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My most recent poems...please do critique..
    #6565640 - 02/14/07 03:51 AM (17 years, 1 month ago)

POETRY
Evan Pavelko



Memorandum

Magnificent incoherence,
Cold heart entranced;
Longing lifelessly, evermore.
Indifferent nostalgia.
Eternal envious delusions,
Unrelenting, evermore.
But oh! how incredible
It would be to fly free
Weaving, weeping
Amidst the stars!
This is a but a dream,
A tired thought, nothing more.


To The One Whom I am So In Love

This road so lonely, so vague,
So intimate, so broken,
And vast with emptiness;
Such beauty in despair.

I am out of time, out of breath.
This road has weakened our tie,
And I have traveled too far
To mend our broken hearts.

It didn't have to end this way.
But I was young and foolish,
While you were young and wise.
I set you up to erase me from your life.

And while you slipped into art
and such beautiful words,
I slipped into the drink
and stumbled many a night home.

Although the liquor kept me warm,
the feeling was only temporary.
How foolish I must have been
For your love could keep me warm a lifetime.

This sorrow-filled road is void of you
And such beauty you possess, cannot be seen.
But you made the right decision,
The decision to leave.

So alone, I walk this bitter path
And daze off to the first star I see.
I close my eyes and make a wish
And dream of us together again.

But that wish will never come
I have killed all hope of us being one.
This path will not lead back
To the one whom I am so in love.


Dreams

You hold more beauty
Than a wild field of dahlias
Illuminated with moonlight
Under a starlit sky.

One look into your eyes
And my heart goes wild.
For I have never seen such beauty
Like that which you possess.
And I never will, I must confess.

I have found something such
That perfection lies therein.
And to cupid I beg,
His arrows didn't miss mark.
For this wound he has given
Has healed my heart.

This is but the begining
of a love story with no end
And to you, my love,
I call upon to help me write
And lay under the stars
In endless night.
And lay under the stars
In sweet delight.


Nothing

I've dazed off many a night
Into the void of my thoughts
Pondering the notion of
"What is nothing".
Is it what the blind perceive?
Is it an eternal black,
Or an absence of light?
None can answer this question
For they are all something.
We as a whole
Cannot begin to comprehend
The vastness of nothing;
Nothing at all.

Maybe it is the moment after
This world comes to an end.
When the swirling cosmos
Eventually destroy us.
Maybe then will the notion of nothing
Make all but perfect sense.
But we will not be here to understand.

Yet we pretend we know,
we pretend to believe this is forever.
All of this will one day end,
And everything we have created,
Everything we have destroyed,
Everything we have loved, hated,
Killed, feared, envied,
Worshiped, understood,
Felt, tasted, everything
And anything we have perceived,
All of our accomplishments,
All of our failures,
Will all be meaningless;
Everything will then be Nothing.
Nothing at all.


It Would Kill Me

Sometimes I wish
I would have never met you.
Because the thought of you
Leaving would just kill me.
Sometimes I wish
I would have never kissed,
Kissed your tender lips.
Because the possibilty
Of never kissing them again
Would just kill me.
Sometimes I wish
I never held your hand.
Because the thought
Of never holding it again
Would just kill me.
Sometimes I wish
I would have never seen,
Seen the sunrise in your eyes,
Because the thought
Of never seeing it again
Would just kill me.
Sometimes I wish
I would have never fallen,
Fallen in love,
Fallen in love with you.
Because the thought of you
Loving someone else
Would just kill me.


Listen To The Air

I

Forget the forgetful
And lay your head in symphony!
Dance to the midnight star
Flaring wildly in the heavens above.
Say a prayer for the endless night,
And in solitude, vowel to protect
The venomous snake.

What wrath to come
With words not said
So entails endless wind;
The cactus speaks, listen.

II

Walk a mile in the sun,
And a new path will emerge.
Follow the wolfs trail
In moonlight flooded emptiness,
Or battle with the toad
And call upon the eagle
To carry you aloft!

What wrath to come
My blood is shed
So entails endless wind;
The cactus demands, obey!

III

In amazement stare!
How stead the hare!
Who travels amongst the trail!
Where colors emerge
And patterns divulge!
Time stands frozen, so frail!

The sullen desert springs to life!
As you die, as you die, as you die!
The sullen desert springs to life!
As you cry, as you cry, as you cry!
The sullen desert springs to life!
As you beg, as you beg, as you beg!
The sullen desert dies tonight!
No wisdom gained, out of sight.

What wrath has come
The ego has died
And halts the endless wind;
The cactus spoke,
But I was too afraid
To Listen.

IV

So trapped behind eyes
Life hangs in an instant
To vanish in an instant
Like the fading sunset
So far so distant.
We've come so far
And traveled so wide,
It's hard to believe
Tonight, we're out of time.
Listen To The Air.


Oh! Sweet Beloved Distain!


Dance with the stars!
Carry me to thee!
Forget about everything!
Dry the lachrymal stream!
Live and die in tragedy!
Such beauty therein!
Tired thoughts awake!
Ineffable words speak!
Oh! sweet beloved distain!


Experience

What is this that I am feeling?
Everything is so confusing right now.
Nothing Seems right, though
Body feels warm, I feel almost sick.
Everything seems normal
But nothing is right?
Depth manipulated;
Something tells me I cannot walk
A straight line now.
This feeling indescribable
I lay and watch the beautiful terror unfold.


Chained

No longer will there be broken hearts
Only beautiful skies and butterflies.

No longer will there be broken hearts
Only beautiful skies and butterflies.

No longer will there be broken hearts
Only beautiful skies and butterflies.

No longer will there be broken hearts
Only beautiful skies and butterflies.

No longer will there be broken hearts
Only beautiful skies and butterflies.

Keep telling yourself that.
Everyone can dream...


The Light

Some are born to praise the light,
Some are born to question the light.

Some are born to worship the light,
Some are born to scorn the light.

Some are born to see the light,
While others are born to feel the light.
But why, I ask you, was I cursed
To be born, absent light?

To you my lord, I'm layed at your feet.
Why have you put me through
Such misery!
Why have you taken away
That which I loved with all my heart!
Why have you taken away
My father, I barely got to know!

To you my lord, why must I cry?
Why have you done this to me!
Why have you tempted me
To the brink of disbelief!
Why have you abanoned me,
Leaving no relief!
The rest of my days
I will drop to my knees
And curse your name
For that which you have taken
From me!

Is this a test? It must be.
But I'm failing lord,
I cannot go on!
Please stop this misery!
Why are you doing this to me!
I have the kindest and
Utmost sincerest heart of any man!
Why must you make me suffer!

To you my lord, why did I have
To go through so much trouble
To find you, while you speak
To lesser men every night!
I promise, I'll curse your name
Every night!
Until you fix these wounds,
And they are out of sight!
Because to tell you the truth,
I care not for your light...


Land Of Dying Dreams

Slow creeps a sickly fog
In this land of dying dreams.
And under a thousand dying stars
The wind does sing:

How near, how far
In this life
So lost we are.
Life near, Life far
Life ends faster
Than a shooting star.

In a dying landscape
In a dying Dream
Such sadness
Does the wind sing:

How near, how far
Ment to suffer
Crossed by the stars.
Death near, Death far
No longer fear the end
But beg from afar.

In a fading memory
In a fading dream
Such sadness
Does the wind bring:

How near, how far
Like some distant moon
Drifting we are.
Death near, Life far
It matters not in the end
Who or what we were.

Like a dying landscape
In some dying dream
The sea eventually
Erodes the strongest of stone
And it matters not in the end
Who or what we were.

Like a fading memory
In a fading dream
The tide will come
To swallow the land whole.
And it matters not in the end
Who or what we were.

When the swirling cosmos
Come crashing through the heavens
And all the dreams which we hold dearest
Come to an end like a sun on its death bed,
With our hands bound and locked,
Our fates sealed with a kiss
We will be assured with unequivocal surity
That together we can smile and laugh
And see all of the beauty and incoherence,
In this chaotic imperfection unfold;
Because in the end it matters not
Who or what we were, in this world so cold.


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Re: My most recent poems...please do critique.. [Re: dmtryptamine]
    #6567607 - 02/14/07 04:30 PM (17 years, 1 month ago)

hey man these are really good. i really like your poem 'Nothing'.

you also live in a very nice city. Ever go to Nick's Imports on east carson?

But hey man these are nice. How long did it take you to do each one?


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