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Re: The Official Post Your Own Poetry Thread. [Re: auxiliary]
#12531997 - 05/09/10 02:02 PM (13 years, 10 months ago) |
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here come snoopy gunna smell your poopy watch your step or he'll bite your neck
Anti-intellectual poetry where it's at.
Edited by Sci-Fi (05/09/10 02:20 PM)
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mathias
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Re: The Official Post Your Own Poetry Thread. [Re: Sci-Fi]
#12540412 - 05/10/10 10:14 PM (13 years, 10 months ago) |
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Vast oceans A deep blue myth Reflecting the Celestial Swirl Rippling the moon and reversing the constellations
Currents pulling comets
The romance of mass and gravity perpetuates itself As the atmosphere and the moisture polarize each other
So the colors are always changing
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mathias
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Re: The Official Post Your Own Poetry Thread. [Re: mathias]
#12540447 - 05/10/10 10:20 PM (13 years, 10 months ago) |
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I will be lightning Within this realm of dreams Some stranger invents
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dillweed4
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Re: The Official Post Your Own Poetry Thread. [Re: mathias]
#12541669 - 05/11/10 06:21 AM (13 years, 10 months ago) |
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Right so here is another one which I have decided to share:
'Black Hole'
When there is a single thought that just keeps going round, that draws all others in to it, then this rumination's bound to form a singularity. Others gravitate to the weight of this single thought unable to escape despite knowing that they ought to flee the singularity. In spectacular collision two spiralling thoughts may create a rare and fleeting fancy that might just avoid a fate within the singularity. It ascends. It aspires. It struggles against the pull. To which it eventually succumbs. The all powerful and consuming singularity. Leaving just a single thought going round and round bending all lighter thoughts to itself in a way that's bound to perpetuate the singularity.
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oversyn
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Re: The Official Post Your Own Poetry Thread. [Re: aghorrorag]
#12589651 - 05/18/10 11:34 PM (13 years, 10 months ago) |
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I wrote this some years ago after a very nice LSD trip:
LSD
Open your mind on LSD, And see, Your fantasy's reality!
In endless beauty, Forever free, Discovering infinity!
Feeling the love, the ecstasy, The harmony of unity Of skies society!
We are the stars - So shall it be!
-------------------- I am looking for my tribe. The people of my tribe are easy to identify: They walk upright, have a twinkle in the eyes and a smile on the lips.
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Re: The Official Post Your Own Poetry Thread. [Re: oversyn]
#12617563 - 05/23/10 11:52 PM (13 years, 10 months ago) |
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1 gram, 2 gram, 3 point 5. makes me a man...with an eagles eyes. one more cap gives me eagles wings. add an eighth to that and my ego dies.
that's a QUARTER down now he's both sides of the coin. money talks, and Geo(George wash,)speaks no lies. holding up the Left wing for my equal rights. and to be precise..just legalize..
1 gram, 2 gram, get with the program. how you gunna throw me in prison because I grow plants? I'm a grown man! Fuck a Big Brother! I can cross the street on my own,,I don't need to hold hands!
a love life is novelty and I don't need the romance, bust a move and a nut..fuck a slow dance! OK, I got a broke heart...it ain't so bad, I got a Case of the BLUES...Ill eat a whole bag!!!
Edited by milkman4d4 (05/29/10 02:26 PM)
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Simms
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Re: The Official Post Your Own Poetry Thread. [Re: milkman4d4]
#12636804 - 05/27/10 07:23 AM (13 years, 9 months ago) |
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Everything
Nothing
They weigh the same.
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Hakim0777
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Re: The Official Post Your Own Poetry Thread. [Re: Simms]
#12640747 - 05/27/10 07:02 PM (13 years, 9 months ago) |
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Patiently waiting, Patiently hating fastings bland, Hungy for a tacos. Fuck blind dating, I miss mating scratch that, make them fish tacos.
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DigDagDeg
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Re: The Official Post Your Own Poetry Thread. [Re: Hakim0777] 2
#12644006 - 05/28/10 08:18 AM (13 years, 9 months ago) |
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I AM A TREE GEOMETRY Face to face with nature I'd like to get to meet her. chewing on some paper size of a centimeter.
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Re: The Official Post Your Own Poetry Thread. [Re: milkman4d4]
#12644013 - 05/28/10 08:21 AM (13 years, 9 months ago) |
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Quote:
milkman4d4 said: 1 gram, 2 gram, 3 point 5. makes me a man...with an eagles eyes.....
this whole poem is really cool. It would roll of the tongue better if you wrote the whole thing in some kind of meter.
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milkman4d4
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Re: The Official Post Your Own Poetry Thread. [Re: DigDagDeg] 1
#12650982 - 05/29/10 02:29 PM (13 years, 9 months ago) |
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thank you!!! its more of a rap than a poem...it picks up and slows down at parts..but I agree it could flow a bit smoother
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panscrutiny
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Re: The Official Post Your Own Poetry Thread. [Re: milkman4d4]
#12679220 - 06/03/10 02:47 PM (13 years, 9 months ago) |
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here's one... no name though
turniquet ties binding an institutionalized grip hands around encompassing flesh and fluid filled biways receeding pipebomb dreams greeting and life's blood sowing seeds and creeds unfurling green and black creepers the need to flee to burn shit nesecity to do things create a change affect things intraveneously no curse a release the ability to be free and think clearly you and me baby together and separate either way completely you are the other side of me
-------------------- STROKE MY GILLS, they will unleash the seed. http://www.usask.ca/biology/fungi/glossary.html
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kissablemilklight
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Re: The Official Post Your Own Poetry Thread. [Re: panscrutiny]
#12685071 - 06/04/10 01:18 PM (13 years, 9 months ago) |
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More prose than poetry but still:
2 hirings and 1 “fuck you, I'm outta here later” and i've come back to doing for myself. No longer following the shepherds, embracing my uniqueness. A crow left of the murder, flying through my own patch of sky away from the incessant, ruckus chirps of my fellow avians. Ears no longer drowned in the redundant flapping of cadenced wings. No, rolling pizza dough is not for me, I roll through the canyons. 100 miles an hour, 3 lunatic amigos roaring through dark tunnels only occasionally lit by protectorate, vibrant yucca lanterns. We need not these barriers placed by big brother to protect us. Our minds will every turn properly taken, every law properly broken. Men of the night, strong and vulnerable.
No longer will I secede to the will of the Shepard, my burden is that of hearing how I do wrong, how I will fail. Your words are my success, your story compared to mine will amount to less. The free generation, forever the best.
-------------------- "It's Gloom as unpredicted on this earth. I realize all the uncountable manifestations the thinking-mind invents to place wall of horror before pure realization that there is no wall and there is no horror just transcendental empty kissable milk light of everlasting eternity's pure and perfect empty nature"- Kerouac Party Tent Brewing
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milkman4d4
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nice
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Re: The Official Post Your Own Poetry Thread. [Re: milkman4d4]
#12702115 - 06/07/10 09:09 AM (13 years, 9 months ago) |
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http://www.soundclick.com/bands/default.cfm?bandID=986732heres a song/rap i just wrote the other day... and a link to the beat...i havnt recorded it yet the beat is labled as NEVER TOO LATE...enjoy
I sit back and watch my life spiral into control, Flick my Bic and light the last inch of my rope. BOOM!.. But before I vanish into smoke, I’ma leave my people with this last little note, Here ya jackasses, have 20 dollars, Go on and hit the town, crash into some towers. That’s a gas! Why you actin’ sour? I sent my condolences through cannabis flowers. I shipped you some chocolates with hugs and kisses, A dick for your ass and a tongue for the misses, Fuck! What else ya want from the kid? Shit. Stop droppin’ acid and become religious? Hmmm…now what the fuck am I missin’ Rub your feet, cook, and scrub your dishes? Ain’t them the jobs for the cunts and bitches? Can’t you see my love comes unconditioned?
Just call me DAD, I’m the motherfuckin man, Put you in a head lock till you scream “uncle Sam, Let me out of this trunk, and untie my hands, So I can jack-off once more before we land”, yeeeah! Cause the bird don’t crash! You silly motherfucker it just burns to ash, And when I’m on my very last labyrinth lap Ill be sure to let you know before I zap my ass yeeeah ! With a bolt of kundulini, He’s electro-cute, but had a few too many, How’s about forever and a new beginning? Yup! Thumbs up dudes to the mushroom bingeing Still hearing , Who the fuck is he kidding? Umm… Just about everyone in this building, You dumb motherfucker, uh. Weren’t you listening, Or were you just too busy to spread the love with me?
Alright I’m back to Reiterate for the illiterate Stupid motherfuckers that I cant even begin to hate, Why?...because my love is what? Unconditional you motherfuckers and sluts! So what’s with the name callin’? Ill explain it all, But first, just let me finish this bowl, There. ya see? Now that didn’t take long, Cause the one hitter quitter’s the shit this kids on. Now back to motherfuckin subject of the song Our planet…the one that we’ve been fuckin’ so long God damned it, now its goin to hell and beyond, And its time to go green or motherfucker get gone! The love was once lost, but I’ve found myself, And I’ve cum back strong, providing mom with help, So you can either lend a hand or just kill yourselves, The love is unconditional…2012.
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Amzy
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Re: The Official Post Your Own Poetry Thread. [Re: aghorrorag]
#12704059 - 06/07/10 04:02 PM (13 years, 9 months ago) |
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sometimes the lights and shadows all look like threatening things and I forget your warmth that is the only sickness, I know now the strength rises in me again, vitality this always changing thing autumn my leaves go away the many autumns of the hours bare and foggy spring and summer are like one green and yellow wilting and well, I feel like a wheel and yet this life is my own,
i've always been sharing this axis with you we roll down these hills roll into the blue of the sea with tea cups in our hands drinking up the ocean , sugar as sand
wander to the dreaming valleys and wake up the sleeping heads this lucid dream is not for wasting even if we are dead but this dream is my own
and i share it with you... i don't know why it gets dark, and i don't know why we get blue i gave it up for thou art art! art! art!
art! art!
Art! art!
Joy!
Joy is a sunrise, with you by my side.. i am a bisexual transwoman occasionally attracted to feet but mostly just to really outlandish and indescribable yet simple, natural, healthy and wholesome sexual and psychosomatic spiritual terra's who likes to be refered to as a humble cuckold sometimes but unsure about anal penetration and on another note i'm also irish at least on a fundamental spiritual level, and a faery, and i like to play guitar and I love God n you Flo and this i never shall hide because it makes me ecstatic, it was the way that was revealed unto I and im glad do my part in saying it and also going with the flow..
I consider myself to be innocent, in regards to most aspects of life but also very wise so certainly, I am a fool.. muahaha
yet I love Flo, and she loves me, I don't know if she reads these I think if she did, then that would be funny and unpredictable
loving virginal sex with a benevolent universe such as yrself
i dont understand the reproductive organs they are so lewd, so mysterious so bizarre... i don't understand them, they seem so unapproachable so easy to rub the wrong way... but love's embrace is the attraction which makes it clear.. so it would be for me love calls me elsewere, not entirely beyond the body but beyond the mind sweeping this 'me' away into confusion, into honest reverie, into something everpresent and miraculous is this something unnatural? an aberration in me? everything to be constantly adrift in it in silent response to the purest indwelling desire a mere matter of language lies between the language of my soul is alive and cognizant timeless it doesn't say anything the birds chirp and the village is quiet but someone has rearranged the pine cones a lone cricket bursts out once in daylight and i know everything is free!!
Hafiz and Mira bai, Kabir , Rumi and Theresa know what i mean.. i can't explain enough! anything, in the end there is no me, i'm only here because the leaves rustle love songs that people sometimes miss otherwise i'd be fishing and growing corn, giving thanks to the Goddess who hath bestowed this blessed existence verily, for she is everywhere
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circastes
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Re: The Official Post Your Own Poetry Thread. [Re: Amzy]
#12724262 - 06/11/10 01:03 AM (13 years, 9 months ago) |
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-------------------- My solitude... My shield... My armour... TESTED WITH FULL FORCE
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Re: The Official Post Your Own Poetry Thread. [Re: panscrutiny]
#12725753 - 06/11/10 11:36 AM (13 years, 9 months ago) |
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i like this! good job like the way its constructed
-------------------- "Now then it is no more I that do it; but the sin that dwelleth in me."
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circastes
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Re: The Official Post Your Own Poetry Thread. [Re: Doe Eyed]
#12728018 - 06/11/10 07:01 PM (13 years, 9 months ago) |
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-------------------- My solitude... My shield... My armour... TESTED WITH FULL FORCE
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cthoolhu
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Re: The Official Post Your Own Poetry Thread. [Re: circastes]
#12730658 - 06/12/10 09:35 AM (13 years, 9 months ago) |
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there once was a cat named friar who wanted only to fill his desire so he found a small shoe and filled it with poo then his owner lit him on fire
lol
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