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pineninja
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Re: The Official Post Your Own Poetry Thread. [Re: Connoisseur] 2
#24445606 - 06/29/17 07:42 PM (6 years, 8 months ago) |
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Probs my favorite from you conn. And DQ your last couple have been excellent.( I tried the 10 gallons of tea and still couldn't quite get there)
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#24445623 - 06/29/17 07:49 PM (6 years, 8 months ago) |
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hey man your great yourself!
really love what you have to say man!
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#24458369 - 07/05/17 03:12 AM (6 years, 8 months ago) |
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I mostly just see how delusional I can sound, myself.
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Re: The Official Post Your Own Poetry Thread. [Re: beforethedawn] 1
#24460499 - 07/05/17 10:03 PM (6 years, 8 months ago) |
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The days dissolve Our words solidify Sorrows full of hopeful resolve Thoughts to create and multiply
Self destructive characteristics Yet empowered ways of being Magic hidden behind the art of linguistics Keeps the ignorant from seeing
Many will doubt and scoff At the power I see waiting to be grasped My heart covered with a bloody cloth They will one day feel my wrath
Like the baby crow waiting to fly Silently crouching in its nest I will die attempting to try Can't you see I'm just trying my best?
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pineninja
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Re: The Official Post Your Own Poetry Thread. [Re: Sir Selzir]
#24460542 - 07/05/17 10:24 PM (6 years, 8 months ago) |
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Welcome. That's great. Stick around.
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Re: The Official Post Your Own Poetry Thread. [Re: pineninja]
#24460577 - 07/05/17 10:39 PM (6 years, 8 months ago) |
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Thank you.
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Re: The Official Post Your Own Poetry Thread. [Re: Sir Selzir] 1
#24461485 - 07/06/17 09:21 AM (6 years, 8 months ago) |
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-------------------- Trip 7 THUG - ISLAM - BIBLE streets disciple CHRIST IS KING. Sunshine said: "Gangsters are super heroes"
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Re: The Official Post Your Own Poetry Thread. [Re: Green7Alchemist] 2
#24483215 - 07/14/17 04:15 PM (6 years, 8 months ago) |
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Redemption
It's not a little ironic That drifting on tempestuous seas Would bring a world to its knees In constructing the bionic
They say the price is worth it Forgetting how to look outside Through human eyes, time defied Anxious for mother to birth it
But pay we have, or rather she The horror, too much to bear Late decades have been a scare Just wait around and you'll see
Redemption builds in bits and snatches Tragedy the tune to its beat The rare and rarified feat To which a cosmos attaches
The milieu, the life itself, toxic Souls compromised, and corruptly Ends indeed shall arrive here abruptly The cultural air is anoxic
What a sad, dreary story is our Earth's The promises made, infinite The outcome, it seems, requisite Our descendants have granted their births
-------------------- Vi Veri Universum Vivus Vici
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Re: The Official Post Your Own Poetry Thread. [Re: DividedQuantum]
#24489505 - 07/17/17 01:14 PM (6 years, 8 months ago) |
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Slime confusion as we blowing mystic fusion as we going rolling wild like mistakes
Eliminate another vicious track to waste the enemy without a trace
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Re: The Official Post Your Own Poetry Thread. [Re: czech] 2
#24491640 - 07/18/17 12:55 PM (6 years, 8 months ago) |
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The Devil in Power
Presidents don't hold the reins Aren't really even near them That task goes to one who deigns To burn and then to spear them
People blame the guy above The one who's architecting The one who gave the gift of love The one whose job's directing
But is he really in control? Or is he sitting by? What is destined for the soul Down low or way up high?
Misery, destruction, pain Are not the good's m.o. What can one here hope to gain? If virtue's held so low?
No, this is not a friendly set The Devil is in charge here Don't blame those who haven't yet Found a path to clear
Blame the one responsible And don't ever think twice Making right: impossible Rely on friendly dice
-------------------- Vi Veri Universum Vivus Vici
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Re: The Official Post Your Own Poetry Thread. [Re: DividedQuantum]
#24491873 - 07/18/17 02:48 PM (6 years, 8 months ago) |
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-------------------- Trip 7 THUG - ISLAM - BIBLE streets disciple CHRIST IS KING. Sunshine said: "Gangsters are super heroes"
Edited by Green7Alchemist (05/08/18 02:32 PM)
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Re: The Official Post Your Own Poetry Thread. [Re: Green7Alchemist]
#24497542 - 07/20/17 10:39 PM (6 years, 8 months ago) |
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Crash the source awards Smash and come back with a whore Schmorgaschporg
And spit lore till my vocal cords is sore
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Re: The Official Post Your Own Poetry Thread. [Re: czech]
#24498292 - 07/21/17 09:37 AM (6 years, 8 months ago) |
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-------------------- Trip 7 THUG - ISLAM - BIBLE streets disciple CHRIST IS KING. Sunshine said: "Gangsters are super heroes"
Edited by Green7Alchemist (05/08/18 02:33 PM)
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Re: The Official Post Your Own Poetry Thread. [Re: Green7Alchemist] 1
#24500881 - 07/22/17 01:54 PM (6 years, 8 months ago) |
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There once was a lion that was happy
He walked the planet of which he dominated
One day he was walking and he caught a thorn in his foot
It began to harm the lion, a constant sharp pain that unsettled the lion
The lion didn't notice there was a thorn in it's paw
So the lion stopped it's daily hunt
But it didn't help
The lion created pretty things
But it didn't help
The lion protected the opposite animals from the jackals
But it didn't help
The lion took to wandering
But it didn't help
One day the thorn simply fell out
And the lion was once more happy
The lion decided that what it did up till that point was what made it happy
It told all the other creatures it's story
And they listened with serious ears
But it did not help the opposite animals
Because there were no thorns in their paws
The lion is dead now
The other creatures retell the story
They live their lives by the story
They study the story with serious eyes
But if the thorn were a person
It would laugh
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Re: The Official Post Your Own Poetry Thread. [Re: czech]
#24501926 - 07/23/17 12:28 AM (6 years, 8 months ago) |
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Nice take
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Re: The Official Post Your Own Poetry Thread. [Re: Kurt] 2
#24507266 - 07/25/17 01:35 PM (6 years, 8 months ago) |
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Creation
Some people take the credit For all the things they do An ego bigger than a mountain Will ripple through and through
Or maybe credit goes to God Sometimes I'm not quite sure The rich feel it was they alone And blame fate on the poor
I think that all this reverence For self, and self alone Is folly of the basest kind A fool for every throne
I do not know how I create It's quite a mystery It all really just sort of happens Just like all history
There I squeeze, and out it comes Every line by magic I cannot say that I'm the doer To brag to me is tragic
Happenstance and timing, right? The secrets of success Honestly, you're on a ride Deluded nonetheless
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pineninja
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Re: The Official Post Your Own Poetry Thread. [Re: DividedQuantum] 2
#24508085 - 07/25/17 07:44 PM (6 years, 7 months ago) |
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Perhaps we're both. Not mutually exclusive. Or is that a view from self betrothed. Pushing till it becomes conducive.
Maybe trying to split an indivisable. Is going to be pointless. Trying to pin down the subliminal. Without another anything as context.
The confusion itself is where I think it lays. The greyness of our very introspection gives colour to the days. Whether we've played the trick on ourselves or its been forced. Seperation of ultimates truths depends on how they are sourced.
The chance of timing a correct answer to each question sought. Is measured against what is precluded from each lesson taught. I too flip day to day. Mental gymnastics the games we play.
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#24513566 - 07/28/17 08:30 AM (6 years, 7 months ago) |
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Living in the world today
The year is 2017 Donald Trump is the president of the United states Charles Manson is still alive Steve Jobs took LSD and died rich Hunter S Thompson shot himself because of 9/11 Hillary Clinton did not get locked up Cannabis is still schedule 1 Heroin use is higher than it has ever been Smoking is banned indoors We still rely on fossil fuels Men surgically turn themselves to women And women surgically turn themselves to men Prisons and jails are over flowing literally People seize and fall in the streets from smoking synthetic cannabinoids Inflation is higher than ever before Racial, political, sexual and social tensions spread riots across the globe Everyone knows the species is doomed, they just know they wont be around to have to deal with it The general attitude of the people when it comes to addressing the state of humanity can be summed up by "STOP BEING A BITCH BRO, YOUR SUCH A WHINER!"
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pineninja
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#24517380 - 07/30/17 02:32 AM (6 years, 7 months ago) |
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What is reality...in my words. Rationalized moments hanging upon absurds. The now in which we question. Means proofs beyond objection.
To each their own. In and of them self. History is but a memory sown. Futures pulled from imaginations shelf.
Ridiculous anyway.. is my take. Each trying to enforce their stake. Expecting others to see when your invisibles shown. My reality by you cannot be known.
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#24517875 - 07/30/17 10:59 AM (6 years, 7 months ago) |
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All the tension Pressing inwards
When truthfully We seek that 'pop!'
And boom Suddenly Space all around you
That cloud Gone, far gone
And you're just like this thing In this place And you just don't give a shit But you do More than you know
And we all just want to fly
So we seek approval of the highest degree
To be accepted nakedly
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