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wishful thinking
    #1460308 - 04/15/03 02:44 PM (14 years, 7 months ago)

circles within cicles within....
sometimes while cutting glass
i read slower than slugs
not that a slug can read by any means
but sometimes i read sixlines at a time
"people are like chernobyl plants....."
and there i am
in the midddle of the sahara
more like
there i am chugging away in three adjacent running wheels at the same time
question i: (well this one's more of a declaration))
jesus wasn't a carpenter he was a gardener....
question ii: "let a be dead butterfly..."
question iii: i am the only one like me: subtitled (therefore symbol) i am no better for any one for it though.
sequenced order of split seconds before pin drops
seems all there were
it's like
i'm retaining water
then i turn around to take another sip of water
and it's like
shit my water broke
war is in the imagination
or that's what the sidewalk chalk won't shut it's mouth about
me & i read
with the best saved for last
"dream, love, be"
(sorta spoof on question 2)
well at least that's how
i read it aloud
in my head with the punctuation and all
she might not have....
here's my problem
(like there's one and even if there was one.
like he knows what it was)
or at least the basic size and shape of it....
(the short and skinny if you will....) blahblahblahblahblahblah.....
i want to write a book but up til now i've only done raps
sooo is sole gonna put out my two hundred page album?
can i rock a crowd with excerpts? when will i finally get my super powers back?
before or after my midlife crisis?
crawl back
the vagina
invent the airplane
crawl back
the vagina
invent the windmill
i'm overreacting again
whoaaa ho now,
(a little bit of common at cha saunter)
i'm changing my life
a flick of the wrist... some magick words....
'catharsis!" "alakawung!"
i'm overreacting again
but at least i'm making my selves laugh...
and the b.l. is
the covered book that learns the baby stupid is...
i don't believe in
but i'm scared stiff
what i was totally not expecting...
and hell, if l loose this poem
I loose this poem....
it's another peglegged upstairs neighbor/tennant
clop... off into infinity...
so there's an interesting point
our lethaloverdose of adam
widdles pointy for us...
is this in fact a poem
question 3ly (i feel a circle tracing coming on here... here)
of course i'm different from
everybody else
and yes, i'm just like everybody else...
"we are all the same"
we are all people....
so in the name of fresh water to drink
i've written a poem because,
machine washwarm separately
w/ bleach tumble dry warm
dry not dry clean iron if decorated
is a poem for christ's sake....
hey were back to question i
jesus didn't cut the grass...
he just got all melodramatic and marterific
and sat in it....
and don't tell anyone now but aaaa.....
"i'm making this up as i go along..."
"and it feels good..."
its unleavened profundity loaf bread....
ya know?
i'm no leader
i just can't see myself following you...
and that's not in a "heavy" way you
to phrase a dying wish quasi-question3ly
not you personally
you personally
.... i just "brought some of the words i write
the way i write them..."
so watch me do the
funky dead butterfly
and smile my lost ass found...
here's to lightning up
the uncola...
the special magic treat
the "relative" end...
signed, yours truly....
wil open (dot, dot, dot)
whisper (optional)

Everything is better than it was the last time.  I'm good.

If we could look into each others hearts, and understand the unique challenges each of us faces, I think we would treat each other much more gently, with more love, patience, tolerance, and care.

It takes a lot of courage to go out there and radiate your essence.

I know you scared, you should ask us if we scared too.  If you was there, and we just knew you cared too.

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Barbless Aryan

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Re: wishful thinking [Re: CosmicJoke]
    #1462356 - 04/16/03 12:59 AM (14 years, 7 months ago)

I don't "do" poems... could you condense this into one sound, or a quick sketch?

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The Witness

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Posts: 1,883
Loc: San Antonio, TX
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Re: wishful thinking [Re: Dogomush]
    #1462841 - 04/16/03 03:52 AM (14 years, 7 months ago)

yea for once i agree with the dog. that was really long you might get better responses in the art and media forum. peace


"Religion without science is blind, Science without religion is lame." Albert Einstein

"peace is not maintained through force it is acheived through intelligence." Albert Einstein

"Those who desire to give up Freedom in order to gain Security, will not have, nor do they deserve, either one."
Thomas Jefferson

"To compel a man to furnish contributions of money for the propagation of opinions which he disbelieves and abhors, is sinful and tyrannical." --Thomas Jefferson

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Barbless Aryan

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Re: wishful thinking [Re: blaze2]
    #1463753 - 04/16/03 02:24 PM (14 years, 7 months ago)

I read it. God damn yerba mate givin me an attention span and a clear mind. I thought I left those two to rot along with those thirst-killed camels in the desert so long ago..

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Just anotherchick

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Re: wishful thinking [Re: Dogomush]
    #1464342 - 04/16/03 05:39 PM (14 years, 7 months ago)

Hmm, I like it...very originally. I like alot of the choice words you used in it. What exactly were you feeling when you wrote this?


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