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Offlinebeforethedawn
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Re: The Official Post Your Own Poetry Thread. [Re: DividedQuantum] * 2
    #23457651 - 07/19/16 09:18 PM (7 years, 6 months ago)

A shaman has no mind to lose.
A shaman's mind is like a fortress that was never built being attacked from all sides forever.
And I ain't no shaman.
And I ain't no army.
I ain't no sunrise on a world of constant dawn, showing signs of failing health like a free hospital admittance coupon, reaping the seeds of a found Lost Ness sown in a floating sea, a sea floating in the lost and found eyes that care like a nurse to see, see the rising dawn reflected as it comes to an endless close on the surface of every eye of
every me,
every nurse,
every seed,
every coupon,
every monster,
...found...
...lost...
...found....
...floating in the sea.
A singular unblinking toy's eye, inside me is a sea, in which every me, has timeless eyes which care to see, a sunrise, without me.
That's me... incorporated
That's me... incorporated
I'm free. Here's your coupon. Harvest me... Harvest the dawn... Harvest the sea...
You can't scare me.
I won't even blink.
There are no eyes through which I see.
And there is no mind within me.
With which you might find you have lost me, or I have lost mine, in yours, because
That's me.
That's me.
And no eyelid by which vision may be lost of me.
So don't close your eyes.
Let the ocean of tears swim to the surface.
We'll drown, here, together, with nothing but the sunrise to see.
On the surface,
of the eye
That is thee.
You are a reflection of me.
Incorporated.
Incorporated.


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Can't you see you're fucking blind?


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Offlinebeforethedawn
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Re: The Official Post Your Own Poetry Thread. [Re: DividedQuantum] * 3
    #23484619 - 07/28/16 05:45 AM (7 years, 5 months ago)

Thanks so much for the kind words, they mean a lot.

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Level the ghost sharks speaking dry tongue philosophy
Let me set me free of the dark of nothing but noises
I see I see the end in plain sight but I speak no surprise
The end, seen, nothing spoken
Capture my heart in an always true phase of God
Pinch the wound shut on my days of slumber and agony
Leave me to speak my name and my worth into the breeze of selfless ease
Find my way in the way unfindable
There I roam ceaselessly
On the path written by acts of the true, right and greedless
Firing shells into the mouth of the dark forest
Just picture the end of the world
Firing shells into the mouth of the dark forest
Just picture the end of the sentence


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Re: The Official Post Your Own Poetry Thread. [Re: akira_akuma] * 2
    #23533745 - 08/12/16 06:24 AM (7 years, 5 months ago)

Beautiful akira.

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Everything left undecided
I breach the new dunes of understanding formed by the winds of change
Within the days sunless, a cloud right next to me
Sunless, and scorching no one and nothing, just mere being here
I want to walk alone into the sun-setting haze
Lose sight of my own gaze
Send me into the lava and the grease
Burn the candle, hood the cranium, no grinds, no gears
Wandering the wonderland, wondering
For them I am unsure, not for me
For them I leave everything undecided, not for me
Turbines through the desert sky
I see only traces of me, myself, I
Solitude is a candle lit
Without a second hour
And and no hand to wind the clock up
To grease the second hand, grinding
To please the keeper's needs, gears
As I fall into another minute sour
So I present my time
Soak up the shower
Where do the new notions lie?
of which I can find,
nothing to decide.


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Can't you see you're fucking blind?


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Re: The Official Post Your Own Poetry Thread. [Re: beforethedawn] * 1
    #23533762 - 08/12/16 06:38 AM (7 years, 5 months ago)

A sun shattering the midday darkness
Speak clearly wanderer if they see you
Find my eyes, find my darkness, find my light, find my way
Speak clearly if they see you
I want nothing of this, nothing of the clutch of an unborn day
I can't open my mouth
They
They
They
See nothing, want nothing of this, they are without blindness
Undercutting the grass and without a tired eyelid
Darkness or forgotten light, misplaced ideas of God
Stolen from the vault, we wander
Stolen from the vault, we wander
It was just a toy box
Wind up me Scotty,
We'll see who goes through the speechless town, the ruins of built pointlessness
Spires reaching towards the clouds that shun us, all of us
Worship the sky that cannot speak our name
And know truly within lies the potency of dreams
Dreams of endless wandering, smileless people, smileless reflections of my face in the water
I know her, seen her before
She is empty but full to the brim
In her eyes, I see the perfect storm between dusk and dawn, the twilight that stole our names from our faces
Potency remembered, seen by two lit candles
Speak
Clearly
If they
See you


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Hostile humankind
Can't you see you're fucking blind?


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Re: The Official Post Your Own Poetry Thread. [Re: beforethedawn] * 1
    #23533778 - 08/12/16 06:50 AM (7 years, 5 months ago)

Beautiful with rich icons of slattery and steel
Porches with a single loudspeaker, endless through the forest
Over and under the spoken whispers
Why did it breathe its sounds into my ear
Why did it not finally present itself into my glare
Just wanted another day of bitter sight
Just wanted another one of those, another day, burning within
Instead, you
Take me down, into the pit my soul dug previously
To echo the dawn of a new furrow
Deeper, now, deeper
Under, asleep
Love in the window, or was it just narcissism
I want to have my tree grow here
I want to find you, us
Here, in the slow stinging blackness and nothing found entrenched in our soul hide-outs
Peek within the door and find no one sitting there
With the sense they just left
With the sense they are just coming now
Because here you are seated, reading stories over the fire
And here I am seated next to you listening
I stole my love from a forest that burnt itself to the ground
Now I see inside my own embers and wonder if my voice will generate feedback
If the loudspeaker,
Finally,
Whispers and taunts the dark barking ghosts of lost thoughts, lost hours
And explodes
Burning it all to the ground


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Hostile humankind
Can't you see you're fucking blind?


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Re: The Official Post Your Own Poetry Thread. [Re: DividedQuantum]
    #23536102 - 08/12/16 08:38 PM (7 years, 5 months ago)

I like, quantum.

You should give free-flow a go, if that's the term. Just type and let it flow. There seems to be some deliberation in your writing and while that produces more sensical topics in the writing, as yours generally is compared to mine, it restricts imagery.


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Re: The Official Post Your Own Poetry Thread. [Re: pineninja] * 1
    #23555808 - 08/19/16 03:01 AM (7 years, 5 months ago)

:thumbup:


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Re: The Official Post Your Own Poetry Thread. [Re: akira_akuma]
    #23574961 - 08/25/16 03:15 AM (7 years, 5 months ago)

Yeah good stuff akira, very original, and beautiful words.

Not to say I'm not reading and enjoying the rest. Can relate to a lot of these.


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Re: The Official Post Your Own Poetry Thread. [Re: beforethedawn] * 2
    #23574974 - 08/25/16 03:35 AM (7 years, 5 months ago)

level eight

The future consumes me. I pass level 1. No corpses, no bad breath, only living people. Level 2. Demons worshipping the cross. Level 3. Moons orbiting stars. Level 4. Horrors of unspeakable barbarity, devilish emanicipation of all good, total failure of human nature, consummate pathological brain processes animating lost souls. Level 5. A vase of flowers. Level 6. A vase of flowers, a fly rests gently on the stem. Level 7. Rambo. Level 8.

And so we have arrived.

I look at my hands, they are decaying. I lost my eyesight but see with blood. I cannot believe the loudspeaker, it sounds like a cup of coffee singing. Viruses are prone to be infected here, the air is so still.

Look at me.

Look into my eyes.

It is a waterfall on the speechless domain of repeating echoes.


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Hostile humankind
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Re: The Official Post Your Own Poetry Thread. [Re: beforethedawn] * 2
    #23574981 - 08/25/16 03:43 AM (7 years, 5 months ago)

Flying through the abyss of eternal dreams, thinking I am dead. I lose colour to shades of grey, nooses hang in the arch, the wind commands they do not rest, only wither, only beg to hold our necks.

The moon sees the sealess landscape, blind. I speak in moon-tongue and lap up my drink of toasty water, content to drown. Eye to eye with space, level with the breath of time, I speak endlessly underwater. Beauty is without a surname, and I compel her to bring me under. Beauty is without a middle name, and I command her to describe its tone. Into a void of light, astonishing. Into the void of a light night and withered bread industry, level with spoken demos.

The desk fell down the stairs, I had pushed it. The stairs merely look on.


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Hostile humankind
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Re: The Official Post Your Own Poetry Thread. [Re: pineninja] * 1
    #23586953 - 08/28/16 01:20 PM (7 years, 4 months ago)

Quote:

pineninja said:
Politics

Banal reactions.
Extreme factions.
Misplaced trust.
Power lust.

Deceptions lauded.
Enemies sorted.
Boys club.
Capitalist hub.

Entrenched bigotry.
Cruel infamy.
Insular views.
Church pews.

Family name.
Generational shame.
Reinstated tiers.
Resultant smears.

Power plays.
Hypocrisy slays.
Representative will.
Bullshit swill.

We stay.
They dine.
Why pay.
These swine.




Hey didn't see this before. This one is really good, especially that you use only two words per line, that's crafty to make that work.

It would make good lyrics, slowly whispered or something, in an ambient type guitar track.

power.........plays...........hypocrisy..............slays..............

etc.

:thumbup:


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Re: The Official Post Your Own Poetry Thread. [Re: ModestMouse] * 1
    #23616676 - 09/06/16 12:04 AM (7 years, 4 months ago)

Good stuff quantum!


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Re: The Official Post Your Own Poetry Thread. [Re: akira_akuma]
    #23634662 - 09/11/16 02:59 AM (7 years, 4 months ago)

akira those two are brilliant . . .

A lot of really good stuff

Will contribute momentarily :laugh:


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Hostile humankind
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Re: The Official Post Your Own Poetry Thread. [Re: pineninja] * 1
    #23646593 - 09/15/16 05:07 AM (7 years, 4 months ago)

Good stuff. Okay so much for momentarily, but here's one

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Written in the anthill, written in alphabetic numbers
Human sacrifices to the human god
Candles unlit but burning
Locks unshackled but still safekeeping the truth
Is intelligence a kind of love?
Where did I find you . . .
Where did I put you last
And where do I go to get past?
Suns, moons, bright and dark skies
Which will come for me . . .
When I stand between the days?
Her name was not there
I couldn't speak it
So I took it out of my pocket
And realised she was my door
Never did I know in the glowing light around her
That perhaps such things could be reflected
Without diminishing us all
Now I go into the dark unease
Of a twilight not born
Into her quiet eye
And think to myself
The golden rain on her soul must feel like silver
To the pure touch of the dying fires
In the clouds of unspoken majesty
Which salute above
Because that army destroys nothing;
Everything that is not love
I want to see again
Like the blind man without a notion
Who breaks into the sunrise
Who breaks into the rain
And see nothing but the purity
Of life
The deepest mystery yet founded
On this golden universe
Of aging fires and forgotten soils
See again and say
Not why did you put me here
But why you come again


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Hostile humankind
Can't you see you're fucking blind?


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Re: The Official Post Your Own Poetry Thread. [Re: beforethedawn] * 1
    #23646600 - 09/15/16 05:17 AM (7 years, 4 months ago)

Unborn villages, unseen skies
No one has been here
No one here dies

I look into the mouth of the predator
Death isn't that fierce
But the next few moments will be

So I saw the day vanish
And I thought he'd come this way
Many eons ago
I predicted the passing
Of yet another moment of solitude
And into the pit of Hell
Goes a few more
Unsure of God's mercy
Unsure of man's clay

Stars swirl
I see them move closer to each other
And further
And they shift what they owe to each other
In the midnight breeze, where I lost my own self
I lost him, deep within my self
Never to be found except when I try once more
to see in the dark of closed eyelids
With only the withering torch
of memories of lost years
And horrors
And more


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Hostile humankind
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Re: The Official Post Your Own Poetry Thread. [Re: DividedQuantum]
    #23663420 - 09/20/16 10:07 PM (7 years, 4 months ago)

Wow dude, very good!


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Re: The Official Post Your Own Poetry Thread. [Re: akira_akuma]
    #23768689 - 10/25/16 12:00 AM (7 years, 3 months ago)

:sun:


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Re: The Official Post Your Own Poetry Thread. [Re: pineninja] * 3
    #23827758 - 11/13/16 01:27 AM (7 years, 2 months ago)

Signify the ruins in your eyes
Take your November rain with you
Everything but the glorious sun dies
The newborn beetle learns to chew

Storm through the unlit mind
Enlighten me with your story of shadows
The day breathes solid, the day breathes kind
I stay by the campfire in the meadows

Knife front into the unsuspected aggressor
The demon keep slips into the mountain edge
People by the hour seem lesser
The stars speak something only an ally would pledge


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Hostile humankind
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Re: The Official Post Your Own Poetry Thread. [Re: beforethedawn] * 2
    #23827766 - 11/13/16 01:36 AM (7 years, 2 months ago)

Torn into the wreck of a thousand year solitude, the armament of a stolen life. I speak in the lost quarters of the night which bleach into morning, the daylight reserved for the eyes anew. Hydrogen and oxygen pour Heaven to Earth without a soul losing its way. At the end of the tunnel is not light but a sign warning one to go back - where one started one already felt a need to return. In the soothing darkness of corrupt mindedness I went into sunburnt black eerieness that spoke of starry skies and strange abductions. I toured the fathomlessness.


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Re: The Official Post Your Own Poetry Thread. [Re: ModestMouse] * 2
    #23847177 - 11/18/16 11:18 PM (7 years, 2 months ago)

Trying to see the blinding takes its toll on the mind's retina. Why not breathe a sigh, take the girl out to dinner. Too many complications in a simple life. Might see if stealing cheese is a crime against God. Umbrellas without names, conflicts without purpose.

In a state of maximum divinity, the muesli skies stretch further than the horizon. The torch bears the flames notorious for third degree burns, so I blow it out. Why speak something into a valley that your self does not want to hear. My lips sear.

Try the bar menu, it's written in Haiku. I don't think you can eat what the waitress brings, though her eyes are from the future. Into the unspoken territory of the next word of the sentence, only orators may pass, for this is no game, this is your livelihood. Speak clearly if they see you. Speak clearly if they see you.


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