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cjesseg



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Re: The Official Post Your Own Poetry Thread. [Re: HappyTrippin]
#12161143 - 03/07/10 08:31 PM (13 years, 10 months ago) |
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It's nowhere as cool as ya'lls are, but I suppose it's somewhat decent. I was inspired by a dream I had that is similar to this, but I changed it some. You may criticise.
Blood spews from this creatures slit throat, Releasing the putrid stench of decayed flesh. Tangled in rotating razor wire that tears through its mutilated body. It attempts to speak, but only murmurs fall from its collapsed jaws. Insects crawl under its bruising skin, falling from open sores. I can barely hear it with sound of scrapping metal, screeching, And the creature gurgleing on its own blood. The ground forms a large crack And naked, helpless beings are bestowed before this grotesque, blight creature Moaning, & pleading. The creature then quickly throws upon them its rusted razor wire Around their throat, & limbs, Slowly compressing Shredding the flesh & dismembering their limbs. Blood, & flesh are thrown And the mutilated corpses fall to Earth Quickly decaying, leaving only the stench of death And a large red stain.
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cjesseg



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Re: The Official Post Your Own Poetry Thread. [Re: Simms]
#12282406 - 03/27/10 12:02 PM (13 years, 10 months ago) |
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I wrote this listening to Eyes in the Dark by Nox Arcana
Take this gift, & forever be a drift Upon the clouds, in the night-time sky. Take this now, & forever vow, To be my mistressess. Here, drink this. You'll know love, like you've never before! Refuse, & you'll be never-more! Drink, you'll be The Eyes in the Dark.
Sucks, but whatever.
Here's another one listening to Night Wraiths by Nox Arcana.
Come to me, my pretty flower. Let us be one, in our final hour. Sweet as honey, beautiful as the sky. We can't help but wonder "why?" We lived this far, & now we must die? Hand-in-hand we walk our way Down the path of the Night Wraiths.
Nox Arcana is "dark-gothic-chamber" music, I guess you can say. They're a bit repetitive, but they're still cool. There's another band just like them, Just maybe a bit more advanced sounding. Midnight Syndicate. Search 'em on Youtube if you want.
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Re: The Official Post Your Own Poetry Thread. [Re: sirbojangles]
#12301338 - 03/30/10 06:55 PM (13 years, 9 months ago) |
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Walking through the Forest of Fears. Where no one can hear you yell. This place will brings you tears. And to the gates of Hell. Followed by demons, Haunted by ghouls. Not one brave soul would enter, Only fools. You'd find instruments of torture, Intsruments of pain. Lost souls who thought it a game, Sought it for fame. They'll take you, & break you. Only to make you fall to your knees. They'll jab you, & stab you, & do as they please. Laughing, & stealing, They're there for killing. If you enter, tlightly tread. If you're caught, You're most likely dead.
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