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Re: feedback is appreciated [Re: Man in the Box]
    #13634371 - 12/14/10 09:49 PM (13 years, 1 month ago)

Is it not an excuse to find fright not at night?
Days sleep away, inside myself I remain hidden.
When terror is within the mind, the mind horrified paces uncontrollably.
Paranoid pondering thus penetrates perception.
The long since denied sense of security which lays in the ability to reason
Is temporarily distorted by consuming irrationality.


Just something I wrote years ago describing an anxiety attack.


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Re: feedback is appreciated [Re: floatingupstream]
    #13637911 - 12/15/10 04:44 PM (13 years, 1 month ago)

postumous gunner bang bang show no mercy to the wanna be runners
fucking fist fuck your face with the facts
bring it back to the archaich ways of the pre jurasic paralax
attack your freakin primate state to relate to the crap
sold in the kite steam - bite or just write and rejoin the rip tight team
clean and ready to get wet - so when i get wrecked i jet - better yet
i take flight - almighty as the hierachy sabotage plight


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Re: feedback is appreciated [Re: Crumpet] * 1
    #13695209 - 12/28/10 09:31 AM (13 years, 1 month ago)

"Firing Squad"

Crooked backs forced
Upon quadrille wall
Silent reflections
Stagnation
Then fall




This short poem is over 6 years old, but it recently resurfaced in my life and I'm going to create some art to go with it.


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Re: feedback is appreciated *DELETED* [Re: WoodsCall]
    #13709505 - 12/31/10 12:29 AM (13 years, 1 month ago)

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Edited by Crumpet (01/05/11 03:47 PM)


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Re: feedback is appreciated [Re: Crumpet]
    #13714002 - 01/01/11 05:28 AM (13 years, 30 days ago)

Something I wrote in HS... partially as a joke to see if my English teacher would try to derive some "deep meaning" from it... but I ended up enjoying writing it. Basically about seasonal change/love poem. I was pretty much trying to copy John Donne. Obviously failed miserably lol. That guy's the best poet of all time with E.E. Cummings close behind IMO. No one else should ever bother trying.

Gaze

The crimson Orb doth shine on its upward path
Manifold dying shear Tongues chase an arclite-shaft
A Blazon’d in the Northern sky for aught to see
Aye, but tis Naught nor but silt next to thee

Autumn’s Aurora ‘shrines its last wretchèd loom
The singèd eyes of the Beholden do consume
Bloodred corpses have painted what ere were green
But match’d with thine Eyes, immortal beauty be but fiend

The steeliee rapiers of nature’s torpor foal
Shrieking ghoul winds part the morbod whole
Staggered Ancients guard the secreted swoon
Silent lids watching below my Funeral Moon.


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Re: feedback is appreciated [Re: NoxNoctum]
    #13715331 - 01/01/11 02:40 PM (13 years, 29 days ago)

The white swan
serenely drifts
into the fog


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Re: feedback is appreciated [Re: CarnivalBarker]
    #13723267 - 01/03/11 02:10 AM (13 years, 28 days ago)

it's not that chummy on an Oedipus revolt
this truculence got funny when it sounds like mind control
booze choosed bellicose, pineal assault
they hide in the gaps waiting for me too fall

they clock on n clock off
i plot along when im not aloft
they get up on downers for a lack of truth then flop the lot
when the cluey blued truly sources food there un accustomed of


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Re: feedback is appreciated [Re: Crumpet]
    #13725828 - 01/03/11 05:03 PM (13 years, 27 days ago)

“Hidden Forbearers of the cosmos.
They flourished before any particles,
Their matter casting rays of light through the oblivion,
Illuminating the young oceans of emptiness.”
This is what the elderly man said,
Before lighting his pipe and abrading his grizzled beard.
Bone white rings of smoke blended in with the fire’s own,
And the smell of burning pine and aged tobacco filled the night air.
His fables of ancient and hidden cultures lured the curiosity of my youth.
Tales of their worship of the void and their forbidden rituals fascinated me.
Forgotten civilizations who communed in hollowed stone pillars.
Crimson waves of uncharted waters clashing against the structures,
Saturating the ethereal minerals that they were formed from.
Vines of hieroglyphic bejeweled woods climbed up the pillars,
Granting means of accessibility to the otherwise impenetrable objects.
Wooden bridges conjoined each individual rock mast,
Forming a disturbing of plexus of cryptic architecture.
Apertures of questionable materials were located on each stone tower.
On them were primordial carvings of nightmarish beings,
Monstrosities of epic terror that were unrevealed to the sane world.
Perhaps they were worshiped idols?
Could the pillars have been built to admire feared gods?
I asked my aged accomplice his source of such copious details.
One could not simply fabricate such awe-inspiring tales without influences.
His arms quivered from the night cold,
Or was it deep imbedded fear?
With a toke of his wooden pipe,
He began to tell me of how he was once a navigator,
A profession that required rigorous journeys to undocumented waters.
His career required him to search for landscapes and unmarked islands,
And provide the recorded data to cartographers.
Storms of immense strength were common at sea,
Yet the crew of the ship he abided in knew how to function under the extremes,
Even though none could have guessed their ultimate impending doom.
A rouge wave from the cold heart of the ocean,
Approached the portside of the vessel one night,
Like an unforeseen assassin from the depths of the aqueous abyss.
Walls of water like diamonds overwhelmed the wooden hauls,
And the interior was overflowed with salt water,
Drowning all who dreamed in their cabins that night.
The top decks were cleared of all inhabitants,
Who were thrown by the forces of the wave into the night.
My friend awoke the next morning,
Afloat on a fragmented piece of the ship,
He drifted into an unknown direction for three days and nights.
On the third night, his eyes widened at what he observed,
The stone pillars- reaching for the stars,
Like hands of those wanting the knowledge of a virgin universe.
Bellowing chants echoed across the sky,
Seeming to come from the stone pillars.
Yet nothing could prepare his sanity for what he heard next.
From a remote distance away,
Absent from his vision,
The odious howls of unseen behemoths came forth.
He imagined their appearances.
Visions of colossal beings whose heads dispersed the clouds,
And whose feet splintered the hardest crusts of the earth’s surface.
He breathed heavily,
Shaking the eeriness that came over him as he described his peril.
Everything after the sounds of the giants was forgotten,
He tells me.
I know he lies,
But I do not ask him to venture further.
His sanity may be saved by the absence of those memories.


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Re: feedback is appreciated [Re: Shrine Builder]
    #13726192 - 01/03/11 06:05 PM (13 years, 27 days ago)

Here's a poem off of an album by an Australian DJ named plutonic lab. A personal favorite of mine so I thought I'd share...


Living grows around us like a skin, to shut away the outer desolation
for if we clearly marked the furthest deep, we should be dead long years before the grave
but turning around within the holy shell of worry, and discontent
we grow and flourish, and rarely see the outside dark that would confound our eyes
Some break the shell, I believe there are those who push their fingers through the brittle walls
They look both out and in
And through this cruel slit, they stare out among the cinders of the world with naked eyes
Knowing themselves, and too much El's besides


Sends chills up my spine often


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Re: feedback is appreciated [Re: Crumpet]
    #13727675 - 01/04/11 01:02 AM (13 years, 27 days ago)

my brain is a fog
that my mind
cant drive through
I throw on the lights
but the haze seeps into
I try to relax
but what am I to do
when im driving through fog
and my mind says fuck you


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Re: feedback is appreciated [Re: masterharf]
    #13730348 - 01/04/11 04:27 PM (13 years, 26 days ago)

Deviation of a parable roll
the satirical surpent in a sodom hole
sodden obbligato, an omnivorous Geronimo
a crustose husk hutching the grotto
Not an ockerdom quarreling an odalisque
but a sematic attractor on a pedicle to fish
A semibold simplice on an Oedipus revolt
A discountenance if it's not an apple catapult
Neither a disunion nor dissonant enshroud
It's an exigent theorem of a sagacios flout
Keratose iconoclast, the contradiction of injudicious
An odious ominous crack at the iniquity of insidious
Venus and mars between us are bars in an oncogenes class
omniscient and effectual
Renascent the regnant, renditional requiem


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Re: feedback is appreciated [Re: Crumpet]
    #13730527 - 01/04/11 04:55 PM (13 years, 26 days ago)

Yo weed is the shiz.


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Hothouse blooms [Re: aghorrorag]
    #13733593 - 01/05/11 02:40 AM (13 years, 26 days ago)

This vision/illusion
premature, we incubate
sickly wanton hothouse blooms,
juxtaposed with insidious prickle...
our exposed oozing cores
bind...
mingle,
the pus and treachery of past lives.
And with tenuous understanding,
by the way of
our fragile utopian designs.
Thrown haphazardly,
into conjuring.


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Re: Hothouse blooms [Re: Blondell_Letrange] * 1
    #13735810 - 01/05/11 03:38 PM (13 years, 25 days ago)

Thankyou much your just enough
but it sux to be juxtapose to accrue whats just not just enough, construe?
mooving through to a new drew drop
measurments of resin are sure to crop mops
knocking on a trap door
rocking on a see saw
dropping jaw jargen
winding like a siren
with an eye on the one tiring minus the tyre ring plus
whats just just enough
fuckyou much


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Re: Hothouse blooms [Re: Crumpet]
    #13736188 - 01/05/11 04:41 PM (13 years, 25 days ago)

red balloons

you constrict the flow
and float like red balloons,
inflating, dazing, dozing
on the way to the moon

i capture the glow
like a goddess bound by fear,
astral sensations sprawling
and burning up the atmosphere

when i inflict my kisses
you scream so serpentine,
guttural growls of passion
being brazenly unleashed

in heavenly gasps and groans
the oxygen slows, depletes,
your lips locked and swollen
from sucking up my dreams

your fireheart pops, explodes,
deflating lazily in the breeze,
my fever burns so brightly
while sleep with me sings the sea


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Re: Hothouse blooms [Re: junkyardgod]
    #13737318 - 01/05/11 07:37 PM (13 years, 25 days ago)

i like your kind junkyardgod



pleased to please
flustered up on mitosis lust
i wrote this in and bestowed it in the scuttlebutt
so all who anchored would jettison the clusterfuck
must i trust the lust ruts knuckle down
just enough to encrust my blunt inverted crown
what a steal, im outstanding in my field
like a scare crow who's never known much other than a weathering shield
peel me in to the shin kicking thin soil
boil up another hot shot in the pot
clock off, im knocking off the knock offs
not a drop off a cloud to enshroud the coming truculence
truth be fenced in by the oncoming crowd


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Re: Hothouse blooms [Re: Crumpet]
    #13741033 - 01/06/11 12:44 PM (13 years, 24 days ago)

Here's (another)one i wrote in jail.



Fear has taken captive every hope
Strangled off the light with it's dark rope
Uncertainty and doubt rise to the surface
Malignant tribes of lies impose their service

Misery's grey hands sharpen an old dagger
And slice off all the little things that matter
In pools of red so drowns the living spirit
A bitter sense of grief does love inherit.


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Re: Hothouse blooms [Re: thoughts]
    #13745256 - 01/07/11 12:10 AM (13 years, 24 days ago)

if your 555, im 666
gracefully cut n past instillation to lase to nations their placed
ape faced men adore the minotaur souring eye
bulls push n pull the cry of harikari dynasty plight
white to black the reprisal flat lined
insight the dining four pronged shiitake
while i climb the hypnogogniac flack jacket
on cron the crap got slapped and cracked the slack backwards
best to be tightend foe
i roast your host just typing bro
swipe the the sorta astral flight short
rewrite to the troglodyte astronaut


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Re: Hothouse blooms [Re: Crumpet]
    #13746653 - 01/07/11 10:09 AM (13 years, 24 days ago)

Here is a really special one, written in a time of great loneliness / introspective contemplation. I call it, "Everybody has a Penis."

Everybody has a Penis.
He has his,
She has his,
But some of us need a Pussy, too.

Yes, everybody has a Penis.
Stuck on Mars,
Take me to Venus,
So badly need a Pussy, it's true.

Thank you.


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Re: Hothouse blooms [Re: thoughts]
    #13756663 - 01/09/11 08:46 AM (13 years, 22 days ago)

Quote:

iwasaClown said:
Here's (another)one i wrote in jail.



Fear has taken captive every hope
Strangled off the light with it's dark rope
Uncertainty and doubt rise to the surface
Malignant tribes of lies impose their service

Misery's grey hands sharpen an old dagger
And slice off all the little things that matter
In pools of red so drowns the living spirit
A bitter sense of grief does love inherit.




:thumbup:

Do you reckon you found greater creativity when in jail?


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