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foodsgoodtoo
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Re: The Official Post Your Own Poetry Thread. [Re: Nevilleskat]
#20906266 - 11/29/14 10:16 PM (9 years, 3 months ago) |
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habith noth to make sense of worth buttith to not with tabitha darcy out tta tippith tongue shoots the tipiithith tapitol timmy sais so. timmeh timmeh timmeh
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stellarshnap
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Re: The Official Post Your Own Poetry Thread. [Re: foodsgoodtoo]
#20907913 - 11/30/14 11:30 AM (9 years, 3 months ago) |
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WIth an intense displeasure I grip my phone and loathe my moment alone, With a heavy sigh my eyes close and I curl under the weight of all that has ended. I forge a reminder that my inner rewinder is always there to try and take control, So I've got to remember with an unmistakable candor That everything changes without requisite for your mind or matter. I lay here divided and undecided Whether to scatter or gather. I take cover in the storm of my moment alone, Suddenly my eye opens. All this wasted time spent in a stagnant bind, Suddenly stasis of mind. I stand up and take a step, Moving forward with what must be left behind, Awaiting a peaceful moment alone.
-------------------- Careful, though your mind may be over matter, matter is all we really know. "Or is it?" The problem with intelligence is that it fosters arrogance, and arrogance suffocates intelligence. True intelligence however, bites holes in the bag.
Edited by stellarshnap (11/30/14 01:41 PM)
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BreathlessVision
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Re: The Official Post Your Own Poetry Thread. [Re: stellarshnap]
#20929715 - 12/04/14 07:16 PM (9 years, 3 months ago) |
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Thick warm coat of misery that folds on makes the room so cold Mother’s tears are pearly droplets Brightly lit exposed stripped of dignity Sunken tumors in the fine edges of the tears are like psychotic hands Reaching to grab you and shake you Wake you up till grey tolling bells rise And the Azaan calls to prayer The tears line up to the God and bow Falling off the edges of the chin Warm hued eyes are full of dull sorrow Like thickened black coats of bracken Intersecting of ideas beckons to towers of male dominance and his ego creates The curtain of misery like such cracks in the glowing radiator cold and gasless Like open closed windows like black white doors a paradox as such of cure and I believe-
Oh God your ego hath bestowed in me some mercy? Oh praise you? Your chains pegged the spirit tight, they leave the caverns empty you never seek to see but to make man of ingornace and misery
and the rotten tree, the fruit that plagues has become the chaos that flames my pain that feeds the dogs of all of man's sorrow
the man chose to opress, so now he will rot, untill the birds will sing away the sorrow of the heart and play a knotted harp
Water flows, a lock without a key.
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stellarshnap
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Always running the thinker of tender thoughts Towards the reminder of social circumstance Escaping by embracing imperfection Prevailing disappointment Entailing requiem of a tender heart Nostalgia when comes again the start Musing at turning a flicker into a spark. When will he look in a mirror and reconcile with his tender thoughts When will he recognize his killer and turn his flicker into a spark When will he look around with his tender heart and decide to start It's easier to imagine what it would have been had he fought When will he realize the easy way out is the hard way in With an unforgiving twist will hindsight show foresight what could have been Yet all this can be avoided with a brave look within A turnaround and he could win So one day with a smile he can consider what it could have been
-------------------- Careful, though your mind may be over matter, matter is all we really know. "Or is it?" The problem with intelligence is that it fosters arrogance, and arrogance suffocates intelligence. True intelligence however, bites holes in the bag.
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Re: The Official Post Your Own Poetry Thread. [Re: stellarshnap] 2
#20954583 - 12/09/14 07:36 PM (9 years, 3 months ago) |
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Damn, I gotta say the majority of the poetry in this thread is mediocre at BEST.
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akira_akuma
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Re: The Official Post Your Own Poetry Thread. [Re: mikeisapro]
#20954716 - 12/09/14 08:01 PM (9 years, 3 months ago) |
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mostly, yeah.
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Masked
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Re: The Official Post Your Own Poetry Thread. [Re: mikeisapro]
#20954901 - 12/09/14 08:49 PM (9 years, 3 months ago) |
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stellarshnap
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Re: The Official Post Your Own Poetry Thread. [Re: mikeisapro]
#20961652 - 12/11/14 11:28 AM (9 years, 3 months ago) |
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Quote:
mikeisapro said: Damn, I gotta say the majority of the poetry in this thread is mediocre at BEST.
You know actual criticism is welcome yeah? If you think it's mediocre, say why.
-------------------- Careful, though your mind may be over matter, matter is all we really know. "Or is it?" The problem with intelligence is that it fosters arrogance, and arrogance suffocates intelligence. True intelligence however, bites holes in the bag.
Edited by stellarshnap (12/11/14 11:28 AM)
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stellarshnap
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Re: The Official Post Your Own Poetry Thread. [Re: stellarshnap]
#20961670 - 12/11/14 11:35 AM (9 years, 3 months ago) |
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Intelligence, while drowned by ignorance, can also flourish in it. You think you understand, only to come to understand that you don't understand. By understanding what you don't understand, you begin to understand what you didn't understand, which of course, leads you to understand. Understand?
-------------------- Careful, though your mind may be over matter, matter is all we really know. "Or is it?" The problem with intelligence is that it fosters arrogance, and arrogance suffocates intelligence. True intelligence however, bites holes in the bag.
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foodsgoodtoo
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Re: The Official Post Your Own Poetry Thread. [Re: stellarshnap]
#20961701 - 12/11/14 11:46 AM (9 years, 3 months ago) |
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This cankor sore hurts. Yes it hurts. It hurts the procession. The black heart of the Cankor Sore. The stability of life hurts. Blackness death to the Cankor Sore. But yet the solutions are Godly. And yet so simple. Timmeh sais so. Timmeh Timmeh Timmeh.
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akira_akuma
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Re: The Official Post Your Own Poetry Thread. [Re: Masked]
#20963564 - 12/11/14 07:41 PM (9 years, 3 months ago) |
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Quote:
Masked said:
but i still liked yours though, Masked. it stands out.
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Masked
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Re: The Official Post Your Own Poetry Thread. [Re: akira_akuma]
#20963600 - 12/11/14 07:51 PM (9 years, 3 months ago) |
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aw thanks man. All my poetry is free association. I usually don't spend much longer than 15 minutes on each. So where it flows from is some sort of "source" or something... I like to believe.
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akira_akuma
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Re: The Official Post Your Own Poetry Thread. [Re: Masked]
#20963763 - 12/11/14 08:18 PM (9 years, 3 months ago) |
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yeah, well, THAT (the time it takes) certainly doesn't show, but the source of your poetry certainly shines through.
i find alot of these poems in here are Light Poetry, and i just can't take them very seriously, for the most part. your's, however, clearly have a point of origin that is of a more serious nature.
i should post more here, but, i don't know when and what poems i might want to possibly publish one day, so... i don't put them up.
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Jake.Wizard27
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Re: The Official Post Your Own Poetry Thread. [Re: akira_akuma]
#21008555 - 12/21/14 05:38 PM (9 years, 3 months ago) |
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Slug in the mUd
a time ago there was a slug that wouldnt climb out of the mud he trudged and trudged but still remained inside a world he deemed insane I tried to prod him into motion telling him of endless oceans laughing he just produced more slime out his back it was a sign without this mud in which he trudged i guess he would dry up and die and maybe i am just a slug my human face is my disguise for in the mud i oftan think I should transcend this place of stink until i finally come to terms and thank the gods im not a worm -
an off the dome (free association) production by. (j.wizard)
of all the free association absurd work ive done this one has the most clean form
-------------------- "SAY SOMETHING, DO SOMETHING.. MAKE A DIFFERENCE" “There is a transcendental dimension beyond language... It's just hard as hell to talk about!” ― Terence McKenna JwiZard TraDe LiSt TIPS on TRIPS Psychedlic Visionary - Info on Trance, Shamanism, Visionary Art, Psychedelics and Spirit EXTREME VAPORIZERS
Edited by Jake.Wizard27 (12/21/14 05:39 PM)
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InfiniteToker
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Re: The Official Post Your Own Poetry Thread. [Re: Jake.Wizard27]
#21015560 - 12/23/14 05:50 AM (9 years, 3 months ago) |
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cigarette freshly rolled cold air, no jacket Break the mold bacteria in the air slowly decaying our bodies dreams sought to be reached The Human Struggle.
can you dig it?
-------------------- "I'm chilling in a room with a view, there's always room for improvement; so i grab my coat and go and prove it"-Method Man
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Jake.Wizard27
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Re: The Official Post Your Own Poetry Thread. [Re: InfiniteToker]
#21016014 - 12/23/14 09:13 AM (9 years, 3 months ago) |
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totem i told em and they said i was out there but i dont care cause the sun shines even on cloudy days, its up there. doin its thing.. converting hydrogen to helium and talking like a chipmunk singing the chrsitmas special.
I am elsewhere man, doing what elsewhere can.. and happily ever after just grey up and is happy now for once and twice and sold and the gavel spills cornmean and drenched archaic thought-forms reinvented in perfect synchronic orbits, , be the one be the be and become the becoming..
amen
-------------------- "SAY SOMETHING, DO SOMETHING.. MAKE A DIFFERENCE" “There is a transcendental dimension beyond language... It's just hard as hell to talk about!” ― Terence McKenna JwiZard TraDe LiSt TIPS on TRIPS Psychedlic Visionary - Info on Trance, Shamanism, Visionary Art, Psychedelics and Spirit EXTREME VAPORIZERS
Edited by Jake.Wizard27 (12/23/14 09:14 AM)
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AcidBath
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Re: The Official Post Your Own Poetry Thread. [Re: Jake.Wizard27]
#21033278 - 12/27/14 08:20 PM (9 years, 3 months ago) |
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This shit within me is gettin simply too much im runnin on empty ever since my beginning been getting sent to the ending My clock is overtopped with acid buildup from whats not listed in the billion pills i popped It stings a little but, ima pop the seal on top-the codeine mister-with no mixer , then chug it motherfucker, ill stop when it does it job and wake up to hard liquor. And a nod. Take the whole knob of smirnoff Sipper straight out the 8th till my licker cant configure different tastes, use listerene for the chaser, my last bitch witnessed it, i used to amaze her withit till one day while doin whippits, mary jane and i ran into a little friction, after the break up i stuffed her into a roll of paper, lit it on fire and hit her, when i shoulda saved her cause now i miss her.
-------------------- everything i say is only a satirical joke, nothing serious man!
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Re: The Official Post Your Own Poetry Thread. [Re: AcidBath]
#21068515 - 01/04/15 09:47 PM (9 years, 2 months ago) |
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Running like a rutter, the universe moves the sea; waves crest outward like psyche fragments sparkled with Neptunian bliss. Outward with time, crests diminish and un-glossen but the rutter and universe remain in the seas memory. Stored in hydrogen, oxygen and carbon a story begin. You called me with a butterfly voice fluttering about, abruptly changing mannerisms. Our conversations moved with swift and ease; esoteric sarcasm and observations told in caricatural british tones.
The ever-changing capacity for literary skill that you encompassed shook me to the core, if only cause of pure desire for a similar skill. I wanted to be part of your thoughts, not as a focal point, but as a witness to the spectacle of a chameleon mind in thought and action. Conversely, your eyes told of deep compassion and captured an audience with warmth and gratuity; a homely love. A lovely soul to be sure, since eyes are a window to the soul. Neptunian bliss crashed upon ripples of the sea in your eyes. Waves of a new creations of self, love, home and warmth. Waves that brought up the deepest of soul arching change and pushed out the old.
At the destruction of old and creation of new, waves upon your eyes became a new sort of beauty. The beauty of yin, yang and whatever lay between, glimmered in the corner of your iris. Neptunian sparkles crested upon your soul dreamt of a new world; all the philosophies and ideas you instilled in myself and others continue to make a profound impact. The universe, like a rutter splitting waves, sends us in crashing waves of blissful and dramatic change and re glossens the Neptunian sparkle in your eyes. It never lessens impact
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Re: The Official Post Your Own Poetry Thread. [Re: aZombie]
#21101345 - 01/11/15 11:33 AM (9 years, 2 months ago) |
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A whole is fragmented through vigilance on one side Fragments are a whole under a watchful eye There is no warmth as vibrant as life And no cold as condemning as death One holds one And one holds the other A coexistence and a battle With no known beginning And no conceivable ending One holds one The whole is fragments
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Re: The Official Post Your Own Poetry Thread. [Re: mikeisapro] 2
#21102392 - 01/11/15 03:05 PM (9 years, 2 months ago) |
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mikeisapro said: Damn, I gotta say the majority of the poetry in this thread is mediocre at BEST.
To tell the truth your thoughts I find
have value if and when they rhyme
but I must say just talking smack
reflects on you the things you lack
x2
(really though I'd like to read a poem of yours. do you even poem?)
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