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Simple poetry
    #17519659 - 01/08/13 09:16 PM (11 years, 1 month ago)

Just some simple poetry as the title says that i've written recently while i was bored. Feel free to read, hate, love, rant, troll, flame, spam, whatever. On this i enjoy any kind of criticism as it all contributes to the final product. Or you could just ignore it.

Trapped in the confines of my mind
My thoughts run wild, tearing at me
But sanity i needn't find
For enemies, i will not be so kind

Sanity is overrated
Even though i may be hated
I find myself oddly pleased
As my sanity is seized

I break off from the daily grind
Those simple things which bore me
The only part left of my mind
The bitter hardened rind

I am that which people shun
My creation can not be undone
I am myself and that alone
By ritual i should be stoned

By now i have been left behind
Their reason for deserting me
It involves not my mind
But that their sanity i would bind.

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Deep, dark, black,
Black as night,
When stars are gone,
And no moon bright
Demons lurk
Beneath the shades.
Grasping and grabbing,
Pulling us into
Sorrow, regret, sadness.
These are things we all experience.
And once now and then,
When things go bad,
These demons watch,
Then take advantage.
Whispering vain and evil words,
They seep into your soul.
Now looking deep
Into the darkness
Where evil lurks and pounces.
It weaves its lies.
It tells its tales.
False confidence, joy, pleasure,
They determine your demise.
You can't break free.
They pull you in.
Do evil damages not undone.
Forgiveness lacks
In souls of others.
Disgust is painted on their face.
Yet, they know
They are the same.

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Confusion rules here
It traps our minds
It takes us for a ride.
Now we're lost.
We forget the way.
We try to go back
To a simpler day.
Instead we find
Another trap or two,
And slowly, but surely
You lose your mind.
You're desperate to escape.
You've tried so hard
You'll choose anything easy.
Slit, hang,choke, drown,
Die.
Death is the final trap.
You can't escape.
Crash, burn, scream,
It's the last thing you'll hear,
The last thing you'll see.
When the final trap springs,
You're all alone,
No one for comfort,
You have no one to hold.
As death closes in,
You hold your breath,
Your heart thumps,
Slower, sputter, STOP!
Tears pour, whispers run,
Apologies and thanks
For all you've done.
Hearing none of it,
You're no longer there.
Death creped in
With its snarling stare.
Now people change,
To honor you.
Only in death they do.
Now your pain ends.
Is death so bad?
Your life was long,
But your death was fast.
Your heart skipped a beat,
or two, or three.
Then it's over,
Quite simple i believe.
But yet, I've never
Had this pleasure.
So i hope some day,
In the near future,
That death comes quick,
And finds me sooner,
That I may die
And leave this world
Of pain and torture.
They will trap me no more.

____________

fell those masochistic demons
down to the depths of hades
ripped from heaven and this world
to burn at satan's hands

they scream in terror
cry for mercy
selfish greed mongrels, all
they suffer still

these wretched people's pain unending
morals ceasing
sins surmounting
these ugly beasts are you!

_____________

White noise clamors in my head
a desolate void of screaming
an endless torment ripping at my mind
this displeasing pain of solitude.

in this despair i find no rest
this torture festers in my flesh
my morals melt to molten steel
once strong now week and burning

my anger boils in my thoughts
my pain is unrelenting
and in a fit of blood and horror
i snap.

______________

Well that's all, like, hate, what do you think of it? I've got a few more but seeing as that was back when i was teetering between different religious beliefs, i'm really not in the mood to water the seeds of arrogance already present in several shroomerites who frequent these forums. Don't focus on this statement, just the poetry. Troll the poetry not me, do me a favor like that please?


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Re: Simple poetry [Re: wormwood whack]
    #17520331 - 01/09/13 12:25 AM (11 years, 1 month ago)

pretty morbid dude. not bad tho. reminds me of my depressive self deprecating 'poetry'


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Re: Simple poetry [Re: quinn]
    #17521069 - 01/09/13 07:47 AM (11 years, 1 month ago)

yeah morbid comes easier for me. thanks!


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