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CosmicJoke
happy mutant
Registered: 04/05/00
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Loc: Portland, OR
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wishful thinking
#1460308 - 04/15/03 12:44 PM (20 years, 11 months ago) |
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circles within cicles within.... sometimes while cutting glass i read slower than slugs not that a slug can read by any means but sometimes i read sixlines at a time "people are like chernobyl plants....." and there i am in the midddle of the sahara more like there i am chugging away in three adjacent running wheels at the same time question i: (well this one's more of a declaration)) jesus wasn't a carpenter he was a gardener.... question ii: "let a be dead butterfly..." question iii: i am the only one like me: subtitled (therefore symbol) i am no better for any one for it though. sequenced order of split seconds before pin drops well seems all there were declearations it's like i'm retaining water then i turn around to take another sip of water and it's like shit my water broke war is in the imagination or that's what the sidewalk chalk won't shut it's mouth about me & i read with the best saved for last "dream, love, be" (sorta spoof on question 2) well at least that's how i read it aloud in my head with the punctuation and all she might not have.... o.k. here's my problem (like there's one and even if there was one. like he knows what it was) or at least the basic size and shape of it.... (the short and skinny if you will....) blahblahblahblahblahblah..... i want to write a book but up til now i've only done raps sooo is sole gonna put out my two hundred page album? can i rock a crowd with excerpts? when will i finally get my super powers back? before or after my midlife crisis? crawl back into the vagina invent the airplane crawl back into the vagina invent the windmill look! i'm overreacting again whoaaa ho now, (a little bit of common at cha saunter) i'm changing my life a flick of the wrist... some magick words.... 'catharsis!" "alakawung!" "presto!" i'm overreacting again hahaha but at least i'm making my selves laugh... hehehe and the b.l. is the covered book that learns the baby stupid is... i don't believe in dharma but i'm scared stiff of what i was totally not expecting... and hell, if l loose this poem I loose this poem.... it's another peglegged upstairs neighbor/tennant clop clop clop clop... off into infinity... so there's an interesting point our lethaloverdose of adam widdles pointy for us... is this in fact a poem question 3ly (i feel a circle tracing coming on here... here) of course i'm different from everybody else mel... and yes, i'm just like everybody else... "we are all the same" we are all people.... so in the name of fresh water to drink i've written a poem because, machine washwarm separately w/ bleach tumble dry warm dry not dry clean iron if decorated wpl7232 is a poem for christ's sake.... hey were back to question i jesus didn't cut the grass... he just got all melodramatic and marterific and sat in it.... and don't tell anyone now but aaaa..... "i'm making this up as i go along..." "and it feels good..." its unleavened profundity loaf bread.... ya know? i'm no leader i just can't see myself following you... and that's not in a "heavy" way you to phrase a dying wish quasi-question3ly not you personally but.... you personally .... i just "brought some of the words i write the way i write them..." so watch me do the funky dead butterfly and smile my lost ass found... perfect... here's to lightning up the uncola... the special magic treat the "relative" end... signed, yours truly.... wil open (dot, dot, dot) whisper (optional)
-------------------- Everything is better than it was the last time. I'm good. If we could look into each others hearts, and understand the unique challenges each of us faces, I think we would treat each other much more gently, with more love, patience, tolerance, and care. It takes a lot of courage to go out there and radiate your essence. I know you scared, you should ask us if we scared too. If you was there, and we just knew you cared too.
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Dogomush
Barbless Aryan
Registered: 10/05/02
Posts: 1,286
Loc: The Canadian west coast
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Re: wishful thinking [Re: CosmicJoke]
#1462356 - 04/15/03 10:59 PM (20 years, 11 months ago) |
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I don't "do" poems... could you condense this into one sound, or a quick sketch?
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blaze2
The Witness
Registered: 12/20/02
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Loc: San Antonio, TX
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Re: wishful thinking [Re: Dogomush]
#1462841 - 04/16/03 01:52 AM (20 years, 11 months ago) |
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yea for once i agree with the dog. that was really long you might get better responses in the art and media forum. peace
blaze2
-------------------- "Religion without science is blind, Science without religion is lame." Albert Einstein "peace is not maintained through force it is acheived through intelligence." Albert Einstein "Those who desire to give up Freedom in order to gain Security, will not have, nor do they deserve, either one." Thomas Jefferson "To compel a man to furnish contributions of money for the propagation of opinions which he disbelieves and abhors, is sinful and tyrannical." --Thomas Jefferson
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Dogomush
Barbless Aryan
Registered: 10/05/02
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Re: wishful thinking [Re: blaze2]
#1463753 - 04/16/03 12:24 PM (20 years, 11 months ago) |
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I read it. God damn yerba mate givin me an attention span and a clear mind. I thought I left those two to rot along with those thirst-killed camels in the desert so long ago..
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Jenherself
Just anotherchick
Registered: 03/12/03
Posts: 80
Loc: Alberta, Canada in a box
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Re: wishful thinking [Re: Dogomush]
#1464342 - 04/16/03 03:39 PM (20 years, 11 months ago) |
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Hmm, I like it...very originally. I like alot of the choice words you used in it. What exactly were you feeling when you wrote this?
-------------------- TO EACH THEIR OWN ****JENNY****
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