy on me fellas... [Re: TrentBoyett]
#18861098 - 09/18/13 11:59 PM (10 years, 5 months ago) |
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Quote:
mjmihalov said: Turn the bass down/ get a better mic I couldn't hear you...
well this
but your room looks like really cool and cozy for some reason to me, it's like everything in your room I've only ever had positive associations with or something
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LSDreams
Contemplative Stoner



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Re: My first attempt at a freestyle rap video...go easy on me fellas... [Re: Mush4Brains]
#18861109 - 09/19/13 12:05 AM (10 years, 5 months ago) |
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Quote:
Mush4Brains said:

...after the video, I scroll down and I immediately see 50 cent at the start of the gif.
But yeah.. the lyrics were barely distinguishable from the beat. Record with fruity loops or a program similar.
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TrentBoyett
Aspiring Mycologist



Registered: 11/29/12
Posts: 16,000
Loc: Kazakhstan
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Re: My first attempt at a freestyle rap video...go easy on me fellas... [Re: Sheekle]
#18861112 - 09/19/13 12:06 AM (10 years, 5 months ago) |
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Quote:
Sheekle said: but your room looks like really cool and cozy for some reason to me, it's like everything in your room I've only ever had positive associations with or something
Was thinking this as well...
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NWlight
Just look


Registered: 01/12/10
Posts: 18,686
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Re: My first attempt at a freestyle rap video...go easy on me fellas... [Re: TrentBoyett]
#18861158 - 09/19/13 12:22 AM (10 years, 5 months ago) |
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lyrics 7/10
voice 6/10
beat 8/10
video quality 2/10
room 10/10
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ShiVersblood
VAmPiRES HELLA ❤



Registered: 08/18/07
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Re: My first attempt at a freestyle rap video...go easy on me fellas... [Re: NWlight]
#18861168 - 09/19/13 12:27 AM (10 years, 5 months ago) |
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Video not working in my phone
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