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Moonshoe
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Futurology was written partly in order to construct a setting for a character driven science fiction narrative. If you would like to read that story, it can be found in this thread (page 2):
http://www.shroomery.org/forums/showflat.php/Number/18724220/fpart/2/vc/1
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BlueCoyote
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BlueCoyote said: Where else did you publish it ? 
Sorry for me it's a wall of text. Kind of a short story... I tried to start several times, but I imagine if that style continues the whole text, then it's hard work to read.
Can you compress the content of it somehow ? Or better post it in poetry forum ? 
It's 14 pages in paragraph form, so if that's too much reading for you I recommend just reading it a few paragraphs at a time . If you've ever read a book this should be easy going however, although the language is a bit dense.
I also published it in the pub where its gotten some positive responses, and also through my peer network with a positive reception.
I'm happy to get good or bad reviews, I just appreciate when people take the time to read it.
I can't really compress it any more than it is, although it could be broken up into topical chapters.
I would love to see someone try to turn it into a poem, but I won't attempt that myself

Haha, come on, that's gross, aeh I mean textual artform, aeh I mean, lyric ... not prosa anymore
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OrgoneConclusion
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OrgoneConclusion said: Fiction that you believe in is called what?
Sincere fiction?
Nope. The amount that you wiggle to cover your dishonesty is quite amazing and not at all spiritual.
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Moonshoe
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OrgoneConclusion said: Fiction that you believe in is called what?
Sincere fiction?
Nope. The amount that you wiggle to cover your dishonesty is quite amazing and not at all spiritual.
What dishonesty is that?
No idea what you are talking about. Are you feeling confused?
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OrgoneConclusion
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As per usual, you need to be spoon-fed on obvious points.
For the hard of reading: DO YOU BELIEVE REMOTE VIEWING IS A REAL ABILITY?
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Moonshoe
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OrgoneConclusion said: As per usual, you need to be spoon-fed on obvious points.
For the hard of reading: DO YOU BELIEVE REMOTE VIEWING IS A REAL ABILITY?
You have severely dysfunctional communication skills.
I do not know if remote viewing is a real ability or not. I have read that it is, and I suspect it may be, but I do not know for sure one way or the other.
Now I will ask you a question. How old are you these days?
And why are you so cantankerous all the time?
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OrgoneConclusion
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I do not know if remote viewing is a real ability or not. I have read that it is,
Are words alone convincing? Are you unaware that you can also read that it is total BS?
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Moonshoe
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I do not know if remote viewing is a real ability or not. I have read that it is,
Are words alone convincing? Are you unaware that you can also read that it is total BS?
No, words alone are not convincing. That's why I said I don't know for sure one way or the other.
You really are sort of having a conversation with yourself, it would seem.

It must suck imagining things that piss you off all the time.
You should try piracetam, noopept and citicoline.
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