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Dreaming, poem by housecat
    #11293461 - 10/21/09 06:47 PM (8 years, 8 months ago)

I lay here while the still night creeps
taunted by the thought of sleep
haunted by my thoughts, quite deep

Lucid concepts fill my dreams
My mothers face happily beams
Logical nonsense, a mad man teems

Boundless, moonlit purple skies
cast shadows on my weary eyes
soon shattered by morning sunrise

My alarm clock accompanies
a lone roosters' cries

I couldn't get to sleep last night, and so I sat there just thinking for a good hour, and thought of this poem. I am no poet, mind you.


My beautiful hookah

"in the 60's people took acid to make the world seem weird. Now the world is weird, and people take prozac to make it seem normal."

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Re: Dreaming, poem by housecat [Re: housecat]
    #11293683 - 10/21/09 07:20 PM (8 years, 8 months ago)

While I usually dislike the limerick-like line-by-line rhyme, you did well with this one.

Me likes.

The Mad Shroomer said:
People are always promising the apocalypse. They never deliver. :frown:

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