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Hey...I wrote this a while ago, but I wanted to get some input on it. I'm not sure if I should add onto it somewhere in the middle, or whether I should just dispose of it, because I'm not to thrilled with it. It doesn't flow well, etc. Any help would be greatly appreciated...
A Seldom Caress
Breathing into heaven. Wandering into perfection. Never turn around, linger in the bliss. Flourish inside our kiss. A seldom caress of flawless beauty. A sun-lit dove casts a shadow of two becoming one. Free of obligation. White silk. Multiple engraved texts melt onto tablets of ivory, Shimmering. Triple melodies embrace the morning dew, alive and sparkling. Arise.
I can somehow tell by this poem that you are female.
-------------------- What if everything around you
Isn't quite as it seems?
What if all the world you think you know,
Is an elaborate dream?
And if you look at your reflection,
Is it all you want it to be?
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