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Shroomism
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A tale of Creation
#1595357 - 05/30/03 11:58 PM (20 years, 7 months ago) |
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This is an original poem I've been writing over the past couple days. This is sort of the rough draft...let me know what you think.
Once upon a rhyme, in a far away place There was a small thought, just drifting through space It pondered for aeons and suddenly realized The nature of thought, and meaning of life To always evolve, experience and learn Forever and ever - with love and discern
It took upon itself to create space and time And then thought to itself, "My, this is quite fine" But after awhile it became rather bored And simply could not learn a thing anymore But then all at once had a brilliant insight "I will divide myself into an army of light!"
This was rather ingenious you see To experience mutliple subjective realities For trillions of years they surfed through the sea A vast pool of souls that were pure energy Pitching and rolling, and morphing like waves There was simply no end to the synergy game
They knew not of hatred, nor malice or pain But only the bliss that eternity brang But then once again it reached critical mass And could no longer learn from the inner cosmic class So in all of it's glory and divine insight It sought once again to make it's plan airtight
"I will devise stars, planets, and moons They all will revolve perfectly in tune And upon their surface I will incorporate Millions of cycles in harmonic ways As above, so below, from atom to space And this shall be called the physical plane"
This will be a place of polar extremes The final last stop for souls and their teams "My divided selves will fall far from grace To see through the eyes of angelic disdain" To learn from mistakes is to always improve "Thus I shall teach the darkness to groove"
And so it created a wonderous place Full of experiences, pleasure and pain And within every singly thing Encoded itself, complete, perfectly Within the elements the endless synergy A perfect balance to last eternally
The Sun, the flowers, oceans and trees The crystals, the mountains, the birds and the bees All this is so perfect to experience this realm The symbiotic cycle of nature at the helm Within every being the potential is there Omniscient creation with the original they share
But what could complete this magnificient feat? A vehicle for spirit to learn from this treat A physical body, as perfect as mine To taste of this world which I have designed A limited possession of matter and breath For which to perceive all life until death
Human as one, yes we are the same Separate illusion, until we reclaim The reconnection of spiritual sight The next stage of death - a body of light So come sacred one - be not afraid Thy consciousness will is simply to aid
So with every joy and every tear With every doubt and every fear Remember the source from whence you came Human as one yes we are the same
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Re: A tale of Creation [Re: Shroomism]
#1595381 - 05/31/03 12:08 AM (20 years, 7 months ago) |
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thats absolutely wonderful. the self replicating molecule... the very fabric of our physical creation in the whole idea of enterninty. cosntantly stretching... multiplying itself with no obvious beginning or end. i really really liked that .
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Re: A tale of Creation [Re: Shroomism]
#1595415 - 05/31/03 12:22 AM (20 years, 7 months ago) |
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That is a well written poem ! 
You express creativity very nicely !!
Thanx for posting a sample of your mind ! 
It's GRRrRrrRrRrRrRrrrreeeat !!!

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Re: A tale of Creation [Re: Shroomism]
#1595440 - 05/31/03 12:33 AM (20 years, 7 months ago) |
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I love it! But, I am completely insane so I don't know how much my opinion counts. 
j/k
good poem
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Re: A tale of Creation [Re: Shroomism]
#1595546 - 05/31/03 01:28 AM (20 years, 7 months ago) |
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Fooking wonderful poem Shroomism! 
There were just a few lines that didn't ryme.
-------------------- What if everything around you Isn't quite as it seems? What if all the world you think you know, Is an elaborate dream? And if you look at your reflection, Is it all you want it to be?
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Re: A tale of Creation [Re: Murex]
#1595579 - 05/31/03 01:48 AM (20 years, 7 months ago) |
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very nice cosmic poetry!! but i like them short and sweet.. hiting my head at the speed of light breacking the illusion of a ticking clock before my mind gets up and wanders off.
lol my first attempt at poetry so please dont laugh
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Re: A tale of Creation [Re: buckwheat]
#1595703 - 05/31/03 04:31 AM (20 years, 7 months ago) |
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Thanks guys.. I wrote it in three different mind sets over the course of two days.. I first got inspiration for it while drifting off to sleep and sort of lingering in the theta state for a while..you know..watching hypnogogic? imagery and whatnot, and wrote about half of it then. It doesn't all rhyme, and wasn't exactly what I was expecting but eh whatever.. spontaneity.
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Re: A tale of Creation [Re: Shroomism]
#1595779 - 05/31/03 07:35 AM (20 years, 7 months ago) |
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thumbs up
i was seeing some cool visuals going with it
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Re: A tale of Creation [Re: Shroomism]
#1595811 - 05/31/03 08:18 AM (20 years, 7 months ago) |
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beautiful poem, friend. love and light to you
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Re: A tale of Creation [Re: Shroomism]
#1596462 - 05/31/03 02:23 PM (20 years, 7 months ago) |
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Magnificent!!!!!!!!!!!
-------------------- Namaste: "I honour that place in you where the whole Universe resides. And when I am in that place in me and you are in that place in you, there is only one of us."
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Re: A tale of Creation [Re: Spiffy]
#1597736 - 06/01/03 03:42 AM (20 years, 7 months ago) |
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wow, thats really good! do you have more?
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Re: A tale of Creation [Re: cortex]
#1598073 - 06/01/03 11:41 AM (20 years, 7 months ago) |
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Stupendous! I really liked that
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Re: A tale of Creation [Re: KackleDude]
#1598099 - 06/01/03 11:57 AM (20 years, 7 months ago) |
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Wonderful, and beatiful poem Shroomism. not simply because it fit so well together, or the message that was truly real and sincere , yet given to us softly - but a combination of the both.
Whats amazing is what you wrote about is your history as you percieve it (as well as I do!), but instead of saying at the end of the poem "we must change this" or "eventually this happens" etc, you didnt put an agenda with the poem of the nature - you simply described how nature is, in all of its entirety and beauty, and then basically said "Everything is perfect, once we realize that it is!"
and brother that is so true
Good luck, mind if I save this poem to my harddrive or show other people, giving you full credit of course? If not no biggie but come on, its too amazing to keep just here at shroomery
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wow...great poem......it makes since too 
you mind if i share it on another board and get some input?
how would you want me to credit to you or whatever?
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Re: A tale of Creation [Re: Shroomism]
#1598250 - 06/01/03 01:05 PM (20 years, 7 months ago) |
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I liked it, great poem
There was nothing and then there was everything!
-------------------- And the gameshow host rings the buzzer (brrnnntt) oh and now you get a face full of face!
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Re: A tale of Creation [Re: johnnyfive]
#1598437 - 06/01/03 02:47 PM (20 years, 7 months ago) |
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nothing = everything
ingorence is bliss
enlightenment is bliss
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Shroomism
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Thanks again everyone.. Supermarket.. and anyone else who asked.. you have permission to use the poem wherever you want.. credit to shroomism and give a link to the shroomery would be nice.
Namaste
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Re: A tale of Creation [Re: Shroomism]
#5448958 - 03/27/06 08:46 PM (17 years, 10 months ago) |
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..it is great!
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Re: A tale of Creation [Re: Gomp]
#5454835 - 03/29/06 11:35 AM (17 years, 9 months ago) |
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I dig all the compassion on these boards. Poem is perfect. I really like the parts that don't rhyme. Echos of asymmetrical imagination yet naturally sprouts into equilibrium.
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