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Re: The Official Post Your Own Poetry Thread. [Re: Nevilleskat]
    #20906266 - 11/29/14 10:16 PM (9 years, 3 months ago)

habith noth to make sense of worth
buttith to not with tabitha darcy
out tta tippith tongue shoots the tipiithith tapitol
timmy sais so. timmeh timmeh timmeh


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Re: The Official Post Your Own Poetry Thread. [Re: foodsgoodtoo]
    #20907913 - 11/30/14 11:30 AM (9 years, 3 months ago)

WIth an intense displeasure
I grip my phone and loathe my moment alone,
With a heavy sigh my eyes close
and I curl under the weight of all that has ended.
I forge a reminder that my inner rewinder
is always there to try and take control,
So I've got to remember with an unmistakable candor
That everything changes without requisite for your mind or matter.
I lay here divided and undecided
Whether to scatter or gather.
I take cover in the storm of my moment alone,
Suddenly my eye opens.
All this wasted time spent in a stagnant bind,
Suddenly stasis of mind.
I stand up and take a step,
Moving forward with what must be left behind,
Awaiting a peaceful moment alone.


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Careful, though your mind may be over matter, matter is all we really know.
"Or is it?"

The problem with intelligence is that it fosters arrogance, and arrogance suffocates intelligence. True intelligence however, bites holes in the bag.

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Re: The Official Post Your Own Poetry Thread. [Re: stellarshnap]
    #20929715 - 12/04/14 07:16 PM (9 years, 3 months ago)

Thick warm coat of misery that folds on makes the room so cold
Mother’s tears are pearly droplets
Brightly lit exposed stripped of dignity
Sunken tumors in the fine edges of the tears are like psychotic hands
Reaching to grab you and shake you
Wake you up till grey tolling bells rise
And the Azaan calls to prayer
The tears line up to the God and bow
Falling off the edges of the chin
Warm hued eyes are full of dull sorrow
Like thickened black coats of bracken
Intersecting of ideas beckons to towers of male dominance and his ego creates
The curtain of misery like such cracks in the glowing radiator cold and gasless
Like open closed windows like black white doors a paradox as such of cure and I believe-

Oh God your ego hath bestowed in me some mercy? Oh praise you?
Your chains pegged the spirit tight,
they leave the caverns empty
you never seek to see
but to make man of ingornace and misery

and the rotten tree, the fruit that plagues
has become the chaos
that flames my pain
that feeds the dogs
of all of man's sorrow

the man chose to opress,
so now he will rot,
untill the birds will sing away
the sorrow of the heart
and play a knotted harp

Water flows,
a lock
without a key.



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Re: The Official Post Your Own Poetry Thread. [Re: BreathlessVision]
    #20934420 - 12/05/14 06:51 PM (9 years, 3 months ago)

Always running the thinker of tender thoughts
Towards the reminder of social circumstance
Escaping by embracing imperfection
Prevailing disappointment
Entailing requiem of a tender heart
Nostalgia when comes again the start
Musing at turning a flicker into a spark.
When will he look in a mirror and reconcile with his tender thoughts
When will he recognize his killer and turn his flicker into a spark
When will he look around with his tender heart and decide to start
It's easier to imagine what it would have been had he fought
When will he realize the easy way out is the hard way in
With an unforgiving twist will hindsight show foresight what could have been
Yet all this can be avoided with a brave look within
A turnaround and he could win
So one day with a smile he can consider what it could have been


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"Or is it?"

The problem with intelligence is that it fosters arrogance, and arrogance suffocates intelligence. True intelligence however, bites holes in the bag.

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Re: The Official Post Your Own Poetry Thread. [Re: stellarshnap] * 2
    #20954583 - 12/09/14 07:36 PM (9 years, 3 months ago)

Damn, I gotta say the majority of the poetry in this thread is mediocre at BEST.  :thumbdown:


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Re: The Official Post Your Own Poetry Thread. [Re: mikeisapro]
    #20954716 - 12/09/14 08:01 PM (9 years, 3 months ago)

mostly, yeah.

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Re: The Official Post Your Own Poetry Thread. [Re: mikeisapro]
    #20954901 - 12/09/14 08:49 PM (9 years, 3 months ago)

:unwanted:

:lol:


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Re: The Official Post Your Own Poetry Thread. [Re: mikeisapro]
    #20961652 - 12/11/14 11:28 AM (9 years, 3 months ago)

Quote:

mikeisapro said:
Damn, I gotta say the majority of the poetry in this thread is mediocre at BEST.  :thumbdown:




You know actual criticism is welcome yeah? If you think it's mediocre, say why.


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Careful, though your mind may be over matter, matter is all we really know.
"Or is it?"

The problem with intelligence is that it fosters arrogance, and arrogance suffocates intelligence. True intelligence however, bites holes in the bag.

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Re: The Official Post Your Own Poetry Thread. [Re: stellarshnap]
    #20961670 - 12/11/14 11:35 AM (9 years, 3 months ago)

Intelligence,
while drowned by ignorance,
can also flourish in it.
You think you understand,
only to come to understand that you don't understand.
By understanding what you don't understand,
you begin to understand what you didn't understand,
which of course,
leads you to understand.
Understand?


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Careful, though your mind may be over matter, matter is all we really know.
"Or is it?"

The problem with intelligence is that it fosters arrogance, and arrogance suffocates intelligence. True intelligence however, bites holes in the bag.

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Re: The Official Post Your Own Poetry Thread. [Re: stellarshnap]
    #20961701 - 12/11/14 11:46 AM (9 years, 3 months ago)

This cankor sore hurts.
Yes it hurts.
It hurts the procession.
The black heart of the Cankor Sore.
The stability of life hurts.
Blackness death to the Cankor Sore.
But yet the solutions are Godly.
And yet so simple.
Timmeh sais so. Timmeh Timmeh Timmeh.


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Re: The Official Post Your Own Poetry Thread. [Re: Masked]
    #20963564 - 12/11/14 07:41 PM (9 years, 3 months ago)

Quote:

Masked said:
:unwanted:

:lol:



but i still liked yours though, Masked. it stands out.

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Re: The Official Post Your Own Poetry Thread. [Re: akira_akuma]
    #20963600 - 12/11/14 07:51 PM (9 years, 3 months ago)

aw thanks man.  :thumbup:  :blush:  All my poetry is free association.  I usually don't spend much longer than 15 minutes on each.  So where it flows from is some sort of "source" or something... I like to believe.


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Re: The Official Post Your Own Poetry Thread. [Re: Masked]
    #20963763 - 12/11/14 08:18 PM (9 years, 3 months ago)

yeah, well, THAT (the time it takes) certainly doesn't show, but the source of your poetry certainly shines through.

i find alot of these poems in here are Light Poetry, and i just can't take them very seriously, for the most part. your's, however, clearly have a point of origin that is of a more serious nature.

i should post more here, but, i don't know when and what poems i might want to possibly publish one day, so... i don't put them up.

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Re: The Official Post Your Own Poetry Thread. [Re: akira_akuma]
    #21008555 - 12/21/14 05:38 PM (9 years, 3 months ago)

Slug in the mUd

a time ago there was a slug that wouldnt climb out of the mud
he trudged and trudged but still remained inside a world he deemed insane
I tried to prod him into motion telling him of endless oceans
laughing he just produced more slime out his back it was a sign
without this mud in which he trudged i guess he would dry up and die
and maybe i am just a slug my human face is my disguise
for in the mud i oftan think I should transcend this place of stink
until i finally come to terms and thank the gods im not a worm -


an off the dome (free association) production by. (j.wizard)

of all the free association absurd work ive done this one has the most clean form


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Re: The Official Post Your Own Poetry Thread. [Re: Jake.Wizard27]
    #21015560 - 12/23/14 05:50 AM (9 years, 3 months ago)

cigarette freshly rolled
cold air, no jacket
Break the mold
bacteria in the air
slowly decaying our bodies
dreams sought to be reached
The Human Struggle.


can you dig it?


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Re: The Official Post Your Own Poetry Thread. [Re: InfiniteToker]
    #21016014 - 12/23/14 09:13 AM (9 years, 3 months ago)

totem i told em and they said i was out there
but i dont care cause the sun shines even on
cloudy days, its up there. doin its thing..
converting hydrogen to helium and talking
like a chipmunk singing the chrsitmas special.

I am elsewhere man, doing what elsewhere can..
and happily ever after just grey up and is
happy now for once and twice and sold and the
gavel spills cornmean and drenched archaic thought-forms
reinvented in perfect synchronic orbits, ,
be the one
be the be
and become the becoming..

amen


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Re: The Official Post Your Own Poetry Thread. [Re: Jake.Wizard27]
    #21033278 - 12/27/14 08:20 PM (9 years, 3 months ago)

This shit within me is gettin simply too much im runnin on empty
ever since my beginning been getting sent to the ending
My clock is overtopped with acid buildup from whats not listed in the billion pills i popped
It stings a little but, ima pop the seal on top-the codeine mister-with no mixer , then chug it motherfucker, ill stop when it does it job and wake up to hard liquor. And a nod. Take the whole knob of smirnoff
Sipper straight out the 8th till my licker cant configure different tastes, use listerene for the chaser, my last bitch witnessed it, i used to amaze her withit till one day while doin whippits,
mary jane and i ran into a little friction, after the break up i stuffed her into a roll of paper, lit it on fire and hit her, when i shoulda saved her cause now i miss her.


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Re: The Official Post Your Own Poetry Thread. [Re: AcidBath]
    #21068515 - 01/04/15 09:47 PM (9 years, 2 months ago)

Running like a rutter, the universe moves the sea; waves crest outward like psyche fragments sparkled with Neptunian bliss. Outward with time, crests diminish and un-glossen but the rutter and universe remain in the seas memory. Stored in hydrogen, oxygen and carbon a story begin.  You called me with a butterfly voice fluttering about, abruptly changing mannerisms. Our conversations moved with swift and ease; esoteric sarcasm and observations told in caricatural british tones.

The ever-changing capacity for literary skill that you encompassed shook me to the core, if only cause of pure desire for a similar skill. I wanted to be part of your thoughts, not as a focal point, but as a witness to the spectacle of a chameleon mind in thought and action. Conversely, your eyes told of deep compassion and captured an audience with warmth and gratuity; a homely love. A lovely soul to be sure, since eyes are a window to the soul. Neptunian bliss crashed upon ripples of the sea in your eyes. Waves of a new creations of self, love, home and warmth. Waves that brought up the deepest of soul arching change and pushed out the old.

At the destruction of old and creation of new, waves upon your eyes became a new sort of beauty. The beauty of yin, yang and whatever lay between, glimmered in the corner of your iris. Neptunian sparkles crested upon your soul dreamt of a new world; all the philosophies and ideas you instilled in myself and others continue to make a profound impact. The universe, like a rutter splitting waves, sends us in crashing waves of blissful and dramatic change and re glossens the Neptunian sparkle in your eyes. It never lessens impact 


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Re: The Official Post Your Own Poetry Thread. [Re: aZombie]
    #21101345 - 01/11/15 11:33 AM (9 years, 2 months ago)

A whole is fragmented through vigilance on one side
Fragments are a whole under a watchful eye
There is no warmth as vibrant as life
And no cold as condemning as death
One holds one
And one holds the other
A coexistence and a battle
With no known beginning
And no conceivable ending
One holds one
The whole is fragments


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Re: The Official Post Your Own Poetry Thread. [Re: mikeisapro] * 2
    #21102392 - 01/11/15 03:05 PM (9 years, 2 months ago)

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Damn, I gotta say the majority of the poetry in this thread is mediocre at BEST.  :thumbdown:




To tell the truth
your thoughts I find

have value if
and when they rhyme

but I must say
just talking smack

reflects on you
the things you lack

:thumbdown: x2

(really though I'd like to read a poem of yours.  do you even poem?)

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