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milkman4d4
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Re: The Official Post Your Own Poetry Thread. [Re: oversyn]
#12617563 - 05/23/10 11:52 PM (13 years, 8 months ago) |
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1 gram, 2 gram, 3 point 5. makes me a man...with an eagles eyes. one more cap gives me eagles wings. add an eighth to that and my ego dies.
that's a QUARTER down now he's both sides of the coin. money talks, and Geo(George wash,)speaks no lies. holding up the Left wing for my equal rights. and to be precise..just legalize..
1 gram, 2 gram, get with the program. how you gunna throw me in prison because I grow plants? I'm a grown man! Fuck a Big Brother! I can cross the street on my own,,I don't need to hold hands!
a love life is novelty and I don't need the romance, bust a move and a nut..fuck a slow dance! OK, I got a broke heart...it ain't so bad, I got a Case of the BLUES...Ill eat a whole bag!!!
Edited by milkman4d4 (05/29/10 02:26 PM)
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Re: The Official Post Your Own Poetry Thread. [Re: DigDagDeg] 1
#12650982 - 05/29/10 02:29 PM (13 years, 7 months ago) |
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thank you!!! its more of a rap than a poem...it picks up and slows down at parts..but I agree it could flow a bit smoother
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milkman4d4
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nice
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Re: The Official Post Your Own Poetry Thread. [Re: milkman4d4]
#12702115 - 06/07/10 09:09 AM (13 years, 7 months ago) |
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http://www.soundclick.com/bands/default.cfm?bandID=986732heres a song/rap i just wrote the other day... and a link to the beat...i havnt recorded it yet the beat is labled as NEVER TOO LATE...enjoy  
I sit back and watch my life spiral into control, Flick my Bic and light the last inch of my rope. BOOM!.. But before I vanish into smoke, I’ma leave my people with this last little note, Here ya jackasses, have 20 dollars, Go on and hit the town, crash into some towers. That’s a gas! Why you actin’ sour? I sent my condolences through cannabis flowers. I shipped you some chocolates with hugs and kisses, A dick for your ass and a tongue for the misses, Fuck! What else ya want from the kid? Shit. Stop droppin’ acid and become religious? Hmmm…now what the fuck am I missin’ Rub your feet, cook, and scrub your dishes? Ain’t them the jobs for the cunts and bitches? Can’t you see my love comes unconditioned?
Just call me DAD, I’m the motherfuckin man, Put you in a head lock till you scream “uncle Sam, Let me out of this trunk, and untie my hands, So I can jack-off once more before we land”, yeeeah! Cause the bird don’t crash! You silly motherfucker it just burns to ash, And when I’m on my very last labyrinth lap Ill be sure to let you know before I zap my ass yeeeah ! With a bolt of kundulini, He’s electro-cute, but had a few too many, How’s about forever and a new beginning? Yup! Thumbs up dudes to the mushroom bingeing Still hearing , Who the fuck is he kidding? Umm… Just about everyone in this building, You dumb motherfucker, uh. Weren’t you listening, Or were you just too busy to spread the love with me?
Alright I’m back to Reiterate for the illiterate Stupid motherfuckers that I cant even begin to hate, Why?...because my love is what? Unconditional you motherfuckers and sluts! So what’s with the name callin’? Ill explain it all, But first, just let me finish this bowl, There. ya see? Now that didn’t take long, Cause the one hitter quitter’s the shit this kids on. Now back to motherfuckin subject of the song Our planet…the one that we’ve been fuckin’ so long God damned it, now its goin to hell and beyond, And its time to go green or motherfucker get gone! The love was once lost, but I’ve found myself, And I’ve cum back strong, providing mom with help, So you can either lend a hand or just kill yourselves, The love is unconditional…2012.
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