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Re: The Official Post Your Own Poetry Thread. [Re: pineninja]
    #23885918 - 12/01/16 09:25 PM (7 years, 1 month ago)

I want to die
But I dont want to feel it happen
To evaporate
A lovely event on some lazy afternoon
Preferably soon


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Re: The Official Post Your Own Poetry Thread. [Re: pineninja] * 1
    #23885928 - 12/01/16 09:28 PM (7 years, 1 month ago)

Quote:

pineninja said:
That last one of yours DQ is impressive, I like the way you obviously have something to say and structure your poetry around it...easier said than done especially eloquently.




Thanks. :smile:


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Re: The Official Post Your Own Poetry Thread. [Re: DividedQuantum] * 2
    #23888191 - 12/02/16 04:31 PM (7 years, 1 month ago)

If you think money can buy you happiness.
You're poorer for it.
They've spun you around so that you can no longer see.
Stillness is where happiness be.

Realease yourselves from the notion the lottery will solve your problems.
Work hard, live love, dismiss etrapment doldrums.
Understand the principles that make you who you are.
On this side of the bridge that's not too far.

At the coal face of most western experience.
Is a total inability to detach from the trap of decadence.
So imprinted are these, measures of success.
People cannot fathom any other happiness.

I'm glad to know and have met some truly happy souls.
And not one of em ever had making more fucking money one of their goals.


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Re: The Official Post Your Own Poetry Thread. [Re: pineninja] * 2
    #23896621 - 12/05/16 11:45 AM (7 years, 1 month ago)

Ungoverned Passions


Sacred honor
Absurdly chivalric
Older blood
Ancient bailiwick

Private sadness
Public feuds
Subtle madness
Wild moods

Soft decorum
A fierce pride
Taken badly
Whenever snide

Prolific pen
Outstanding mind
A troubled past
Of roots opine

To end badly
A poor mistake
To duel gladly
Invite heartbreak

Besmirched memory
The lesson is thus
Govern your passions, or make
Death superfluous


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Re: The Official Post Your Own Poetry Thread. [Re: DividedQuantum] * 2
    #23902205 - 12/07/16 04:20 AM (7 years, 1 month ago)

what will you be thinking about when you die?
time immaterial, yet it kills you
reflecting something that allows you to hide
the illusion of our lives
our psychology would bend and break
without the sound children make


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Re: The Official Post Your Own Poetry Thread. [Re: akira_akuma] * 3
    #23907175 - 12/08/16 02:23 PM (7 years, 1 month ago)

Synthesis


By connecting opposites
Into one divine union
One opens the door
To final enlightenment

What is the final synthesis?
The infinite
Stretching from everlasting to everlasting
With a short repose in human minds
In, then throughout, time

Aristotelian dialectics
Would have two categories for multiple subjects
Or examine but two facets of a geodesic sphere
As if Nature can't count higher than two
What folly!

Man
Burdens himself with arbitrary limit
And then codifies it into the monstrosity
We call Western culture
It's history

In truth, we have spectra
Phenomena can blossom between the endpoints
Fortunately for the philosopher
Events transcend simplicity
And syntheses are theses

Every subject and object
Exists in several categories at once


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Re: The Official Post Your Own Poetry Thread. [Re: DividedQuantum] * 3
    #23907349 - 12/08/16 03:15 PM (7 years, 1 month ago)

Houses of cards.
Walls made of mirrors.
Fragmented awareness shards.
Real only when memory lingers.

Pascal knows that ripples make waves.
Instantaneously interconnected.
Each interaction humanity saves.
Only to each other can we be indebted.

The distant crash on the unseen shore.
Means the pebble was dropped.
Unspoken moments, Inescapable lore.
Never started, never stopped.


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Re: The Official Post Your Own Poetry Thread. [Re: DividedQuantum] * 3
    #23908058 - 12/08/16 06:41 PM (7 years, 1 month ago)

Nostalgia

My inner dialectics...
Seem not to be a complete prospectus.
I mean by that, I seem to see only now, the new plastic form
Was somehow in the faultline of my past.

The particular then, within the whole,
Sub Specie, familiar genera, aeterni
And an earth always pregnant with form to contain her.
It seemed all organic and whole, even if it would have had also to split open.

What innocence was it,
For a past gone from itself
For the being of beings, a presence to come to present,
Disseminating seeds of what I remember now?

An old hermit's way, is in matter and form,
Coming to a new world's mind and body...
But what it is itself, we've placed together,
seems to me something in our hands more delicate.

We raised up even our elders' forested eye,
Knocking on the doors of our own notions,
If not by wisdom, but of our own,
Seeking what before was in simple alms.

And the way I see it, what granted once shapened form,
Holds still the same, only now somehow to occlude itself. 
We follow our sconces now to that openness, the hinge to the doors of our perception,
This living panel of what must now somehow stand, must now again be what is opened, to what it gives.

We bring much to this new philosophical subject!
All our dimensions, 
And all the facts, of utterances,
From this new prospectus of a singular consciousness...
We ourselves, bring the new world its concept and notion;
Which surely this time, now, must grant a pass!

But the door which goes to the law,
Elicits not from any one,
And stands ironically so, since it seems to be for us1;
And so how great, a violent profundity must we be?
And how excruciating would it tear us to part?
And yet near the crack of this door,
By the sight and sound of a warm hearth of nostalgia,
A possibility seems, I'll come again,
and learn once again to be brought.

1 As Kafka wrote: "Before the Law"



Edited by Kurt (12/09/16 06:10 PM)


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Re: The Official Post Your Own Poetry Thread. [Re: Kurt] * 1
    #23917116 - 12/11/16 05:32 PM (7 years, 1 month ago)

Amazing Kurt, thanks


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Re: The Official Post Your Own Poetry Thread. [Re: beforethedawn] * 3
    #23917949 - 12/11/16 09:08 PM (7 years, 1 month ago)

lost in a high cause it felt so pleasent
hard to plan for the future when you livin in the present
made a couple bad choices, not one that i regretted
and the world will turn on you, but thats only if you let it
and currently the world is busy chasing currency
i know im not the smartest im just hoping you can learn from me
we sold our soul for cash, youre damn right its concerning me
it feel like freedom but i swear that its just slavery
natures soft touch is the onlything thats saving me
they say oneday will be living where them angles be
feeling so heavenly, better than an exctacy peak,
but i have yet to hear an angle speak
so ima speak what on my mind
im saying lifes to short im wasting none of my time
the sun is coming up i cant wait for the shine
heavens rays of light, what could feel more divine?
the sun is always gonna set though
life gets hard and we learn how to let go
unanswered questions, askin where do i go?
thinking maybey lifes a dream, ima go with the flow
or maybey its a movie, im just here for the show
lost sense of direction askin where do i go?
these people give me answeres but not one of them know


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Re: The Official Post Your Own Poetry Thread. [Re: spaceyvibess] * 2
    #23918344 - 12/12/16 12:37 AM (7 years, 1 month ago)

....


Edited by akira_akuma (04/24/18 12:35 PM)


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Re: The Official Post Your Own Poetry Thread. [Re: aghorrorag] * 1
    #23918380 - 12/12/16 01:03 AM (7 years, 1 month ago)

I have been compiling all my poems from the last year and posting them on a blog the last couple days if anyone is interested in checking some of it out. http://dreamscapedomain.blogspot.ca/

Cheers, i look forward to reading others poetry for the time being. :mushroom2:


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Re: The Official Post Your Own Poetry Thread. [Re: akira_akuma] * 2
    #23918384 - 12/12/16 01:10 AM (7 years, 1 month ago)

there once was a tiny mouse
who thought the cheeseblock on my head was a house
so i laid out some Brandy chocolates
and he became drunk and a louse
he shot some smack
smattered, more dazed then a spouse

who's blouse is as loose as a mouse


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Re: The Official Post Your Own Poetry Thread. [Re: Kurt]
    #23918391 - 12/12/16 01:17 AM (7 years, 1 month ago)

Quote:

Kurt said:
Nostalgia

My inner dialectics...
Seem not to be a complete prospectus.
I mean by that, I seem to see only now, the new plastic form
Was somehow in the faultline of my past.

The particular then, within the whole,
Sub Specie, familiar genera, aeterni
And an earth always pregnant with form to contain her.
It seemed all organic and whole, even if it would have had also to split open.

What innocence was it,
For a past gone from itself
For the being of beings, a presence to come to present,
Disseminating seeds of what I remember now?

An old hermit's way, is in matter and form,
Coming to a new world's mind and body...
But what it is itself, we've placed together,
seems to me something in our hands more delicate.

We raised up even our elders' forested eye,
Knocking on the doors of our own notions,
If not by wisdom, but of our own,
Seeking what before was in simple alms.

And the way I see it, what granted once shapened form,
Holds still the same, only now somehow to occlude itself. 
We follow our sconces now to that openness, the hinge to the doors of our perception,
This living panel of what must now somehow stand, must now again be what is opened, to what it gives.

We bring much to this new philosophical subject!
All our dimensions, 
And all the facts, of utterances,
From this new prospectus of a singular consciousness...
We ourselves, bring the new world its concept and notion;
Which surely this time, now, must grant a pass!

But the door which goes to the law,
Elicits not from any one,
And stands ironically so, since it seems to be for us1;
And so how great, a violent profundity must we be?
And how excruciating would it tear us to part?
And yet near the crack of this door,
By the sight and sound of a warm hearth of nostalgia,
A possibility seems, I'll come again,
and learn once again to be brought.

1 As Kafka wrote: "Before the Law"





I've read this three times over the last three days, it's made me reflect on my personal journey with a stranger sense of clarity, thankyou.


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Re: The Official Post Your Own Poetry Thread. [Re: pineninja] * 2
    #23918434 - 12/12/16 01:42 AM (7 years, 1 month ago)

very Auden. very much so a prospectus!


Edited by akira_akuma (04/24/18 12:34 PM)


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Re: The Official Post Your Own Poetry Thread. [Re: akira_akuma] * 3
    #23918465 - 12/12/16 02:17 AM (7 years, 1 month ago)

boondoggle the days away
waiting for your paycheck
follow iridescent eyes
to the soothsayer and sybil
'twill sooth your mind
trying to make sense of time
(that's much easier than understanding the steps people take)
in our lives
when love capitulates to hate
to the apex of itself
it's zenith will rise
another to fulfill
salt of the waters
borne to sea
to the deposits
on the coastline
the know-ledge is deep
despite what you can understand
with your lies
i know every moment
the world is born anew
and babes cry


Edited by akira_akuma (12/12/16 02:27 AM)


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Re: The Official Post Your Own Poetry Thread. [Re: akira_akuma] * 3
    #23918567 - 12/12/16 04:19 AM (7 years, 1 month ago)

Like the Lotus from the swamp.
Like pushing the stone to an unreachable top.
Beauty comes from the stagnant.
The journey is pleasure no matter the torment.

When you realise that you are the love that some religions preach.
When people stop attributing their expectations on a diety that's always out of reach.
When you can be malevolent generous and kind.
The path could be made of fire and brimstone, but happiness you'd still find.

Drop away your expectations.
You cannot fit more in your cup.
Needlessly cruel iterations.
You will not finish until you stop.


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Re: The Official Post Your Own Poetry Thread. [Re: pineninja] * 3
    #23918613 - 12/12/16 05:08 AM (7 years, 1 month ago)

Congratulations on being.
Unmistakably seeing.
You've won.
Simple fun.

Don't waste it.
Never haste it.
Don't let it be gone.
Without enjoying the song.

Embrace your futility.
Allow humility.
The single snowflake.
Complexity for simplicitys sake.

If God were love he could not be.
For only love will allow you to see.
Through the enforced fogs of dictated deceit.
They don't want you to know you're already complete.


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Re: The Official Post Your Own Poetry Thread. [Re: pineninja] * 2
    #23918638 - 12/12/16 05:36 AM (7 years, 1 month ago)

impotent nigger whites
want to blow up kikes
make-believe their deracination
and hold on to spite
their might could exist, but still they must persist
in their idiotic ways, to ease the malaise
of the impuissant parade
of their meaningless lives

dumb white devil preachers
need poor righteous teachers
to justify their failures
in getting ahead
for they went numb; lost their heads
some feel better off dead, like in the days of slavery
because they can't find bravery
save down the barrel of a gun

what the world needs is leaders
so we opt for a theater
actors to play the pipers
of the damned
people lack self-control, so they're told, and they grieve
run around like headless chickens, easily deceived
wish to blame the others
for their intelligence to be "achieved"


strong language


Edited by akira_akuma (12/13/16 08:47 PM)


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Re: The Official Post Your Own Poetry Thread. [Re: akira_akuma] * 3
    #23919640 - 12/12/16 01:35 PM (7 years, 1 month ago)

The dichotomy of nature
The duality of time
We are frozen in the present
Unperturbed by paradigms
We are the nexus of disorder
With complex, dynamic minds
Opposite, attractive forces
We are the neutrons in nuclei
We are the equinox, the solstice
We are everything in between
We are all the colors in the spectrum
We are the shadows that go unseen
We are an infinite regression
We are as finite as a dream
We are a million shades of gray
We are the singularity
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