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A tale of Creation
    #1595357 - 05/31/03 01:58 AM (14 years, 29 days ago)

This is an original poem I've been writing over the past couple days. This is sort of the rough draft...let me know what you think.

Once upon a rhyme, in a far away place
There was a small thought, just drifting through space
It pondered for aeons and suddenly realized
The nature of thought, and meaning of life
To always evolve, experience and learn
Forever and ever - with love and discern

It took upon itself to create space and time
And then thought to itself, "My, this is quite fine"
But after awhile it became rather bored
And simply could not learn a thing anymore
But then all at once had a brilliant insight
"I will divide myself into an army of light!"

This was rather ingenious you see
To experience mutliple subjective realities
For trillions of years they surfed through the sea
A vast pool of souls that were pure energy
Pitching and rolling, and morphing like waves
There was simply no end to the synergy game

They knew not of hatred, nor malice or pain
But only the bliss that eternity brang
But then once again it reached critical mass
And could no longer learn from the inner cosmic class
So in all of it's glory and divine insight
It sought once again to make it's plan airtight

"I will devise stars, planets, and moons
They all will revolve perfectly in tune
And upon their surface I will incorporate
Millions of cycles in harmonic ways
As above, so below, from atom to space
And this shall be called the physical plane"

This will be a place of polar extremes
The final last stop for souls and their teams
"My divided selves will fall far from grace
To see through the eyes of angelic disdain"
To learn from mistakes is to always improve
"Thus I shall teach the darkness to groove"

And so it created a wonderous place
Full of experiences, pleasure and pain
And within every singly thing
Encoded itself, complete, perfectly
Within the elements the endless synergy
A perfect balance to last eternally

The Sun, the flowers, oceans and trees
The crystals, the mountains, the birds and the bees
All this is so perfect to experience this realm
The symbiotic cycle of nature at the helm
Within every being the potential is there
Omniscient creation with the original they share

But what could complete this magnificient feat?
A vehicle for spirit to learn from this treat
A physical body, as perfect as mine
To taste of this world which I have designed
A limited possession of matter and breath
For which to perceive all life until death

Human as one, yes we are the same
Separate illusion, until we reclaim
The reconnection of spiritual sight
The next stage of death - a body of light
So come sacred one - be not afraid
Thy consciousness will is simply to aid

So with every joy and every tear
With every doubt and every fear
Remember the source from whence you came
Human as one yes we are the same


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Re: A tale of Creation [Re: Shroomism]
    #1595381 - 05/31/03 02:08 AM (14 years, 29 days ago)

thats absolutely wonderful. the self replicating molecule... the very fabric of our physical creation in the whole idea of enterninty. cosntantly stretching... multiplying itself with no obvious beginning or end. i really really liked that :wink: .

:grin:


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Re: A tale of Creation [Re: Shroomism]
    #1595415 - 05/31/03 02:22 AM (14 years, 28 days ago)

That is a well written poem !  :laugh:

You express creativity very nicely !!

Thanx for posting a sample of your mind !    :grin:

It's GRRrRrrRrRrRrRrrrreeeat !!!

  :tongue:

 


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Re: A tale of Creation [Re: Shroomism]
    #1595440 - 05/31/03 02:33 AM (14 years, 28 days ago)

I love it!  But, I am completely insane so I don't know how much my opinion counts.  :frown:

j/k

good poem


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Re: A tale of Creation [Re: Shroomism]
    #1595546 - 05/31/03 03:28 AM (14 years, 28 days ago)


Fooking wonderful poem Shroomism!  :shocked:  :laugh:  :wink:


There were just a few lines that didn't ryme.  :blush:


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What if everything around you
Isn't quite as it seems?
What if all the world you think you know,
Is an elaborate dream?
And if you look at your reflection,
Is it all you want it to be?



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Re: A tale of Creation [Re: Murex]
    #1595579 - 05/31/03 03:48 AM (14 years, 28 days ago)

very nice cosmic poetry!!
but i like them short and sweet..
hiting my head at the speed of light
breacking  the illusion of a ticking clock
before my mind gets up and wanders off.

lol my first attempt at poetry so please dont laugh
:grin: 


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Re: A tale of Creation [Re: buckwheat]
    #1595703 - 05/31/03 06:31 AM (14 years, 28 days ago)

Thanks guys.. I wrote it in three different mind sets over the course of two days.. I first got inspiration for it while drifting off to sleep and sort of lingering in the theta state for a while..you know..watching hypnogogic? imagery and whatnot, and wrote about half of it then. It doesn't all rhyme, and wasn't exactly what I was expecting but eh whatever.. spontaneity.


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Re: A tale of Creation [Re: Shroomism]
    #1595779 - 05/31/03 09:35 AM (14 years, 28 days ago)

thumbs up

i was seeing some cool visuals going with it


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Re: A tale of Creation [Re: Shroomism]
    #1595811 - 05/31/03 10:18 AM (14 years, 28 days ago)

beautiful poem, friend. love and light to you


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Re: A tale of Creation [Re: Shroomism]
    #1596462 - 05/31/03 04:23 PM (14 years, 28 days ago)

Magnificent!!!!!!!!!!! :laugh: 


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Re: A tale of Creation [Re: Spiffy]
    #1597736 - 06/01/03 05:42 AM (14 years, 27 days ago)

wow, thats really good! do you have more?


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Re: A tale of Creation [Re: cortex]
    #1598073 - 06/01/03 01:41 PM (14 years, 27 days ago)

Stupendous! I really liked that


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Re: A tale of Creation [Re: KackleDude]
    #1598099 - 06/01/03 01:57 PM (14 years, 27 days ago)

Wonderful, and beatiful poem Shroomism. not simply because it fit so well together, or the message that was truly real and sincere , yet given to us softly - but a combination of the both.

Whats amazing is what you wrote about is your history as you percieve it (as well as I do!), but instead of saying at the end of the poem "we must change this" or "eventually this happens" etc, you didnt put an agenda with the poem of the nature - you simply described how nature is, in all of its entirety and beauty, and then basically said "Everything is perfect, once we realize that it is!"

and brother that is so true


Good luck, mind if I save this poem to my harddrive or show other people, giving you full credit of course? If not no biggie but come on, its too amazing to keep just here at shroomery


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Re: A tale of Creation [Re: tekramrepus]
    #1598201 - 06/01/03 02:43 PM (14 years, 27 days ago)

wow...great poem......it makes since too :smile:

you mind if i share it on another board and get some input?

how would you want me to credit to you or whatever?


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Re: A tale of Creation [Re: Shroomism]
    #1598250 - 06/01/03 03:05 PM (14 years, 27 days ago)

I liked it, great poem

There was nothing and then there was everything!


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Re: A tale of Creation [Re: johnnyfive]
    #1598437 - 06/01/03 04:47 PM (14 years, 27 days ago)

nothing = everything

ingorence is bliss



enlightenment is bliss




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Re: A tale of Creation [Re: tekramrepus]
    #1599423 - 06/01/03 10:21 PM (14 years, 27 days ago)

Thanks again everyone.. Supermarket.. and anyone else who asked.. you have permission to use the poem wherever you want.. credit to shroomism and give a link to the shroomery would be nice.

Namaste


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Re: A tale of Creation [Re: Shroomism]
    #5448958 - 03/27/06 10:46 PM (11 years, 2 months ago)

..it is great!

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Re: A tale of Creation [Re: Gomp]
    #5454835 - 03/29/06 01:35 PM (11 years, 2 months ago)

I dig all the compassion on these boards. Poem is perfect. I really like the parts that don't rhyme. Echos of asymmetrical imagination yet naturally sprouts into equilibrium.


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Re: A tale of Creation [Re: psyillyazul]
    #5456471 - 03/29/06 08:59 PM (11 years, 2 months ago)

Old School Shroomism


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