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Unfolding Nature Shop: Unfolding Nature: Being in the Implicate Order

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InvisibleHungryghost
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respect existence
    #14208388 - 03/30/11 09:02 AM (12 years, 9 months ago)

Love, Life, Time; Delve within, practice aim fully
Holy nature embraces our torment
Souls dehydrated; painfully saturated
Arid winds of harsh judgment dry our emotion
Blank slates carving bewilderment
Vast seas of confusion fill the void
Life teetering, pivoting on dying axis
depolarizing management
Magnetizing retreat of our true being
Natures intentions pass us by
Spring forth coarse throats of ignorance
More vivid our struggle than our cause
Left waiting on jury for self discovery
Advancing beneath while waterfalls blacken
Death admit able acceptance
for the lesser able
Idyll idealism passion for ego;
competition fully collared
Blessed are the grateful karmic winds
engross slowly synthesizing demand
replenishing; draft of renewal
warmth sanitizing within.


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Re: respect existence [Re: Hungryghost]
    #14212418 - 03/30/11 10:28 PM (12 years, 9 months ago)

I like it. I will give you a better critique soon. I will have to read it a couple more times.

It reminds me of some poetry I used to write.

Cool.


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InvisibleHungryghost
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Re: respect existence [Re: XUL]
    #14213991 - 03/31/11 09:47 AM (12 years, 9 months ago)

Thank you :heart:


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Re: respect existence [Re: Hungryghost]
    #14216331 - 03/31/11 06:18 PM (12 years, 9 months ago)

This is really good :brilliant:


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InvisiblePenelope_Tree
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Re: respect existence [Re: Hungryghost]
    #14218094 - 03/31/11 11:41 PM (12 years, 9 months ago)

Hey this is pretty interesting.. It has nice imagery!


The writing style makes me think it was stream of consciousness writing.


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