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Re: The Official Post Your Own Poetry Thread. [Re: aghorrorag] 3
#28473244 - 09/18/23 12:16 AM (4 months, 8 days ago) |
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A recent cheerful poem I wrote
Cud
I write with blood Lost love comes to flood Here to hurt me and stab me in my heart But that isn't the worst part It's when you make my eyes lock in place My head spins I am a slave with a sharp point in my face How. No. Please! a reeling Not this feeling! There's mud in my veins stopping up my core There's sud in my sclera- Very worn and wary is what I mean Why do I want more? With stupid desire, the ire; it poisons me And it taunts me You haunt me Fill me with fire for false hope And rape my mind in short time Climbing and climbing but really Dropping down, sinking, drooping, looping, needing, feeding Leading me Bleeding me dry This is why I cannot cope or cry But rather lie At the end of the line
Like Kevin Gates said. I'm a prisoner in my own mind
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Re: The Official Post Your Own Poetry Thread. [Re: DividedQuantum] 2
#28511301 - 10/20/23 01:24 AM (3 months, 7 days ago) |
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LXIV AMOR Profundæ latissimæque Veritates amandæ sunt, Sic ideo necesse est: Res maxima amanda est. Quidquam sitis bene scimus Cum nos id adeo explet, Cum alto hic movet imus: Res maxima omnis amor.
64 Loving
Of the deepest and widest truths They must eo ipso be loved, so therefore it's necessary: the greatest thing is to be loved. Whatever of thirst we know best when it fills us to such a point, this inmost with depth arouses: Love is the greatest thing of all
64 syllables, 8 lines, 8 letter titles
Plato is an art critic and Kant is Plato on crystal meth.
Ode to those passersby
To all those passersby Through glass gives phantasies Lines and rock with grass passes With signs and wood and trees And to those that pass by Of glances and hypnotic eyes Face pressed symbolic To night's lights or sun's rise So to those moments In travel and in place Phase out to the world One a glimpse of a face
-------------------- ☆✮★⋆I ♡ the music, not the bling⋆★✮☆ https://rictornorton.co.uk/eighteen/1730news.htm 𝔦𝔫 𝔫𝔬𝔪𝔦𝔫𝔢 𝔟𝔬𝔫𝔦 𝔭𝔢𝔰𝔰𝔦𝔪𝔦 𝔪𝔞𝔩𝔬𝔯𝔲𝔪 𝔣𝔦𝔲𝔫𝔱 May I ask what your bud type is? ❂ LXIV⁶⁴AMOR ❂Profundæ lātissimæque vēritātēs amandæ sunt, sīc ideo necesse est: rēs maxima amanda est; pōtus sit is bene scīmus cum nōs id adeō explet, cum altō hīc movet īmus: rēs maxima omnis amor.
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verpa mea
masculus non est femina. sicut vir virum amo non quia is ut mulier est, sed quia homo est. homo sum. amo lumbum pilosum eius, natem et penem, et natum. Quomodo ille esset vere femina? Solum istud.
Google translate will botch the hell out of this. Enjoy if you can lol
Verpa mea means my erect dick, and it is feminine, but that's all I'll say
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Re: The Official Post Your Own Poetry Thread. [Re: GenericHero]
#28602945 - 12/30/23 04:45 AM (29 days, 6 hours ago) |
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Re: The Official Post Your Own Poetry Thread. [Re: GenericHero]
#28603030 - 12/30/23 07:50 AM (29 days, 3 hours ago) |
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I meant to say "Amo lumbos pilosos eius"
Im looking at it and i'd make some changes because I can't remember exactly why I kept that singular
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Re: The Official Post Your Own Poetry Thread. [Re: GenericHero]
#28603033 - 12/30/23 07:52 AM (29 days, 3 hours ago) |
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amo lumbos pilosos eius, natem et penem, et natum
This means I love his hairy loins, balls, butt, penis and his birth
-------------------- ☆✮★⋆I ♡ the music, not the bling⋆★✮☆ https://rictornorton.co.uk/eighteen/1730news.htm 𝔦𝔫 𝔫𝔬𝔪𝔦𝔫𝔢 𝔟𝔬𝔫𝔦 𝔭𝔢𝔰𝔰𝔦𝔪𝔦 𝔪𝔞𝔩𝔬𝔯𝔲𝔪 𝔣𝔦𝔲𝔫𝔱 May I ask what your bud type is? ❂ LXIV⁶⁴AMOR ❂Profundæ lātissimæque vēritātēs amandæ sunt, sīc ideo necesse est: rēs maxima amanda est; pōtus sit is bene scīmus cum nōs id adeō explet, cum altō hīc movet īmus: rēs maxima omnis amor.
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Re: The Official Post Your Own Poetry Thread. [Re: GenericHero]
#28603812 - 12/30/23 08:15 PM (28 days, 15 hours ago) |
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Yes i was referring to a homosexual ewok actually
-------------------- ☆✮★⋆I ♡ the music, not the bling⋆★✮☆ https://rictornorton.co.uk/eighteen/1730news.htm 𝔦𝔫 𝔫𝔬𝔪𝔦𝔫𝔢 𝔟𝔬𝔫𝔦 𝔭𝔢𝔰𝔰𝔦𝔪𝔦 𝔪𝔞𝔩𝔬𝔯𝔲𝔪 𝔣𝔦𝔲𝔫𝔱 May I ask what your bud type is? ❂ LXIV⁶⁴AMOR ❂Profundæ lātissimæque vēritātēs amandæ sunt, sīc ideo necesse est: rēs maxima amanda est; pōtus sit is bene scīmus cum nōs id adeō explet, cum altō hīc movet īmus: rēs maxima omnis amor.
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Re: The Official Post Your Own Poetry Thread. [Re: GenericHero]
#28603813 - 12/30/23 08:15 PM (28 days, 15 hours ago) |
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Half man half ewok
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Re: The Official Post Your Own Poetry Thread. [Re: GenericHero]
#28604293 - 12/31/23 07:59 AM (28 days, 3 hours ago) |
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Quote:
They criticize me huh They Talk About Me Bad Ain't Nobody Wanna Sign Me I Had to Show My Ass If I Love You Ain't No Question I'd Give My Last One Day This Heart Gonna Get Me Zipped up in a BodyBag -Boosie Badazz
-------------------- ☆✮★⋆I ♡ the music, not the bling⋆★✮☆ https://rictornorton.co.uk/eighteen/1730news.htm 𝔦𝔫 𝔫𝔬𝔪𝔦𝔫𝔢 𝔟𝔬𝔫𝔦 𝔭𝔢𝔰𝔰𝔦𝔪𝔦 𝔪𝔞𝔩𝔬𝔯𝔲𝔪 𝔣𝔦𝔲𝔫𝔱 May I ask what your bud type is? ❂ LXIV⁶⁴AMOR ❂Profundæ lātissimæque vēritātēs amandæ sunt, sīc ideo necesse est: rēs maxima amanda est; pōtus sit is bene scīmus cum nōs id adeō explet, cum altō hīc movet īmus: rēs maxima omnis amor.
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Re: The Official Post Your Own Poetry Thread. [Re: Nillion] 1
#28621150 - 01/14/24 02:48 PM (13 days, 20 hours ago) |
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This is not my poetry but it is an interpretation of one
I haven't ever really picked up on it, but the lyrics are bisexual, no?
Quote:
Future, The Weeknd - Low Life
The Weeknd-
I turn the Ritz into a poor house It's like eviction number four now Go 'head and ash it on the floor now Girl, go 'head and show me how you go down And I feel my whole body peakin' And I'm fuckin' anybody with they legs wide Gettin' faded with some bitches from the West Side East coast, nigga reppin' North Side Never waste a ho's time Bitch, I'm on my own time Fuck a nigga co-sign Always change my number and my phone line Baby girl, I don't lie Used to have no money for a crib Now my room service bill cost your whole life If they try to stunt me, I go all out military I'm camo'ed all out like I'm in the military And free up all my niggas locked up in the penitentiary (squad) 'Cause I'm always reppin' for that low life
Do you think The Weeknd was/is doing dudes too?
-------------------- ☆✮★⋆I ♡ the music, not the bling⋆★✮☆ https://rictornorton.co.uk/eighteen/1730news.htm 𝔦𝔫 𝔫𝔬𝔪𝔦𝔫𝔢 𝔟𝔬𝔫𝔦 𝔭𝔢𝔰𝔰𝔦𝔪𝔦 𝔪𝔞𝔩𝔬𝔯𝔲𝔪 𝔣𝔦𝔲𝔫𝔱 May I ask what your bud type is? ❂ LXIV⁶⁴AMOR ❂Profundæ lātissimæque vēritātēs amandæ sunt, sīc ideo necesse est: rēs maxima amanda est; pōtus sit is bene scīmus cum nōs id adeō explet, cum altō hīc movet īmus: rēs maxima omnis amor.
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Re: The Official Post Your Own Poetry Thread. [Re: Nillion]
#28621319 - 01/14/24 05:41 PM (13 days, 18 hours ago) |
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... 'Tis true what I've been thinking recently... I'd say it but this one is juicy.
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Re: The Official Post Your Own Poetry Thread. [Re: Nillion]
#28621350 - 01/14/24 06:02 PM (13 days, 17 hours ago) |
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Jonah is at best bisexual. I don't doubt it. I really however am interested in whether Future is bisexual. He is on a song with the Weeknd called "Coming out strong," and he has lyrics that sound almost just like "the only time i feel alive is when I taste dick." Kodak Black asked him about it on video and Future said he meant take pills, but it sounds pretty clear.
Okay. Here it is. Can you imagine a world where men too are sexually objectified openly by other men, and are socially expected, if a bottom, to be as attractive as possible in that way--not by wearing female clothes but by being attractive in the way most homosexual men want each other? Most men who seek men like maleness. They seek what is male, not what is supposedly female in a male, who supposedly acts like one. This is really a massive lie. I'm not entirely sure how it has come about, but I have ideas. Imagine then, just as how looks and status are with relations between men and women today, how things could become for relations between people of the same sex! What savage insults would be created, and what new pain and misery would men experience! Hmm. How would it be? Would men fight each other for another man? The most devious sorts of ridicule could materialize. Could the phenomenon of another man taking your man, as men take each other's women all the time, be normalized? I think something like this existed in Rome and Greece, and I think it is exactly this that people have tried to mitigate with Christianity and Abrahamic religion. The problem of Alcibiades. What to do with Alcibiades? Can you imagine, furthermore, what the male ideal really is, perhaps what it has always been? A bisexual power top? Hercules was described as bisexual, and it was said he had a countable number of female companions but innumerable male ones. I wonder if when homosexuality is completely integrated, it will reinforce or degrade competition between men. I can see reinforced competition and a hypermasculinity that hasn't been seen since ancient Rome. This is where I think a huge problems lies. And it is in exactly what it means to be a homosexual bottom that the answer must be found. And I daresay it is exactly the same problem in the early sexual revolution, in the early 1900s, of affirming the sexuality of women, of 'feminine sexuality.' Not sure where to go from here, but it appears there are several possibilities. Any thoughts?
-------------------- ☆✮★⋆I ♡ the music, not the bling⋆★✮☆ https://rictornorton.co.uk/eighteen/1730news.htm 𝔦𝔫 𝔫𝔬𝔪𝔦𝔫𝔢 𝔟𝔬𝔫𝔦 𝔭𝔢𝔰𝔰𝔦𝔪𝔦 𝔪𝔞𝔩𝔬𝔯𝔲𝔪 𝔣𝔦𝔲𝔫𝔱 May I ask what your bud type is? ❂ LXIV⁶⁴AMOR ❂Profundæ lātissimæque vēritātēs amandæ sunt, sīc ideo necesse est: rēs maxima amanda est; pōtus sit is bene scīmus cum nōs id adeō explet, cum altō hīc movet īmus: rēs maxima omnis amor.
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Re: The Official Post Your Own Poetry Thread. [Re: Nillion]
#28621359 - 01/14/24 06:09 PM (13 days, 17 hours ago) |
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Yesyes, it requires a libidological analysis, a sexual phenomenology to lay bare these things, precisely Heidegger's άλήθεια.
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Re: The Official Post Your Own Poetry Thread. [Re: Nillion]
#28621426 - 01/14/24 07:31 PM (13 days, 16 hours ago) |
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I'm not saying I think something like this is good. I think, on the contrary, it could be bad. I like just the same as you said, but there are always ones who are bound to be like Alcibiades. Not all people want to seek a life partner. On the contrary, many people prefer a life of fame and fortune, and class, and that involves navigating a hierarchy. What bothers me is really what I think is actually necessary without psychedelics. If homosexuality becomes integrated completely... What I mean by that is if there becomes a time where everyone is considered bisexual at default, and purely homosexual or purely heterosexual is the minority... I think that is in the future for the west, and I think that without psychedelics to put a damper on unbridled masculinity, the "ideal man" people debate about will become an actual goal of young men, whom wish to be Hercules, you know, bisexual power top, the ultimate force of masculinity and dominance. This will do exactly what happened then, when their psychedelic spirituality fell apart. It will cause complete chaos probably.
-------------------- ☆✮★⋆I ♡ the music, not the bling⋆★✮☆ https://rictornorton.co.uk/eighteen/1730news.htm 𝔦𝔫 𝔫𝔬𝔪𝔦𝔫𝔢 𝔟𝔬𝔫𝔦 𝔭𝔢𝔰𝔰𝔦𝔪𝔦 𝔪𝔞𝔩𝔬𝔯𝔲𝔪 𝔣𝔦𝔲𝔫𝔱 May I ask what your bud type is? ❂ LXIV⁶⁴AMOR ❂Profundæ lātissimæque vēritātēs amandæ sunt, sīc ideo necesse est: rēs maxima amanda est; pōtus sit is bene scīmus cum nōs id adeō explet, cum altō hīc movet īmus: rēs maxima omnis amor.
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Re: The Official Post Your Own Poetry Thread. [Re: Nillion]
#28621456 - 01/14/24 08:01 PM (13 days, 15 hours ago) |
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I say that because, and now this will get gay. You know what most gay men find out? They eventually find someone who does something to them... As in... touches their heart through their butthole, and if that person then betrays their trust or harms them, the emotional pain can be excruciating. This can be explained neuropsychologically additionally, if only the male g spot had been taken more seriously. It is directly related to the fact that person was literally inside of them, and this is what it means when someone touches your soul with sex, like the Benny Benassi song...
Or...
The tendency to, as a top, continue to use different people for sex is what I'm talking about when I mean unbridled masculinity, because it doesn't care about the possible feelings of the bottom afterwards, which are real and exist for a reason: it cares about pleasing itself. There is something possibly created here consequently; bottoms then basing large pieces of their lives upon exactly their being desirable as a bottom (and then neglecting their own masculine needs).
The Bible, I think... When it says "Man lying with man, receiving the recompense of their error which is meet." I think that originally meant something like heart-break. I think what it was originally was an attack on exactly the type of love that comes into existence for a man who 'debases himself with another man' (is just a bottom). Notice the slurs exist mainly for bottoms, not for tops. These slurs exist in spite of a recognition precisely of what the tops have done to the bottoms because of their toxic masculinity.
There is a level of trust that exists after any two people have sex that simply cannot exist before it. And with two men, there is a particular sort of trust: the other person is of the same sex, and each other's maleness (or femaleness) becomes shared and understood in a different way than if it would be with a man versus a woman. This homosexual trust can easily be broken by the 'power top,' or whatever you want to call it, and it is exactly because of a lack of complementarity --not necessarily of male and female but, for the homosexual relation, of versatility. Long term homosexual relationships involve sexual versatility more often than not, which is isomorphic to Carl Jung's observation about an old man and his wife, whom he had known for decades, that they became to resemble each other more and more over the years, regarding masculine and feminine characteristics.
That's my little unedited expulsion for you. Maybe there is something to take home. I wanted to just get all these thoughts off my head.
-------------------- ☆✮★⋆I ♡ the music, not the bling⋆★✮☆ https://rictornorton.co.uk/eighteen/1730news.htm 𝔦𝔫 𝔫𝔬𝔪𝔦𝔫𝔢 𝔟𝔬𝔫𝔦 𝔭𝔢𝔰𝔰𝔦𝔪𝔦 𝔪𝔞𝔩𝔬𝔯𝔲𝔪 𝔣𝔦𝔲𝔫𝔱 May I ask what your bud type is? ❂ LXIV⁶⁴AMOR ❂Profundæ lātissimæque vēritātēs amandæ sunt, sīc ideo necesse est: rēs maxima amanda est; pōtus sit is bene scīmus cum nōs id adeō explet, cum altō hīc movet īmus: rēs maxima omnis amor.
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Re: The Official Post Your Own Poetry Thread. [Re: Nillion]
#28621473 - 01/14/24 08:22 PM (13 days, 15 hours ago) |
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What exactly is heartbreak? This is a very important question deserving of an answer. What does it mean neurologically? What does it mean evolutionarily? What does it say about what we are? Does it not say something about what we are not equipped to handle?
-------------------- ☆✮★⋆I ♡ the music, not the bling⋆★✮☆ https://rictornorton.co.uk/eighteen/1730news.htm 𝔦𝔫 𝔫𝔬𝔪𝔦𝔫𝔢 𝔟𝔬𝔫𝔦 𝔭𝔢𝔰𝔰𝔦𝔪𝔦 𝔪𝔞𝔩𝔬𝔯𝔲𝔪 𝔣𝔦𝔲𝔫𝔱 May I ask what your bud type is? ❂ LXIV⁶⁴AMOR ❂Profundæ lātissimæque vēritātēs amandæ sunt, sīc ideo necesse est: rēs maxima amanda est; pōtus sit is bene scīmus cum nōs id adeō explet, cum altō hīc movet īmus: rēs maxima omnis amor.
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Re: The Official Post Your Own Poetry Thread. [Re: Nillion] 1
#28621499 - 01/14/24 08:40 PM (13 days, 15 hours ago) |
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Neurologists have already discovered that areas of the brain are activated with heartbreak, which are linked to physical pain... It exists with homosexuality, and especially related to the emotions of the bottom. Why would such a heartbreak exist if what is peddled by puritanical acolytes was true about love and sexuality? Such an experience seems too hard-wired to be the product of something going wrong, or some anomaly. Heartbreak is too consistent, but I digress
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#28621523 - 01/14/24 09:01 PM (13 days, 14 hours ago) |
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I have transformed my feelings about these things in such a way, evening out what could be called masculine and feminine drives inside of me, into analysis and philosophy, if you want to call it that. I call it jokingly "when the libidology turns to the libidiphilology, and from the latter to the libidiphilosophy." I find it hysterical, but I get it if you don't. I have my quirks. To ask a question is to consent to be changed. This is a feminine desire if you ask me. There is something masculine about positing, and something feminine about inquiring. On the surface level, enquiring is passive, so to be affected, and positing is active, so to affect. What I call the libidiphilology is the analysis of the emphatic versus the acquiescent, as opposed to active top versus passive bottom, male versus female. The most penetrating thoughts seem to be when whatever energy is inside you becomes transformed. I think the only way I have been able to write about this stuff is to exactly channel such libidinal whatever, discharge into a certain outlet to see it in such a way in myself, to stand away from it, and make sense of it with a larger perspective. It has really been required and necessitated to be made sense of, because it is so perplexing.
-------------------- ☆✮★⋆I ♡ the music, not the bling⋆★✮☆ https://rictornorton.co.uk/eighteen/1730news.htm 𝔦𝔫 𝔫𝔬𝔪𝔦𝔫𝔢 𝔟𝔬𝔫𝔦 𝔭𝔢𝔰𝔰𝔦𝔪𝔦 𝔪𝔞𝔩𝔬𝔯𝔲𝔪 𝔣𝔦𝔲𝔫𝔱 May I ask what your bud type is? ❂ LXIV⁶⁴AMOR ❂Profundæ lātissimæque vēritātēs amandæ sunt, sīc ideo necesse est: rēs maxima amanda est; pōtus sit is bene scīmus cum nōs id adeō explet, cum altō hīc movet īmus: rēs maxima omnis amor.
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Re: The Official Post Your Own Poetry Thread. [Re: DividedQuantum]
#28622412 - 01/15/24 05:05 PM (12 days, 18 hours ago) |
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I wrote this today for fun. It is extremely gay. I made it deliberately, and I feel I actually was forced to write this, and am forcing myself to make this poem in addition to what was said. It is not my best poem, but I wanted something like it written, and I had a little fun with it. Perhaps I will edit it and make it better in the future, but this is a poem about my spouse. The The subject is life and death and love. The content is personal for me and yes again it is a love poem, so if you don't like things like that then don't read it. And I get it. Love poetry isn't really my thing. But poetry is for exposing the heart and mind, so here goes mine exposed to you.
My Same Love
Your gaze makes me gulp And I can feel it down to my stomach running like rivers of jelly The tiny crinkles in the creases of your eyes When your lids are heavy Warm me as much as your embrace When I feel the pulse in your arm and in your beautiful hand when ours are clasped I feel like our spirits had that planned, and my feelings race
With you a picture is painted for me in every moment There's no art more reassuring than your smile after I kiss those pink lips sometimes slightly hidden by your beard The light purple beneath your eyes reminds me of lilacs, and the sweet smell of you intoxicates me To feel your chest pressed against mine, and your legs wrapped around mine like a pretzel With our penises touching I love that, oh my God I love that And when that leads to more, which cannot be written even in poetry; there's a flood in my heart
Your biology so close is an immense pleasure of mine If grapes are joy then you are wine I will kiss your feet, and everything else, every single leaf of your vine is divine, Because I really love everything about you Nothing you do could ever offend me And being how you are, you never may Because you've told me, you feel the same way Your voice is nice and soothing It accents your kindness and laughter
The thought of being without you is as if it could never happen Something so monstrous could never transpire Even if memories could be put into fire I know a certain moment coming; I wish it wouldn't I wish so much I feel like it couldn't Until then I'll make the most I'll take in every single feature, adore it all in eternity beyond future Even if we could live and love together forever, What then? Wouldn't the best times be sought over and over again? What difference would immortality make? Just one moment rows infinity's wake Because the truest ones are perfect And forever will have deserved it
Hear this of my heart, Because it is wrought in words with it
-------------------- ☆✮★⋆I ♡ the music, not the bling⋆★✮☆ https://rictornorton.co.uk/eighteen/1730news.htm 𝔦𝔫 𝔫𝔬𝔪𝔦𝔫𝔢 𝔟𝔬𝔫𝔦 𝔭𝔢𝔰𝔰𝔦𝔪𝔦 𝔪𝔞𝔩𝔬𝔯𝔲𝔪 𝔣𝔦𝔲𝔫𝔱 May I ask what your bud type is? ❂ LXIV⁶⁴AMOR ❂Profundæ lātissimæque vēritātēs amandæ sunt, sīc ideo necesse est: rēs maxima amanda est; pōtus sit is bene scīmus cum nōs id adeō explet, cum altō hīc movet īmus: rēs maxima omnis amor.
Edited by Blue_Lux (01/15/24 07:31 PM)
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Re: The Official Post Your Own Poetry Thread. [Re: DividedQuantum]
#28622577 - 01/15/24 07:19 PM (12 days, 16 hours ago) |
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An old poem. I've seen a lot of tatterdemalion homeless people. It always bothered me, so I wrote a poem about it.
Poemless
Winding down streets or in unforgettable places Or whether in sheets around unfamiliar faces All of which seen cannot be called yours Oh, when will it be time that without is these wars? These struggles of how and wonders of where With whom and with what? What health? For fair? Or what of those dreams and those plans that were made? What of the promises and what wagers were weighed? Against each other, yes, and down another line too Bringing to this, a wish that only to soothe With words? What? From something elude? This unsaid With thoughts, no, they only intrude. Upon this dread that cannot be placed and cannot be found For there is no mark and there is no sound But a pause and a break, and a breath that does shake In its unsettled foundation longing to feel safe with exception for what is to be shown? For protection against this truth of alone? unless a miracle falls and is caught before too? That a cave or a mountain should come into view? For memories count and trace apparent outlines Where are they now without means to doubt signs? To cover up and replace all here that is felt To realize a room that is not but a welt Upon these statements worn? Why? To be torn? Tattered and dirty, unknown and uncared for? Withered and rippling in the wind with what form? To where, how? and to what end for a storm? To be only now to rend for refuge once more
-------------------- ☆✮★⋆I ♡ the music, not the bling⋆★✮☆ https://rictornorton.co.uk/eighteen/1730news.htm 𝔦𝔫 𝔫𝔬𝔪𝔦𝔫𝔢 𝔟𝔬𝔫𝔦 𝔭𝔢𝔰𝔰𝔦𝔪𝔦 𝔪𝔞𝔩𝔬𝔯𝔲𝔪 𝔣𝔦𝔲𝔫𝔱 May I ask what your bud type is? ❂ LXIV⁶⁴AMOR ❂Profundæ lātissimæque vēritātēs amandæ sunt, sīc ideo necesse est: rēs maxima amanda est; pōtus sit is bene scīmus cum nōs id adeō explet, cum altō hīc movet īmus: rēs maxima omnis amor.
Edited by Blue_Lux (01/15/24 07:33 PM)
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