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pineninja
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Ok I get it your really pissed. Blinded by shared red mist. Lashing out because you can. By electing this horrible man.
But how the fuck have you not seen. That he is the epitome of the system your trying to break. He knows no other than what has already been. He's gorged himself on your share and then stole your cake.
Stockholm syndrome dictating action surely. Nobody with all the info could vote so poorly. He was just a failed portion of your society. Now forever will be worshipped as your evil deity.
I know there will be regret. You now have lost credibility. The world will never forget. This day the crecendo point of Unsustainability.
-------------------- Just a fool on the hill.
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pineninja
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Re: The Official Post Your Own Poetry Thread. [Re: pineninja] 2
#23820438 - 11/10/16 05:33 PM (7 years, 2 months ago) |
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Hang on a second, where are you off too? he said.
Well forwards I suppose least that's what's in my head.
Ok then where have you been.
Well not where I need to be for I still haven't seen.
What is it you expect to be finding.
The place of truth and enlightenment.
Oh and how would you recognise this entitlement.
I'm not sure but weve been promised you see.
I'm sure you have but they did'nt get me.
Well then where are you going?
Nowhere I'm already not knowing.
-------------------- Just a fool on the hill.
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Re: The Official Post Your Own Poetry Thread. [Re: pineninja] 3
#23827758 - 11/13/16 01:27 AM (7 years, 2 months ago) |
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Signify the ruins in your eyes Take your November rain with you Everything but the glorious sun dies The newborn beetle learns to chew
Storm through the unlit mind Enlighten me with your story of shadows The day breathes solid, the day breathes kind I stay by the campfire in the meadows
Knife front into the unsuspected aggressor The demon keep slips into the mountain edge People by the hour seem lesser The stars speak something only an ally would pledge
-------------------- Hostile humankind Can't you see you're fucking blind?
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beforethedawn
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Re: The Official Post Your Own Poetry Thread. [Re: beforethedawn] 2
#23827766 - 11/13/16 01:36 AM (7 years, 2 months ago) |
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Torn into the wreck of a thousand year solitude, the armament of a stolen life. I speak in the lost quarters of the night which bleach into morning, the daylight reserved for the eyes anew. Hydrogen and oxygen pour Heaven to Earth without a soul losing its way. At the end of the tunnel is not light but a sign warning one to go back - where one started one already felt a need to return. In the soothing darkness of corrupt mindedness I went into sunburnt black eerieness that spoke of starry skies and strange abductions. I toured the fathomlessness.
-------------------- Hostile humankind Can't you see you're fucking blind?
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pineninja
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Re: The Official Post Your Own Poetry Thread. [Re: beforethedawn] 2
#23827961 - 11/13/16 05:21 AM (7 years, 2 months ago) |
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Love till your empty and cold. Be till you no longer grow old. Giving away that most precious. Your emotions and the omnipresent.
Hearing the words of the wise dead mans lament. Graveled voice the brute blunt instrument. Never to outrun bigoted torments Trying to realease oneself from the cynicism of moments.
Emboldened by gilded gifts. Stripped raw awareness shifts. Floating on momentary clouds. Focus through importance shrouds.
Here in the dark viscosity. Lights shine on hypocrisy.
His layers of intellect. Thankyou I will not forget.
-------------------- Just a fool on the hill.
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ModestMouse
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Re: The Official Post Your Own Poetry Thread. [Re: pineninja]
#23828661 - 11/13/16 10:54 AM (7 years, 2 months ago) |
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Cold pavement and a sharp edge Or ten Have tossed and lost my wallet Somewhere in the city hedge
We searched quite deep into the night Like hounds Saw nothing of my everything Whos bones bare strangers sweet delight
-------------------- Anyone got a lowpass filter in this biiiiash?
Edited by ModestMouse (11/13/16 11:14 AM)
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pineninja
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Re: The Official Post Your Own Poetry Thread. [Re: ModestMouse] 1
#23834333 - 11/15/16 01:25 AM (7 years, 2 months ago) |
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You can toil away in the struggle to survive. You can think fastest means sooner to arrive. You can wake without knowing you ain't. You can have faith in a long gone obscure saint.
I may never be the I. I may never understand why. I am striving to strip away my layers. I am trying not to be one of the players.
Let's all wait here in the shadows of our mind. Let's all play here with the whirlwind of time. Let's forsake the ultimate goal. Let's withdraw from the ultimate role.
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-------------------- Just a fool on the hill.
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Re: The Official Post Your Own Poetry Thread. [Re: pineninja] 1
#23834377 - 11/15/16 02:26 AM (7 years, 2 months ago) |
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Forget the role Forget the plight Fabricate to fornicate Moles in the holes Forever? NEVER!
Go and get some ecstasy Slap it on your wrist Demon tails twist We are going to die
Best enjoy the ride. Slap the bass. Melt your face.
And save some lives. Here and there. If you care. To not send the world into despair.
Lift your heavy metal To the sky. Raise your fist to the nothingness And punch a hole in the nexus.
Might as well try.
Impact on the ground, Life is what you make it. You have no duties to a higher order. Love and enjoy.
The dreams are within you. Smoke, yes! But able, if pride and shame were to be forsaken, To be made tangible. And the higher cause, The happy you. And happy mom and dad.
To make laugh, to entertain. Why do we make it so serious? To infinite freedom Of imaginative expression I wish to digress.
Needle in the hay.
Through the fray.
A demon, might be good. From the scripture, he becomes unglued.
Leave the mystic fears and tribulations, Repair the thinking cap.
Mind over matter, Matter intertwines.
A nook in all the mess. No need to impress. Thoughts to undress:
Survive in style, Or in denial.
You are no one,
And so follows,
You can be,
anyone.
You get players who play each other to the sound of sorrow.
Or you get makers, risk takers, Free floaters, bums and scums, who create their lives from the nothing they are.
To be free from the game. To overstep the line. And decay in comfortable solitude.
Edited by remake (11/15/16 06:44 AM)
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pineninja
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Re: The Official Post Your Own Poetry Thread. [Re: remake]
#23834401 - 11/15/16 03:12 AM (7 years, 2 months ago) |
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Boom boom. All good but the final three especially.
-------------------- Just a fool on the hill.
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ModestMouse
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#23841253 - 11/17/16 10:51 AM (7 years, 2 months ago) |
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Absolute zero
Cold Cold Cold Cold Cold Cold Cold Cold Cold Cold Cold Cold Cold Cold Cold Cold
Cold Cold Cold Cold Cold Cold Cold Cold Cold Cold Cold Cold Cold Cold Cold Cold
Cold Cold Cold Cold Cold Cold Cold Cold Cold Cold Cold Cold Cold Cold Cold Cold
Cold Cold Cold Cold Cold Cold Cold Cold Cold Cold Cold Cold Cold Cold Cold Cold
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beforethedawn
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Re: The Official Post Your Own Poetry Thread. [Re: ModestMouse] 2
#23847177 - 11/18/16 11:18 PM (7 years, 2 months ago) |
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Trying to see the blinding takes its toll on the mind's retina. Why not breathe a sigh, take the girl out to dinner. Too many complications in a simple life. Might see if stealing cheese is a crime against God. Umbrellas without names, conflicts without purpose.
In a state of maximum divinity, the muesli skies stretch further than the horizon. The torch bears the flames notorious for third degree burns, so I blow it out. Why speak something into a valley that your self does not want to hear. My lips sear.
Try the bar menu, it's written in Haiku. I don't think you can eat what the waitress brings, though her eyes are from the future. Into the unspoken territory of the next word of the sentence, only orators may pass, for this is no game, this is your livelihood. Speak clearly if they see you. Speak clearly if they see you.
-------------------- Hostile humankind Can't you see you're fucking blind?
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#23849648 - 11/19/16 07:07 PM (7 years, 2 months ago) |
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-------------------- Hostile humankind Can't you see you're fucking blind?
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ModestMouse
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Re: The Official Post Your Own Poetry Thread. [Re: beforethedawn]
#23851634 - 11/20/16 02:14 PM (7 years, 2 months ago) |
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I like it Pushing the envelope
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#23851681 - 11/20/16 02:35 PM (7 years, 2 months ago) |
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Growing pains
It started as splinters And pinches and pricks Now that im older It lingers and sticks
This pain in my head The void in my heart Have rendered me frozen Penniless, parched
You may think it foolish You may find it bleak But poison is power Though power makes weak
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#23851707 - 11/20/16 02:43 PM (7 years, 2 months ago) |
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Thanks, I sort of get a bit loose with the associations and general sense in my attempt to generate images, but that one worked out. Here's another -

It does make sense to me but your mileage may vary haha.
-------------------- Hostile humankind Can't you see you're fucking blind?
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Re: The Official Post Your Own Poetry Thread. [Re: beforethedawn]
#23852474 - 11/20/16 07:09 PM (7 years, 2 months ago) |
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Rambling of a poor boy in Pennsylvania
To achieve the state With no pain and no fight To die, not irate But to lie in delight
Oh what a sad plight! Too docile to fight My heroine in heroin Has lightened the night
But the sun of tomorow bleeds red For the thoughts in my head Will spin and toss A cyclone unyielding this circular dread
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Re: The Official Post Your Own Poetry Thread. [Re: ModestMouse]
#23852959 - 11/20/16 11:25 PM (7 years, 2 months ago) |
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Im a 5 star. Down around, under and up. Beneath the bluff, My soul is my crown, The ashes bring fears, They empty seats of seers, Risen kings from antlers, And soar love away from thy home. -5 Star. Had to write something Poetic this weekend. Heres my share. ~Bunny
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Re: The Official Post Your Own Poetry Thread. [Re: littleton] 1
#23856331 - 11/22/16 06:04 AM (7 years, 2 months ago) |
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Tickity tock goes the clock
Yet
Slow mo Within our flow
A man sits and ponders All the wonders
A feeling lingers Itchy fingers For what it is to proclaim The rules of another game
His tummy strangely rumbles in his immortality He grows hungry How can this be!? Surely delusion... No no, it is so, he must consume Lest he himself be consumed
So he plucks from the tree Planted by the hands of his ancestry No care to follow, no care to lead Disregarding the importance of the seed
"It is all here, we need only feed!"
Until one day The leaves wither away The tree grows barren
Its roots begin to dry
The man lost for words
Suddenly thinks:
Oh, fuck.
I need a job...
Or I'm going to die!
Edited by remake (11/22/16 06:51 AM)
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akira_akuma
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#23857615 - 11/22/16 02:54 PM (7 years, 2 months ago) |
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contained therein wherewith thereout expands thee single extremity withal a celestial being of divers places inenubilable
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akira_akuma
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Re: The Official Post Your Own Poetry Thread. [Re: akira_akuma]
#23859180 - 11/23/16 12:18 AM (7 years, 2 months ago) |
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poet (n.) from Latin poeta "a poet," from Greek poetes "maker, author, poet," variant of poietes, from poein, poiein "to make, create, compose," from PIE *kwoiwo- "making," from root *kwei- "to pile up, build, make" (source also of Sanskrit cinoti "heaping up, piling up," Old Church Slavonic činu "act, deed, order").
Sound poetry
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