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InvisibleOscuro_lobo
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Poetry.
    #1524343 - 05/06/03 01:25 PM (13 years, 9 months ago)

Recently a friend of mine sent me a poem i wrote like 5 years ago, that i had forgotten about...
I posted it to my Blog and got some supportive responses to it... was wondering what you guys think of it...

Aprx Feb. 18, 1999

Reflections
-----------
Here I sit
I look in the mirror
I wonder, I ask him why
The answer is one
one that he doesn't have

Quietly, calmly
I'm patient
Waiting
To know the truth

"Look inside" said my reflection
The answer lies there
-------------------- Copyright, Me (of course)

So.. whatcha think? I was 15 when I wrote it.

-ol


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OfflineMojo_Risin
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Re: Poetry. [Re: Oscuro_lobo]
    #1524955 - 05/06/03 05:22 PM (13 years, 9 months ago)

thats pretty neat man


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InvisibleOscuro_lobo
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Re: Poetry. [Re: Mojo_Risin]
    #1525091 - 05/06/03 06:11 PM (13 years, 9 months ago)

Thanks :smile:


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Offlinethestringphish
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Re: Poetry. [Re: Oscuro_lobo]
    #1526751 - 05/07/03 04:20 AM (13 years, 9 months ago)

pretty damn good for 15.


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