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Unfolding Nature Shop: Unfolding Nature: Being in the Implicate Order

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Invisibleeckhem


Registered: 02/02/10
Posts: 677
Re: The Official Post Your Own Poetry Thread. [Re: Doe Eyed]
    #12319421 - 04/02/10 06:01 PM (13 years, 9 months ago)

wrote this just now... its an idea ive kinda had for a while now
about a church whose congregation has their faith shattered (by an abusing pastor) and is left with nothing to live for (without a god)
and how we need to live life without the use of chaining ourselves down
making ourselves feel comfortable with shaky ideas
just because we fear the universe being greater than ourselves; humanity

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The Pulpit

Amidst the congregation
a murmur reached
all the farther
each passing minute
their Father neglected
the pulpit

Questions arose
answered with accusations
of blasphemy
as their faith
stood shaking behind
the pulpit

He was drunk
as the child cried
and the people rose
but no one to
the pulpit

A shattered faith
leaves nothing left;
to live for
nothing would
be a tragedy
if your only answer
need be represented at
a pulpit


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Invisibleeckhem

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Posts: 677
Re: The Official Post Your Own Poetry Thread. [Re: Crumpet]
    #14422393 - 05/08/11 10:51 PM (12 years, 8 months ago)

Quote:

Crumpet said:
pedal in the mud
fed up on the wonder drug
under us a bust asunder
fun to lust the blunderbuss
hush hush just as stunned as winter
winds that rush us up n whisper
whims n whisk a shorter hyme
it's shore to him
they raughted this - the

prolix fits like logorrhea
locution angles anglists ill
assume the lacuna rune prose that rose pose
epitomize erudites - repose till

riposte shots at bigot boss's
deadlock losses to roost on rosters
bed rocks bottom drop off the dodgers
artful posthumous watch robbers


Yeeaaaah  :awesomenod:




very nice, the images are vague and insane or im just a bad reader...

in any case i truly enjoyed this


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Invisibleeckhem

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Re: The Official Post Your Own Poetry Thread. [Re: draGONMAN90000]
    #14422504 - 05/08/11 11:15 PM (12 years, 8 months ago)

Quote:

draGONMAN90000 said:
Sometimes the Colors are Similar

Escape, odorless cloud puff, wrapped in a den of variant pink, black, dead off shape bean dishes, wanting to be like kidneys. A moment too soon, finds a mind wondering why the delay happened to be wrapped present fletcher.
Bag tackle each master switch, scrimmaging constant constants in such equation of periodical manifestations. A grin tooth snagged on a fresh made blanket, silky sides between fingers, threads falling apart, but done so without regards.
Then came us.




interesting.... i cnat help but get the visual for a sad supermarket as you are getting your items bagged


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Invisibleeckhem

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Re: The Official Post Your Own Poetry Thread. [Re: cateyes]
    #15209575 - 10/11/11 12:16 PM (12 years, 3 months ago)

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cateyes said:
i'm in the process of trying to understand consciousness as the foundation of our human experience and the reality that is perceived... there is no ghost in the atom... more so, the atom is a creation of our mind... consciousness creates reality... i want to test the limits of perception, to move beyond the constructs that restrict existential possibilities... i've learned it is indeed the logic that can trip us over, the pervasive thoughts that create our prison... real truth lies in the depths of the heart... it is time to abandon this reality that has obscured what is real and what is not... I am not sure about the future of this world, but I trust that the world that I see is changing shape and that a new personal capacity for love, joy and truth will soon be revealed... i guess i am trying to transcend my outdated mind state, trying to overthrow all those rules and regulations that society has placed on me, trying to see the light amongst the shadows...





I appreciate this, and I relate to it.  Profound meaning without clumsy metaphors to misinterpret.  I like it :thumbup:


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Invisibleeckhem

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Re: The Official Post Your Own Poetry Thread. [Re: HunterChez]
    #15527874 - 12/16/11 07:57 PM (12 years, 1 month ago)

Do I give up?
Or loose control?
I've stopped waiting.
Now I just wait.


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