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InvisibleOri
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my CG paintover help...
    #1827733 - 08/18/03 09:09 PM (14 years, 8 months ago)

OK, first off read this carefully :smile: a member of a forum i moderate wanted some help on his first CG, so here is his original CG



well, i noticed a lot of mistakes and wanted to help so i told him what he needed to improve at first, but then i realized i Really needed some CG practice, and this is right up my alley so i did a quick little draw over while on the phone half the time



so the bottom edit is mine, i didn't really focus on detail, especially the shoulder area since i couldn't understand how he was drawing it there, but i had some fun with the shoulder/arm since he didn't touch it

a little choppy but i like my edits, i'm surprised how good his hair looked once you simply smudge it--i'll have to remember that for the future

btw i hate the eyebrows i did ;x but i bet you can tell what i payed attention to the least
 


Edited by Ori (08/18/03 09:10 PM)


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OfflineStrumpling
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Re: my CG paintover help... [Re: Ori]
    #1828674 - 08/19/03 04:40 AM (14 years, 8 months ago)

you're right that hair does look really good :smile:

nice edit man!


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Re: my CG paintover help... [Re: Strumpling]
    #1828722 - 08/19/03 05:15 AM (14 years, 8 months ago)

do you want a serious critique on the pic? :smile:

I think it looks pretty good, but I can see a lot of areas that need improvement.  I'd be happy to give you a more detailed crit if you like :smile:


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InvisibleOri
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Re: my CG paintover help... [Re: Turd]
    #1830013 - 08/19/03 04:07 PM (14 years, 8 months ago)

Quote:

Turd said:
do you want a serious critique on the pic? :smile:

I think it looks pretty good, but I can see a lot of areas that need improvement.  I'd be happy to give you a more detailed crit if you like :smile:
 




well posting art on forums usually means people looking for crit
but since this post is just my crit on another guys work, i think he already has the point
if youd like to crit mine though sure be my guest :smile:
i'm no artist in the least, i suck with paper unless its anime and i need to work with anatomy, shading etc.. eh

but i guess this post left nothing open for replies, i just felt like showing something ive done recently and uhm man i need some more practice.. i really wish i had something more to strike my interest but i mostly like CGing women, i might try skinning a full 3d model for a change 


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