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Re: The Official Post Your Own Poetry Thread. [Re: aghorrorag]
#25606031 - 11/10/18 07:55 PM (5 years, 4 months ago) |
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Time is a contruct Easy to see through.
Found a hole in it And I dive through
Women are amazing when they are real Not fake and shallow, like so many feel
Learning to enjoy my life without the drama It's like if we had another 8 years of O'Bama.
Feel at peace with life and all time A ticking clock, the passage of it all.
Time for some new adventures If it is not a challenge, why venture?
Don't be afraid to express oneself There is you and nobody else
When one looks back at life what will one remember? Obience, subservience, and feeling like one is forced to surrender. The powers that be are plain to see.
Never stop challanging onself. Quality life and being true to oneself, All and all, is a gift to to have time for oneself
That is if you can enjoy ones own company sit in a chair, think, and not be phoney
Learn to laugh and see the absurdity of it all Great lessons to learn, before the great fall.
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Re: The Official Post Your Own Poetry Thread. [Re: Barnaby]
#25606036 - 11/10/18 07:58 PM (5 years, 4 months ago) |
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Not going to edit it. Being fucked up and poetry go hand in hand. Lol. Please people, don't take life to seriously. It is ok to draw outside the lines to use an old stupid saying but somehow has stuck with me.
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Re: The Official Post Your Own Poetry Thread. [Re: Barnaby]
#25606421 - 11/11/18 01:50 AM (5 years, 4 months ago) |
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thank goodness for children's play thank God for curves and vacillations
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Re: The Official Post Your Own Poetry Thread. [Re: akira_akuma]
#25607194 - 11/11/18 12:58 PM (5 years, 4 months ago) |
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An oil painting I did of a green frog and amanita!
More of my paintings are on DeviantArt if you want to check them out https://www.deviantart.com/partysquirrels
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Re: The Official Post Your Own Poetry Thread. [Re: squirrelgirl94]
#25607213 - 11/11/18 01:13 PM (5 years, 4 months ago) |
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This is the post your poetry thread. You want, I think, the post your art thread.
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Re: The Official Post Your Own Poetry Thread. [Re: DividedQuantum]
#25607261 - 11/11/18 01:30 PM (5 years, 4 months ago) |
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Oh geeze yeah that's where I thought I was posting it lol. So sorry!
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Re: The Official Post Your Own Poetry Thread. [Re: squirrelgirl94]
#25607280 - 11/11/18 01:45 PM (5 years, 4 months ago) |
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No worries.
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#25607851 - 11/11/18 07:16 PM (5 years, 4 months ago) |
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it's a personal decision of mine, it doesn't need rational reasoning a roka bo kovala svet gracias a ti me abriste mis ojos muchisimo what is the function of a mistake? of fun? maravilla seeds who are they who believe in God; that, the truths of the sense, nothing more than that which they bestowed upon it, is a pleasure to be targeted to the work of another. qui sunt qui credunt in Deum
O sorbitionem, my my my III--- si si si Ahhhhhh, OM
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Re: The Official Post Your Own Poetry Thread. [Re: Lion]
#25615472 - 11/14/18 10:44 PM (5 years, 4 months ago) |
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Pressure Lexicon
A para-middle ba-lance One brid-ge ov-er the pill-ar[s] With rope and pull-ey up-wards Flow-ing over naught-ness
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#25615556 - 11/15/18 01:19 AM (5 years, 4 months ago) |
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Death knocking on the door I am one who is very poor Going to see the dentist tomorrow A glum day in a glum future.
Even with how look with my body posture. One can learn a lot from seeing others' Their is some things that people fake and our out of shape, lol.
The end of a a long binge but still have to show up with things to do People can tell, but they are polite and just get through
Fear is something I proccess through my mind Glad to be alive, it is a great time.
Have done poetry slams and karoke nights Done without feeling much fright, that line sucked.
So next challenge is writing a stand up routine To make people laugh is a scary thing.
Think I will cuss a bit but my humor will be sharp Many will get it as it hits the mark
I feel so vunerable peparing this routine It is not easy but finally in life have the courage to scream
What I find funny and amusing and not giving a shit within bounderies and I think people will enjoy it. End.
Why is the one of the most hardest things in the world taking acceptance and rejection, hecklers, or just accepting people that like one's bit? It is for fun, I like to make peoople laugh. Will do it, fuck it.
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#25625926 - 11/19/18 05:50 PM (5 years, 4 months ago) |
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Angle meets spiral Forms in the blood When laughter meets death Torments shall thrall And the grain of the waters Grows taller then falls
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#25626645 - 11/20/18 01:26 AM (5 years, 4 months ago) |
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You the noise makers. You the attention whores. You the white man. You should be ignored.
You the constrainer. You the enlarger. You the defacer. You the paradigm.
You the decietiful You the untouched. You the hateful. You the unlearned.
You the twofaced. You the privileged. You the above. You know.
I see you in the mirror.
-------------------- Just a fool on the hill.
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Re: The Official Post Your Own Poetry Thread. [Re: pineninja]
#25634351 - 11/23/18 11:53 AM (5 years, 4 months ago) |
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What tear kept in leapt spin up bet books on sin tucks weapon begin to get stuck in with out when the ten they sped said what nothing bled suffering fled done and it’s dead rough and wet sped up but bend duck the luck off commend for stuff you get wed to bully pull full heat seat reach breach contract bomb act as fact strong react quack as dawn get tack black as sack of heroin stare you in eyes tries to scare and mend mine is the den of wolves should bullet shot full as the bombast pot chalk up one for the number slumber what’s under blunder facts as thunder claps what run your facts about the action get whacked from contract on you wrong true as gone blew up suffering such as done some big shout up your mouth down round bout got clout to get the shot out for they bout to route the clown and get scrounged on till dawn and now it’s pawn lack drawn back as thong bikini read easy full cheesy for sleazy backed Gs be clack the steel facts that feel
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#25634565 - 11/23/18 01:58 PM (5 years, 4 months ago) |
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Life is boring Tired of ignoring going to be me whatever it takes to be free black Friday not a fun day stupid shit fan the flames of it
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Re: The Official Post Your Own Poetry Thread. [Re: Barnaby]
#25635085 - 11/23/18 07:03 PM (5 years, 4 months ago) |
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Who doesn’t what wasn’t rupture truck jewel fool who kept cool in prison listen now bit your sour pull off the hour will as full tower above cold as fuck duck just out luck my bad fuck real sad word plus blast herds of cattle into rattle mode stampede real fold up squeal pig mold duck as brung cousin wasn’t justified rust and get tried for crimes out the dime store rap before and after matter of fact matter as plaque buildup on tooth loose now how that downtown ground found like hound territory your scary story bore me lacks floor indeed collapsed more I smoke weed perhaps but flown real tax off know seed steal relax and flow heed till it grow like Gd up peeled caps stuck kneel intact get struck in head we all next get text message bitch best bend backward attack full swerve and just lust curved for the adjust to rusted blade made in China behind yah get line suffer another brother’s crime but I’m busted like the time way back when slay sacks mend mind and bind black as line in jack cap time perhaps he all collapse like Trump slam dunk in the pen for what he done till the end
-------------------- One Love True Indeed. Have Good Trips. Mike/sunshine's mom.
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Re: The Official Post Your Own Poetry Thread. [Re: sunshine]
#25635146 - 11/23/18 07:40 PM (5 years, 4 months ago) |
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Reads like Jack Kerouac in a way. I like it. Just flows.
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Re: The Official Post Your Own Poetry Thread. [Re: Barnaby]
#25635211 - 11/23/18 08:39 PM (5 years, 4 months ago) |
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Hung blacks tax wrung out cats facts stung perhaps lack brung lung collapse get shot pot send off blend tossed in back waste bin begin trust face pill taken sake in game flake defend claim bake bend laced like ten mil fill stick as will it buck real rusted peel back dozens G all that gun claps fun knack for field of flax acts real steal be all you can be Army farm often soften lyric tear and just crept up left stuck bet bucks said dust like lead bust end kneel down around feel crown on you now real power see all you cowards flee knees knock lead tick tock clock speed hock up mucous puke gets fed to dogs clog as bog swamp stomp wrong shit tossed lost defend cost bend forwards towards words more real curve like ball pitched stitch on ball quick to rotate all the time like rhyme pill taken fake in the game flake end the same came flame off it blame boss pretend cost real end then send den full general pull you ten and pull trigger figure in this game rap the same as bullshit back full kit of steel real deal not even rusted wielded just in case dozens must take tis medicine let you been up to no good shouldn’t even couldn’t stood in look when the rook taken
This was my fav by sunshine/Mike!
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Re: The Official Post Your Own Poetry Thread. [Re: sunshine] 2
#25638035 - 11/25/18 11:09 AM (5 years, 4 months ago) |
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Familiar Though Hidden
The prevailing view, thought to be true Is that notions are arbitrary Such a firm motion, forgetting emotion Negates that existences vary
Such a perspective, and moral directive Is such to be left there behind (But then all the masses, who are thought to be asses Are of a more permissive mind)
Familiar though hidden, not yet to be ridden These ideas still have a safe haven Ironically though, the cerebral show A particular wont to be graven
It seems in the end, the tendency to rend Is strong in all modern culture The Devil, he prays -- in his mind he says: "I hope God is playing the vulture."
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#25638508 - 11/25/18 03:14 PM (5 years, 4 months ago) |
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Its like we pick up the same stuff to mull over at similar times...been reading quite a bit of Post modern stuff which has been quite the trip, i like your last poem.
The human condition always has been. It is what it is, they say. Another perspective sight unseen. A narrow cultured formulae.
The opinions we form come from societal norms. The things we cannot think about. As the structure changes it rengages. The normal shouted by the simple devout.
Yesterdays people are different to todays. Im sure tommorrow will follow suit. Your decisions your very individual plays. Are shaped by your times conduit.
We place ourselves apart from the very framework we relate too. When its the times that create us eqaully. In another space the sense of self wouldve looked different. With cues and influence subliminally.
When all thought is a future projection. Within a cultural moment of self. With a moment of honest reflection. You know you cannot really ever tell.
-------------------- Just a fool on the hill.
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