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Here is a song i just recorded. Tell me what you think.
    #5156132 - 01/08/06 08:36 PM (18 years, 2 months ago)

Posted this in the Pub but i might get some better feedback here. Any constructive critisism welcomed. :thumbup:

Its still in the polishing stages, structuring, etc. but thats the jist of it.

Lemme know what you think.
http://home.comcast.net/~obsidian2215/record.mp3


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Re: Here is a song i just recorded. Tell me what you think. [Re: sui]
    #5168018 - 01/11/06 03:42 PM (18 years, 2 months ago)

Rad. Unique. I like it.  :thumbup:

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Re: Here is a song i just recorded. Tell me what you think. [Re: lysergicide]
    #5168024 - 01/11/06 03:43 PM (18 years, 2 months ago)

To be honest, I'd really like to have a studio version of it if you had a full band and had lyrics.

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Re: Here is a song i just recorded. Tell me what you think. [Re: lysergicide]
    #5175203 - 01/13/06 01:35 AM (18 years, 2 months ago)

Im working on puting the full band together. Im gonna start meeting ALOT of musicians at my new job.


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Re: Here is a song i just recorded. Tell me what you think. [Re: sui]
    #5175272 - 01/13/06 01:56 AM (18 years, 2 months ago)

melodic and groovy :cool:

let us know when it's finished (full band):D

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Re: Here is a song i just recorded. Tell me what you think. [Re: sui]
    #5175281 - 01/13/06 02:01 AM (18 years, 2 months ago)

Hmm, I like the style of the song. But it seems to be missing something. Sorry if you don't take criticism well :grin:

Don't worry though, I like it :thumbup:

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Re: Here is a song i just recorded. Tell me what you think. [Re: Captain Loafy McPoopdick]
    #5175319 - 01/13/06 02:22 AM (18 years, 2 months ago)

Quote:

Loafy said:
Hmm, I like the style of the song. But it seems to be missing something. Sorry if you don't take criticism well :grin:

Don't worry though, I like it :thumbup:




no, no, your completly right. It is missing something. Im still working on the solo. Now that will be fun. :cool:


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Re: Here is a song i just recorded. Tell me what you think. [Re: sui]
    #5178235 - 01/13/06 08:27 PM (18 years, 2 months ago)

thats a sick riff.

truly andrew-esqe shreddin


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Re: Here is a song i just recorded. Tell me what you think. [Re: Quankus]
    #5183125 - 01/15/06 11:20 AM (18 years, 2 months ago)

it doesnt sound too similar to my old stuff does it Quankus? I was tryin to go for something a little different this time.

It should be finished within a couple weeks. :thumbup:


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Re: Here is a song i just recorded. Tell me what you think. [Re: sui]
    #5183841 - 01/15/06 03:02 PM (18 years, 2 months ago)

thats awsome man. but ya u do need to rip up a wicked solo in there. :yourock:


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Re: Here is a song i just recorded. Tell me what you think. [Re: sui]
    #5286830 - 02/10/06 06:25 PM (18 years, 1 month ago)

why is it so quiet?

but yea kul melody/progression. something to fill in the middle is needed though, a solo as the others mentioned would be great


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