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Re: The Official Post Your Own Poetry Thread. [Re: aghorrorag] * 1
    #23918380 - 12/12/16 01:03 AM (7 years, 1 month ago)

I have been compiling all my poems from the last year and posting them on a blog the last couple days if anyone is interested in checking some of it out. http://dreamscapedomain.blogspot.ca/

Cheers, i look forward to reading others poetry for the time being. :mushroom2:


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Re: The Official Post Your Own Poetry Thread. [Re: akira_akuma] * 3
    #23919640 - 12/12/16 01:35 PM (7 years, 1 month ago)

The dichotomy of nature
The duality of time
We are frozen in the present
Unperturbed by paradigms
We are the nexus of disorder
With complex, dynamic minds
Opposite, attractive forces
We are the neutrons in nuclei
We are the equinox, the solstice
We are everything in between
We are all the colors in the spectrum
We are the shadows that go unseen
We are an infinite regression
We are as finite as a dream
We are a million shades of gray
We are the singularity
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Re: The Official Post Your Own Poetry Thread. [Re: ModestMouse]
    #23925741 - 12/14/16 11:58 AM (7 years, 1 month ago)

I am really loving reading everyone's poetry. Cheers!! :mushroom2:


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Re: The Official Post Your Own Poetry Thread. [Re: Reprobate420] * 2
    #23925743 - 12/14/16 11:58 AM (7 years, 1 month ago)

As the breeze blows through the trees
Mother Gaia, unleashed her sneeze
And as it crosses the sea
With such ease
It finds its way towards me...
I cling to the aroma
Of summer, of autumn, of spring
Like awakening from a coma
As the songbirds poetically sing...
I embrace the scents
Of the moss...
Of the flowers...
Of everything...
My senses, oh so acute
I feel I'm in a dream
In this awe-inspiring view
This landscape, of the serene...
But then the modern age appears
I can hear it in the distance
A cacophony fired upon my ears
It makes me cringe...
It makes me wince...
It's the epitome of all my fears...
The loggers and miners are coming
Gaia's nemesis, has been summoned
And there is no point of running
Soon, this forest...
Will be reduced...
Into nothing...
Forgive me, Mother
For my species' greed
Before we depart...
I'll fill my pockets with seed...
Know that I will hold you
In my heart...
And I will honour you...
With my humble art


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Re: The Official Post Your Own Poetry Thread. [Re: pineninja] * 3
    #23947307 - 12/21/16 08:25 PM (7 years, 1 month ago)

Eternal flame
High beyond the sky, you fly
Igniting the shadows
With illumination that you bestow...
You have earned your slumber tonight
For where would we be,
Devoid of the warmth of thee?
Without photosynthesis,
To forge the air we breathe?
You need no creed, no dogma
Or religious propaganda
To seed the feed we need
To proceed into conscious beings...
Our symbiosis makes us one
You are the brightest of the stars
You are our cosmic candle
You are our life-sustaining Sun

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Re: The Official Post Your Own Poetry Thread. [Re: akira_akuma]
    #23947324 - 12/21/16 08:31 PM (7 years, 1 month ago)

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akira_akuma said:
not only was that awesome, but i totally rapped that shit to some Taeko Ohnuki - 4:00 AM---- the scansion was pitch perfect too.




That's awesome! I am glad that you liked it. Cheers :mushroom2:


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Re: The Official Post Your Own Poetry Thread. [Re: akira_akuma]
    #23947418 - 12/21/16 09:23 PM (7 years, 1 month ago)

Thank you, kind sir... and I agree that it can definitely be improved upon and expanded.... it was written in haste... sometimes i just get the urge to write something for the sake of it lol :mushroom2:


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Re: The Official Post Your Own Poetry Thread. [Re: akira_akuma] * 1
    #23947428 - 12/21/16 09:29 PM (7 years, 1 month ago)

I recently compiled a bit of my poetry and posted it onto a blog if you care to check it out... there are some with similar themes you may like.

https://dreamscapedomain.blogspot.ca/

Take care! :mushroom2:


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Re: The Official Post Your Own Poetry Thread. [Re: akira_akuma]
    #23949725 - 12/22/16 05:36 PM (7 years, 1 month ago)

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that is how i write too, most often. sometimes i'll literally write things down and arrange it later, and mostly it's always from the same stream of thought, generally, other wise i just write it off, and save it for later (the line or whatever).

that works too.
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Thank you, kind sir... and I agree that it can definitely be improved upon and expanded.... it was written in haste... sometimes i just get the urge to write something for the sake of it lol :mushroom2:





i think the best is the other way, but i don't sit down often and write out a poem like a story or anything...mostly if the dedicate some time to it it'll be a generative burst, but depending on that it might just be generally fanned out through a bit for some time, i might come back and tweak it a bit (daammn);--- though the best way is through a long sustained effort of writing a genuine narrative into more extended burst;----- if you wish you can contract the lines into a waveform like through soundwaves man;-- you can breath in with words in your hand and formation occurs, and you can breath out a mountain which you can also, if you can combine all these efforts & accordance's in place, trace an epic poem leading out into of sweet nothingness.

the sloughing effort.




What you say really makes a lot of sense to me! Wise words and I will do well to keep it in mind. I need to experiment and evolve to a higher degree. For years I was just writing song lyrics and writing music for some of them on my guitar. Trying to write poetry is different though. :mushroom2:


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Re: The Official Post Your Own Poetry Thread. [Re: akira_akuma] * 1
    #23950326 - 12/22/16 09:56 PM (7 years, 1 month ago)

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this cicatrix of fear
is my friend, and one and only
charm...
is this lattice of faces
that is my Zen
ofthebend
these walls of noctcaelador umbrage
peregrinate to kill & find suppage

to will the saying to mend
i blade with the grass and becoming
vitiation of time...
is the chances that i'm taking
my brain laying on a coffer shaking
ready to absorb to the end
can't be hardened 'til you turn to lead

canting sad, playing mad
the milling of the corn is getting drab
now the stratagems are flawed outlet media
with an outward goal, there's no foregoing gaol
& now there's good places for the money to go
to feed the poor & pay for homes
socialsociety & crime-dirged streets
professional leaders sucking our teats





That's sick, dude. Very impressive and well written. :mushroom2:


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Re: The Official Post Your Own Poetry Thread. [Re: Cagney] * 2
    #23970181 - 12/31/16 08:47 AM (7 years, 29 days ago)

Adrift in the abyss
A rift dehisced
As my bliss went amiss,
Signed and sealed
With a cosmic kiss...
My spirit set sail into the void
And hitched a ride on a passing asteroid...
To find a new home
In the darkness that I roam
With nary a photon
Or inter-stellar liaison
To show me the way,
To glow again today...
Destination unknown
A vacation,
Into the twilight zone
I wait for the day
To sate in my new abode :mushroom2:


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Re: The Official Post Your Own Poetry Thread. [Re: pineninja] * 2
    #23985088 - 01/05/17 08:30 PM (7 years, 23 days ago)

It's a battle of the spirit
A war within the mind
Every day that passes
I die a bit more inside
The sorrow is ubiquitous
As if hope is now iniquitous
And try as i might
I'll never win the fight...
My biggest mistake
Was just being myself
Apparently only fakes
Can progress, in this hell
Conformity is the new harmony
Those inside the box sing
Critical thinking and empathy
Has made me lose everything...
Soul doubt hit me hard
Sold out like a rock star
I wish I could be dumb
Maybe then I could be numb
Ignorance is bliss
Love is an abyss
I should probably force myself
To stop giving a shit
Maybe then
I will get ahead
And transcend
This omnipresent dread...
It was fun while it lasted
But now I'm flabbergasted
Perhaps I should do a 180
Maybe then I will find peace
Thoughts in my head, so weighty
I just want them to cease
It hurts, and it sucks
But why should I give a fuck?
Nobody else does
And they all seem so happy
Can somebody please
Give me a frontal lobotomy
So I can be happy too...

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Re: The Official Post Your Own Poetry Thread. [Re: ModestMouse]
    #23989260 - 01/07/17 11:27 AM (7 years, 22 days ago)

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For Emily

You paint like the wind blows
With timeless skill and passion
I met you through the paintings hung
Such expertise in fashion

With time I put your face to name
Met at last the famous artist
When such a lovely time you bring
To say goodbye is hardest

But time will find our reunite
Im sure ill see you often
Take good care, and craft some more!
Walls plead your brushes soften

(My girlfriends sister wanted a poem, so I wrote her this. Shes very sweet and cute, she loved it. Shes got an innocent crush on me :sun:)




That's beautiful, dude. :mushroom2:


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Re: The Official Post Your Own Poetry Thread. [Re: Reprobate420] * 3
    #23989262 - 01/07/17 11:27 AM (7 years, 22 days ago)

Oh, thou great placebo
Remedy of broken hearts
Extract of the abstract
Catalyst of endearing art...
A romantic notion
A phantom emotion
That cannot be weighed,
Conveyed, nor surveyed...
Indeed...
Can it even be real?
"Of course it is"
Many say, with such zeal...
But I'm a man of science
Evidence, is my only reliance...
And this word
Has only brought pain
It's so absurd
And utterly insane...
So many use it
So many abuse it
So many confuse it
So many refuse it...
Its definitions are so variable
No other word is comparable...
Some mean it
Some need it
Some fiend it
Some dream it...
But honestly
What the fuck...
Is this thing...
They call
"Love"


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Re: The Official Post Your Own Poetry Thread. [Re: pineninja] * 2
    #23996463 - 01/09/17 08:14 PM (7 years, 19 days ago)

She lit the sky on fire
Radiating her desire
Burning my eyes,
Igniting my soul
A friendly reminder
I do admire...

Twinkle twinkle little star
I know you are
A pulsar
And I'll be happy
When I'm dead
But you're already
Light-years ahead
of me...

She set the sky ablaze
With electromagnetic waves
And dances amongst the cosmic rays
Waiting for the day
When I decay
And we meet again
To dance
In the celestial ballet

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Re: The Official Post Your Own Poetry Thread. [Re: DividedQuantum] * 1
    #24012950 - 01/15/17 07:33 PM (7 years, 13 days ago)

Her spirit shines...
In a trance, I'm hypnotized
Trying to read the signs,
The constellations
That sparkle within her eyes
Subtle and sublime,
My Earthly worries subside
And fade away
As night turns to day
Her spirit shines
Brighter than a billion suns
Falling from the sky,
As the photons ride
Along my war-torn spine
Her spirit shines
As the stars align
A spectral beauty
I'm unable to define

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Re: The Official Post Your Own Poetry Thread. [Re: DividedQuantum] * 2
    #24021191 - 01/18/17 07:52 PM (7 years, 10 days ago)

A philosophy based on fear
A hypocrisy laced with despair
A doctrine of the insane
That's mocking logic's name
Controlling your thoughts,
Folding them in knots
Distorting your reality
Thwarting your morality
An addiction of pure fiction,
A mission of sure infliction
A restriction of all decision,
An affliction we call religion

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Re: The Official Post Your Own Poetry Thread. [Re: Kurt] * 4
    #24027444 - 01/21/17 06:55 AM (7 years, 8 days ago)


Singularity, the seed of creation
Followed by a caustic inflation
What a sensation,
A universal manifestation...
Had begun...
Born as a pure energetic state
Things cooled down
And continued to inflate...
Quarks combined and further refined,
Sub-atomic particles
Have now been defined...
No need for intelligent design,
Merely the cry of Nature's hot mind
Soon after, the first atoms spawned,
Germinations in the great cosmic pond...
The forces divided
As inflation subsided
Hydrogen has now glided
Where the void had resided...
It was beautiful...

Electro-static charges made clumps,
That's when gravity said "That's enough,
I'll take it from here, my dear...
You've been ever so gracious..."
Then things got more spacious
And the clumps continued to grow

Magnetic fields,
Made hydrogen glow...
Matter and energy
Now overflowed...
The first quasars began to show...
So awe-inspiring...
Amidst the galactic storm
The first stars were being born...
Stellar fusion makes them roar
As photons soar from the core...
Soon, new elements shall form...
They burn with such brilliant light
Critical mass, is coming in sight...
And like a candle in the night
They ignite... ever so bright...
It's supernova time!
Again and again...
Stars are born and die,
Seeding the sky
As new elements fly
In omni-directional lines...
The ingredients are all there
We are finally here
The final epoch, draws near...
Floating on the galactic shore,
A spiral arm beyond the core...
Suspended...
In time and space...
Gaia, Now shows her face
Orbiting a yellow sun...
Eons pass as she slowly evolves,
Volcanically active, as she revolves...
More eons pass, as the fire dissolves..
Finally...
Land and see...
And atmosphere...
For us to breathe...
Abiogenic processes take hold,
Earth, is now billions of years old...
Self-replicating cells
Mutate and grow
In the organic well...
It's almost our turn...
Variables and distinctions,
So many mass extinctions...
All played a part,
In Nature's magic art,
And purely by chance
And atomic romance...
So chaotically derived...
Humans...
Had finally arrived.

- I J :mushroom2:


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Re: The Official Post Your Own Poetry Thread. [Re: pineninja] * 1
    #24032677 - 01/23/17 07:59 AM (7 years, 6 days ago)

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Hey Reprobate keep them coming they just keep getting better and better.
That last ones epic.:hahyeahwoo:




Wow, thanks.... that means a lot to me.... I'll certainly keep 'em coming to the best of my abilities. I always enjoy reading your work also. Cheers. :mushroom2:


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Re: The Official Post Your Own Poetry Thread. [Re: Reprobate420] * 1
    #24032828 - 01/23/17 09:39 AM (7 years, 6 days ago)

The planet we inhabit
Is an oblate sphere,
Nitrogen and Oxygen
Color the air,
The atmosphere is near
But just out of reach,
We're forbidden by the gravity
That grabs us by our feet
The stars gaze upon us
With both pity and glee
The world keeps on spinning
Being destroyed by monkeys
In the void it shines bright
A beautifully crafted blue gem
White clouds shroud the darkness,
The despair that lives within


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