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OfflineThunderfuck
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poetry
    #1222277 - 01/15/03 10:56 PM (14 years, 1 month ago)

i really like to write, but i hate it when people read my writing. it kind of sucks i guess, because i never get the chance to see what other people think. not that i'm craving for attention, or i just want praise to fill that emopty void...it just would feel good get a few poems out in the open. give them a chance to be read by others eyes...so, i'll post a few, OKAY?!


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"Wasted Trail" [Re: Thunderfuck]
    #1222283 - 01/15/03 10:58 PM (14 years, 1 month ago)

Empty space
on a record
he turns
and
spins
like he knows

Does he know?

Is that even the question?
Maybe, we think
that he knows
when in fact
he's blind
and spinning inward
out of control
spiralling into infinity

And maybe,
in his blindness,
he will realize
that what he has done
and what he has gotten himself into
will in fact give way
to the consequence
that is flashing past him
as he spins out of control
Moments are absorbed in packets
individualized, but discrete
each coming in a wave
splintering him
burning a piece of his ego
shreds of personaility
torn into
and devoured

But how can we judge
his experience of this
and interpret it
the same way
as common language would
It drifts past the comprehension
of our everyday tongue
and lives as itself
by what we define as truth

His desperation
and his confinement of being
is what he needs right now
To grow
and to splinter pieces
from the record
To erase consequence
as one would
swerve
from a massive tree
which we cannot handle
at such a speed


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now is the only thing that's real


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"His Greatest Achievement" [Re: Thunderfuck]
    #1222285 - 01/15/03 10:59 PM (14 years, 1 month ago)

What will God do
when blood pours from the trees
and blades of grass
play the role of the winds
searching through the waves
for absolution
and

truth


Where will God be
when the angel
he has sent down from heaven
is found
begging to man
who has now come down upon her
only to leave her
raped
and

bleeding


When will God come
to save the tortured
the sick
and dying
from the world
he let be

the world
he let bleed


To rectify
the wrong of man

his greatest achievement

and deliver us
from evil

Amen


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"Let me tell you a story..." [Re: Thunderfuck]
    #1222290 - 01/15/03 11:01 PM (14 years, 1 month ago)

And these words
in their shape
their depth
and their capacity for expression

mean nothing
on this page or through my lips
merely a thought
to be erased as easily written
and abolished as easily acknowledged.

Your sense of understanding
is another page in your book of ashes
crumbling with time and carried off by the wind
Another disease
for which you are forever immune

Impurities
filtered from your skull
and dismissed
with your socially adequate responce

Don't say you understand
when I know you don't
Just listen to my words
my voice
my experience

Then forget
And start all over again.


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"Touch" [Re: Thunderfuck]
    #1222294 - 01/15/03 11:06 PM (14 years, 1 month ago)

I can still feel her fingers
searching in my skin
Not to find what it is
I would hope she would find
but rather, she feels,
touches the inside of me

What does she expect to find
amoung my flesh
Finding what it is she is looking for
is, without doubt,
an impossibility
She simply feels me,
and allows my emotion
to seep through my cold skin
sweating out an ache
that I wish she could understand

She feels,
rubs, a piece of me
burns her touch deep
inside of me simply because
it's almost natural for her to do so

She longs for a touch
long faded
and accepts, without pain
the casual game
we were meant to play

But, it is all in vain
She is too far to be touched
and I
I am too close

At least now I have this
at least, right now,
I am closer to her than I'd ever hope
The desire to be within love itself,
to again swallow the taste of her beauty




THis one's about the girlfriend I once had but now don't. I still love her. Ah. Nothing's more painful than love, but nothing's as beautiful either.


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Re: poetry [Re: Thunderfuck]
    #1223218 - 01/16/03 09:21 AM (14 years, 1 month ago)

Awesome stuff bro!!  Your really good at expressing yourself and innermost thoughts and I'm feeling everything you just posted...

...I would like to read more if your comfortable with it!  Keep up the good work... :wink: 


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Blue [Re: Thunderfuck]
    #1230787 - 01/19/03 10:09 AM (14 years, 1 month ago)

Floating along the shore
with the taste of the ocean
flowing right through me
Clean, and clear;
crystalline in its substance
reflecting the sunlight
as if it were a crystal ball,
centered so deeply,
so profound, it swallows the world
in its presence

The sky and the white clouds
So white
and fluffy
Little balls of poof
crawling across the painted blue sky
The art of a child, possibly;
young and innocent,
coloring with a white crayon
on a blue piece of paper

And the waves
are pulsating
like the heart
of a huge beast
with a touch so powerful,
so devestating,
it can turn the whole world around
simply by rolling its body
over the bed of earth
it so peacefully rests upon
as one would do in their bed
early in the morning,
when waken abruptly from a deep sleep
rolling left and right
crashing through the blankets
throwing feet about
sending particles of dust into the air all around
disrupting the peaceful balance it had once known
while you had slept
in peace


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