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Re: The Official Post Your Own Poetry Thread. [Re: paradox_] * 4
    #12051215 - 02/17/10 11:19 PM (13 years, 11 months ago)

Something More


Between each breath I think of you
And write another line or two
Finding words is hardly a chore
Wishing we were something more

Between each toke I think of you
Wondering how we could be less than two
From trembling lips fire burns the ground
And something more must be found

Between each drink I think of you
The kind of pain you put me through
The empty glass breaks on the floor
So I must reach for something more

Between each cut I think of you
The stupid shit you put me through
A blood-wet blade slips to the floor
And I need the help of something more

Between each chamber I think of you
With your Goddamn games I'm finally through
This one man roulette ends on the floor
Not now, not ever, to be something more


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Re: The Official Post Your Own Poetry Thread. [Re: Uwase] * 3
    #12051224 - 02/17/10 11:21 PM (13 years, 11 months ago)

Stronger

These days are long
But these nights are longer
I grow wearier as each passes
But they all say I will be stronger

They think that this is normal
The average case of hopeless heartbreak
But they must not understand
The toll it can take

For if they did
Their attempts at comfort would cease
They would know such words give no aid
And only make pain increase

I do not need to be reminded
Of the life and love and loss
Like ones who would say “It will get better”
As Jesus hung limply on the Cross

So do not try to console me
With vain notions of ease
The milk and honey of the world
Cannot rival the black seas

In the raging pits of Hell
There can be no redemption
No light can pierce through
Once in the mind’s benthic region

When love’s heat has risen
All you can do is crawl
When you reach the edge of love’s world
All you can do is fall

At the end of love’s road
You can go forward no longer
When love’s muscles are torn
There is no being stronger


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Re: The Official Post Your Own Poetry Thread. [Re: aghorrorag] * 1
    #12051284 - 02/17/10 11:32 PM (13 years, 11 months ago)

Yea... I try not to re-use words too much, but "two" seemed to stick out to me.. thought to be honest, I find the first stanza to be pretty "weak"... But I wasn't in a great state of mind when writing it, and I try to conserve "mental state" in things I write... So if I make an error or a certain play/emphasis on words, I keep it in there afterwords :/

Thanks for the support though :laugh:


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Re: The Official Post Your Own Poetry Thread. [Re: Mchaggis] * 1
    #12051369 - 02/17/10 11:49 PM (13 years, 11 months ago)

Why I Cry

I cry because of the days we have
And the nights that are sure to follow
The way we always end up here
Every day and every tomorrow

I cry because we lie so still
Your head upon my chest
The way you look as your lips come closer
And we breathe each other’s breath

I cry because of the love we make
All the nights we touch the sky
The way the hours unnoticeably pass by
When on the wings of love we fly

I cry because of the life we share
The way this one has been made from two
I cry because I love you
And because you love me too

---Then it switches up, past-tense changing the whole poem---

I cry because of the days we had
And the nights that were sure to follow
The way we always ended up here
Every day and every tomorrow

I cry because we lied so still
Your head upon my chest
The way you looked as your lips came closer
And we breathed each other’s breath

I cry because of the love we made
All the nights we touched the sky
The way the hours unnoticeably passed by
When on the wings of love we did fly

I cry because of the life we shared
The way that one had been made from two
I cry because I loved you
And because you loved me too


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