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CptnGarden
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a few freestyles i wrote down
#6166135 - 10/13/06 02:51 PM (17 years, 5 months ago) |
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these are just some random freestyles i recorded and wrote down. i liked the sound to them so i thought i would post them.
this one i wrote while i was stoned in fiji
this lyrical entity enters so gracefuly your minds mainframe is polysyllabic memory
questioning decency with insubordinate authority a noisome nominee that leaves everyone vomiting
the presidents over-done his over-draft over-run we need a new pres and one which wont over-gun
emasculate government and end all sufferin' cast away the prejudice necessitate your lovin' friends
shelf your inhibition dont shell the inner vision learn by your decision address the situation
this one i wrote about 3 months ago, while baked out of my mind of course
slabs of brainwashed silicone-prone marketeers runnin' scams sellin' all the nicotine and beers while the media runs hypes of psychedelic pioneers the talk that breaks the beauty in this world of flowin' tears
the truth meets the lie and both greet the wisdom with open arms to unite and break the system of interchangeable futures with the snap of a wrist succumb to the molecule, give hail to the scientist
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nakors_junk_bag
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Re: a few freestyles i wrote down [Re: CptnGarden]
#6166327 - 10/13/06 03:58 PM (17 years, 5 months ago) |
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here check this one
It was late in the year of eighty eight, my mom dukes walked in the room, I was bout to be berated, it had to be abated, thought processes stimulated. I was barely nine it musta been fate. Note the impending doom It was a day that stipulated, growing up is underated, thought processed stuimluated.
Mom sit down, I aint a kid no more, I been smoking since 84, thought that you should know I was the one who stole your sack a dro. Its evoltuionary your son is gonna get hairy, and he ma yeventually wanna mary, So if you don't mind when you leave make sure to close the door.
She said, "you all grown up", then you'd best to gettin makin sup, I'ma going out, get the ladders so you can grab a cup. I said oik ho, let me show what is up.
hahah, listening to opp, and this came to my mind. Its lame I know.
-------------------- Asshole
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bazzah
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relaying innocent notes that spoke menacing sayings paying fraudulent votes to turncoats who regulate cravings raving stipulations across moats their boats and bridges an inflagration claiming a failing nation of livid souls sold to this inebriation already hanging displaying notes red with irritation from the soap rope tight around temptation breathing pleading but libation is not for half billy goats beneath coats of sheepskin swelling foretelling a rebellion within a folktales choke our children’s life renderings like tobacco rolled in an oil painting.
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AaronEvil
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Re: a few freestyles i wrote down [Re: CptnGarden]
#6174921 - 10/16/06 12:13 PM (17 years, 5 months ago) |
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Isnt the idea of freestyling coming up with material on the spot? Shouldnt it be different every time? By writing it down you have turned it into an actual "rap."
-------------------- There is not a lot of difference between a fox hole and a grave; but knowing that you dug your ditch and climbed in anyway.
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Re: a few freestyles i wrote down [Re: CptnGarden]
#6175901 - 10/16/06 05:16 PM (17 years, 5 months ago) |
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Ya its not a freestyle if you write it......
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bazzah
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Re: a few freestyles i wrote down [Re: TMshroom]
#6176064 - 10/16/06 05:58 PM (17 years, 5 months ago) |
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ah don't be so technical and just throw some rhymes down! Always need to contribute something of substance before you nit pick. Maybe check out his rhyme and throw in some suggestions then categorize it later?
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AaronEvil
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Re: a few freestyles i wrote down [Re: bazzah]
#6176137 - 10/16/06 06:32 PM (17 years, 5 months ago) |
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I wasnt saying its bad, I am just saying it isnt a freestyle. Personally, I dont like things like this with every other line having the same end vowel sound. But, some things just arent for me.
-------------------- There is not a lot of difference between a fox hole and a grave; but knowing that you dug your ditch and climbed in anyway.
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