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EternalCowabunga
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Re: The Official Post Your Own Poetry Thread. [Re: Blue Cthulhu] 2
#27059042 - 11/26/20 05:02 PM (3 years, 3 months ago) |
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I tried as an exercise to write a really bad poem, this is what I came up with:
My fingers are like electric zapping hotdogs They stumble upon the TV remote, missing crucial buttons I sigh And the night fades sorrowfully Why did I come here What have I forgotten The children roll out of the closet now, one at a time Holding PEZ dispensers, launching the candies into their dumb little mouths Chalky regrets stewed from my loins and alfredo pasta dreams conquer my route indifference I am not a God No, I am just lord of the flies.
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Camwritesgonzo
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Caveat Emptor Step into my world Feel the disease of my soul See what lies behind my eyes A heart as black as coal Walk away, as you may I will not obstruct you But you will not be the same A darkness lives within Not too far, but out of sight A swirling mire of an abyss Feeding on all soothing light Meet me as I truly am But do so at your own risk.
-------------------- "I've always maintained that reality is for those who can't face drugs."-Tom Waits "I feel the same way about disco as I feel about herpes."-Hunter S. Thompson A squid eating dough in a polyethylene bag is fast and bulbous, got me?
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Barnaby
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Re: The Official Post Your Own Poetry Thread. [Re: aghorrorag]
#27095203 - 12/18/20 02:18 AM (3 years, 2 months ago) |
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Life is on a string feeling peculiar things hard to narrow down not wearing a crown
on with the days until christmas
Always strange when New Years day begins all those trends things that matter little my new i-phone and electronics, like a dog kibble
Am bored and ready for a new way of life like to feed my fish and those things that don't cause strife
Will continue to enjoy my esoteric states and all the chaos and insights it creates
When covid ends maybe some resolutions until then, I like my solutions
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Expiscator
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Re: The Official Post Your Own Poetry Thread. [Re: Barnaby]
#27095851 - 12/18/20 01:35 PM (3 years, 2 months ago) |
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Go fuck yourself you vicious whore so beige in your mundane intentions blinded by persisting internal reflections distilling nothingness in your calm no fire. no passion. no flare when I look for a rise you don't dare I have the energy for dance yet far you are from my entrance to share pleasures gifting you treasures is an action persistently rebuffed left floating in a haze confusion applied for days a mind disputing fact a reality diverging full chat
where once I nurtured a tender young flame lies now a barren hearth an abhorrent angle presents in place of youthful tenderness values ajar disjointed misinformation pain hunger and abject distraction
fuck we doth no longer dance to the same drum perhaps the reality is that the time has come
-------------------- i became fragmented, small and then slowly began to blossom into a more coherent, steady structure .
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Barnaby
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Re: The Official Post Your Own Poetry Thread. [Re: Expiscator]
#27097037 - 12/19/20 03:53 AM (3 years, 2 months ago) |
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Sounds like early NIN lyrics. Let it flow.
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pineninja
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Re: The Official Post Your Own Poetry Thread. [Re: Barnaby] 1
#27103497 - 12/23/20 04:05 AM (3 years, 2 months ago) |
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Two separate objects. Connected by implication. Antipathy of concepts. Inbetween your complications.
Non impartial testers. False experimental realism. Puristist knowledge severs. What measures dualism.
Falsity of distance. Illusions manifesting here. The measurers considerance. Its all you....Let me....be clear.
-------------------- Just a fool on the hill.
Edited by pineninja (02/02/21 01:09 PM)
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pineninja
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Re: The Official Post Your Own Poetry Thread. [Re: pineninja] 1
#27182887 - 02/02/21 01:05 PM (3 years, 1 month ago) |
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The looking glass.
Hate was so easily stoked. Mistruths eagerly adopted. Leadership given to a Misanthrope The world looked on revolted.
It all now seems to be over. Nothing more to see here. A Trumpish American summer. Coughed out in a winter of fear.
Division reasons momentarily. Extremities seem to splinter away. This Con was a short magnificant incendiary. "The best in history" one might say.
Though the smoke still hangs thick. The acrid stickiness of it sits in your chest. A reminder that you fan the flames. You can't breath near what happens next.
Though the temperature has been momentarily lowered. The powder is close and ever more volatile. Foreign and domestic enemies have learnt. That even a tiny handed match can be incredibly hostile.
-------------------- Just a fool on the hill.
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DividedQuantum
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Re: The Official Post Your Own Poetry Thread. [Re: pineninja] 1
#27183088 - 02/02/21 03:12 PM (3 years, 1 month ago) |
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The era of a lack of function May be done or just on pause If he's back inside in '24 He'll rescind all the good laws
In any case, the road ahead Is bumpy, filled with rut Congress is a deep vortex Can we get bills through or what?
-------------------- Vi Veri Universum Vivus Vici
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pineninja
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Re: The Official Post Your Own Poetry Thread. [Re: DividedQuantum] 1
#27185080 - 02/03/21 07:20 PM (3 years, 1 month ago) |
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The immediacy of a cleaned slate. Wet stoned smell the only legacy. Presidential signed partisan fate. Lasting change or an inevitable wanting hypocrisy.
Policies only as long as the incumbent. Both the Senate and Congress become redundant. No bills no frills just sweeping change. The dialectic dog is off its chain.
-------------------- Just a fool on the hill.
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Re: The Official Post Your Own Poetry Thread. [Re: pineninja] 1
#27201815 - 02/12/21 02:27 PM (3 years, 1 month ago) |
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On thin broth we might survive. We need more if we are to thrive.
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EternalCowabunga
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Re: The Official Post Your Own Poetry Thread. [Re: RJ Tubs 202] 1
#27208513 - 02/15/21 10:10 PM (3 years, 1 month ago) |
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As the room darkens, my computer chair is subject to mental projection Is there a man standing in my room, motionlessly haunting me? I prayed to God again tonight with tears streaming down my face for many hours Hoping for another dragon, but anticipating grotesque family evil I face the wall so the witches have less power... my secret technique
The evil a kid knows is all mythical Ignorant to the principalities of a spiritually declining gut-fuck cancer scalar jump population He rode on the subway last week and his mind absorbed the toxic noosphere Locke was right about the blank slate 20 years later he'll see what was done, understand it, erase it, only to drown again
The marshmallows fall from the stick eternally into the flame This is not a campfire song Although the brothers play guitar and the sisters tap their knees A communal bongo collects the thunder of feared possibility Spreading musical notes which purge the souls of those who thought it was too late to be redeemed Who thought that the only way to heaven was through torture, The crushing of their teeth and slamming of their skulls Tied down to a medical bed and force fed brand name baby food
So I walked slowly out of my room and saw two others I said something about God and a girl mocked me, as if I were new to this place Perhaps I was, perhaps I am. A TV commercial jingle reminded me - I came from the depths Now I do things in moderation
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pineninja
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I liked that.
-------------------- Just a fool on the hill.
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EternalCowabunga
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Re: The Official Post Your Own Poetry Thread. [Re: pineninja]
#27209086 - 02/16/21 09:38 AM (3 years, 1 month ago) |
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Thanks!
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InnerWisdom
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First entry fellas, and gals. Good stuff in this thread by all.
OK here's one of mine. Basically just rhymes in the flow
4-hydroxy dmt and cbt that's how i learn to be me, learn to be free from the love that was missing, some stupid people dissing,. I started stitching the wounds, ditching the fools from my life, and got over my wife ditching me, now it's how it's meant to be. I have found the key to break free at least partially, from the books on the shelf, through the love of myself I find I appreciate people more, that which they are in their core, souls of subjective experiences, no tensions between me and you.
There's a place in your heart where you can rest. Right inside your chest through your mind you manifest that loving presence. You know, the essence Why don't you love yourself. That little child inside yourself.
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pineninja
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Re: The Official Post Your Own Poetry Thread. [Re: InnerWisdom] 2
#27290849 - 05/02/21 06:26 PM (2 years, 10 months ago) |
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Tick tick.
Vibrations are seemingly decreasing. Unchained becomes the melody. Strings tensions be releasing. Timings a moments calamity.
Miscues imperceptibly induced. Irreverent deliberate beats. This conductor has produced. Ones metronomic defeat.
Though.
Implicit is a rhythmic order. Playing a tune most cannot hear. What is beat without disorder. But a song without an ear.
Imperfections are a tempo. We are out of tune. Physics does not yet know. We have spun a new song soon.
-------------------- Just a fool on the hill.
Edited by pineninja (05/02/21 06:26 PM)
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Barnaby
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Re: The Official Post Your Own Poetry Thread. [Re: pineninja]
#27290944 - 05/02/21 07:27 PM (2 years, 10 months ago) |
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Time flows at time it blows
a shot tomorrow a lot of sorrow
could be an indian where people are closed in
Still things could always be worse backing myself in corners and becoming worse or could of used the word terse
Overthinking everything years of covid and people still care about "bling"
What a stupid term for shit that doesn't matter I have a very full blatter, lol. I pissed in public yesterday.
Wow I think that is the worst poetry I have ever written. Mind is in million different places.
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pineninja
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Re: The Official Post Your Own Poetry Thread. [Re: Barnaby] 1
#27298139 - 05/07/21 06:37 AM (2 years, 10 months ago) |
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I am the consumer of all potential. Here I exist within but a line. Reduction turns developmental. With a belief in a singular mind.
The universe and an expansion. A black hole of awareness feeds. The never ending stream of information. The science among the weeds.
Each thought is a simplification. Of all the others you do not take. We think choice is a complication. If you think you're getting smarter...you ain't.
-------------------- Just a fool on the hill.
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Barnaby
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Re: The Official Post Your Own Poetry Thread. [Re: pineninja]
#27303708 - 05/11/21 01:02 AM (2 years, 10 months ago) |
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Life on my time No reason or rhyme Sublime, don't shoot heroin. Subliminal lyric. Very basic Stupid dumb shit
On with interference those with no coherence
Those of lies.
The thought police She never kwief's
On life goes when it stops God only knows.
Feeling high man, feeling good. Feeling like time is a waste Every paste A waste.
Around shit people lies around a steeple.
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ChristianMeteor
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Re: The Official Post Your Own Poetry Thread. [Re: aghorrorag] 1
#27308230 - 05/14/21 11:10 AM (2 years, 9 months ago) |
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Hello voyagers,
I am new here on shroomery but have been a lurker since late 2015. I have had quite a few experiences with the mushroom gods as well as some treads into the realm of lucy and dmitiri. These were some radically perspective altering trips, and after lot's of time and work, I compiled some of my experiences into a book.
This is titled "The Patterns of Existence" by Christian Meteor. I am posting on here today because I would like to offer some free chapters to my fellow psychonauts and hopefully get some feedback. There is a downloadable PDF on psychonauteden.wordpress.com
I greatly appreciate reviews and hope I can get this out there to more people.
Best regards!
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Applesauce3D
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Re: The Official Post Your Own Poetry Thread. [Re: ChristianMeteor] 1
#27326166 - 05/28/21 03:04 AM (2 years, 9 months ago) |
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feed the machines the man-made overlords newsrooms spinning like broken records self-worth derived from likes on a wall crime befalls the cities without correct protocol. counterfeit smiles from the untruthful tongue. a world divided between entitlement and oppression. our new false kings of blue, yellow, orange and purple. feeding our minds with hatred,disrespect and anger. so many talking yet so little listening the lines blinded between fact and ficition bringing nothing but contradictions humanity itself be earth's maledicition
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